By Erios909
In space, isolation is a slow killer. Company quickens the pace
Waking up adrift in an ancient battleground, Alex is left dazed and confused with no clue how she ended up trapped aboard a failing vessel. With only a mysterious voice in her
Crash Landing is a story with an interesting premise that loses out on execution.
The story is about a futuristic magical society where the worth of children are decided at the age of 10. A cruel world which the MC must face or risk being sent to 'that planet'.
Inspite of the beautiful writing and no gramatical errors staring in the eye, what problem this story faces is marketing. It is a sci0fi fantasy story with no isekai and no game-lit. A hard sell for the SH audience.
Sure there are plot-holes in the story. For instance the amount of maturity that the story expects from eight-year olds is unrealistic and the worldbuilding could be improves.
This could be a hidden gem for those looking for a change of pace from the general norm. But let's just wait for a few more chapters first.
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