Summary: A Quasi-SI character gets thrown into an amalgam-universe of just about every Superhero Comic you can think of mashed together. Given a limited choice of powersets beforehand, they make the best they can of the options before diving into a world where half their meta-knowledge is useless or outright dangerously inaccurate. Follow their adventures as they land in an altered Gotham City and try to figure out what the heck to do with the new chance at life they've been given...
Even though it's a mix of a ton of different stories, it is very well thought out and put together.
It's actually one of the best thought out stories compared to like 95% of other fan-fiction, even if the author doesn't have a plan for the future of the story, they have very well thought and put together the entire story and made everything feel like one world, with various lore tweaks, etc.
I quite enjoy this story and hope that it continues, even if the author doesn't know how to continue it, just day to day slice of life filler would be enjoyable, like maybe the MC (for the PR) becomes an E-girl streamer, lmfao ?
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This was a great read and I hope the Author continues to write more for this fic as its a great read with an actually well written intelligent MC that fully plans and prepares for her future and conflics.
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Nothing to say, good fic, waiting for next chapter.
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I very much enjoy this story so far and I can’t wait for more chapters! (There so few!!!!) Grammar 9/10 great flow of wording character introduction and descriptions some are a bit complex and with how many characters hard to remember them all (so much backstory) Storyline 8/10 very good building and creation of the world and major characters good plot point goals create super team, city dynamics, major goals/why the character is doing this. Character 7/10 great creation origin for MC and thought process and emotional range little bit of smart ass character and realist. &Nbsp;
My drawbacks The emotional toll regarding the male to female is there but sort of on the back burner and how she interacts with others and her POV is a bit disconnected for example she says she afraid/nervous/scared but then uses her skills to immediately act fine or different which makes sense but feels overused and separated to internal dialogue maybe like a crutch? And regarding her abilities about her senses is a bit weird for example she can hear all these murmurs or smell scents much more powerful but doesn’t change her behavior on the negatives. For example when she fought the KGBT to the smell of oil drugs or body odor or hygiene I think those should take a toll or affect her behavior make and female side dude smells bad even more distaste or indifference girl smells good she’s more appealing then others since she chose F mirko there should be animal instincts but none have really been mentioned.
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