Ever since I was a little boy I always wanted to stand on top of the world.
I always felt like if anyone could do it properly, it would be me.
But can one man really conquer the entire world? All seven continents under 1 name?
No one has. I will
Am I the savior?
Or am I simply the Anti-Christ?
This is a story about ideology and morality. About the people who build movements and the people who get consumed by them.
This Book is “my” first step towards building "Nirvana". "My perfect world."
Trying too hard to be different with the first chapter. But its acutally good..... so I cant even complain....
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You write like u've never written a story before. The bold the larger caps, its hard to follow if someone is used to reading normal text and stories. BUT even so this story has so much soul its ridiculous. Idk I dont think you'll blow up because your writing style is going to be a turnoff to alot of readers. So your kinda f**ked. But the story itself? Its so interesting. Like I binge read, The characters too its ridiculous. You did a great job making everyone feel unique and unbiased in the context of them being humans. Its such a dark seinen and a long burn. U introduce the characters as if everyones important and there is NO ONE MC. Its like weird antagonistic pairs. Liam+Mr. N Osprey and Mori, James and Demi, Like holy sh*t dude. ITs SUCH a unique approach. Its like every arc has 2 characters. And as time passes these pairs start to interact with each other and its comes together so well. It might break reader immersion bc people are used to following 1 or 2 characters for multiple chapters. So 30+ chapters without the "MC" might be a turnoff but this story has a weird naturalness to the chaos thats beautiful makes it feel real. Good sh*t. Looking forward to more stories from you after you finish this ngl. Prolly not a deserved 5 star but I see past the terrible flaws and pay attention to the narrative aspects.
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