30.9k Views 55 Favorites 22 Chapters 0 Chapters/Week 103 Readers 0 Reviews 33.3k Words Mar 13, 2024 Iliketrains12345 Mike was a 25 year old software developer, working at a big tech company, he finally got some time of!, which he would like to enjoy with his girlfriend Jessica. He had been dating her for about six months now, and he couldn't believe his luck. She was only 21 years old, but already a stunningly beautiful young woman; from her deep emerald green hair that framed her delicate features, all the way down to her hourglass figure and perky curves. Mike often found himself in awe of Jessica's beauty, as if he didn't quite understand how he could be so lucky as to have such a goddess by his side.
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With his vacation time finally here, Mike was determined to make it special and unforgettable. Through his uncle Ross, 51 years old, he booked them a room at the fanciest resort hotel in the Caribbean, with luxurious amenities and stunning views of the beaches - a perfect place to spend some quality time together.
Mike and Jessica arrived at the resort hotel, nestled in the rolling hills of the countryside. They had been traveling for days, and were both eager to get away from the hustle and bustle of the city and soak in the peace and serenity of their new home. The countryside was lush and green, and the sun shone brightly through the trees.
As they pulled up in front of the hotel, they were welcomed by an elderly gentleman. Mike recognized him immediately as his uncle, whom he had not seen in many years. He introduced Jessica to his uncle Ross, and the old man beamed. Mike could tell that his uncle liked Jessica immediately, and that she had made a good impression.
Uncle Ross was tall, had a big round stomach and had long fingers like a man who has spent most of his life playing piano. He had a kind face, but his thin lips also seemed to hint at a certain level of severity.
His hair was thinning, and he smelled like he had been sweating his whole life, like working a full day in the hot sun. Jessica found it endearing, and felt it almost so inviting that she wanted to give him a hug, even though it was the first time she met him.
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This is my first try at writing a netorare novel, honest feedback / critique appreciated.
I played a lot of NTR (Netorare), netorase and other kinds of games on F95Zone, which inspired me to try to create my own.
As a fan of AI and ChatGPT, I tried to use sudowrite to create a prompt filling in the gaps, doing multiple rewriting.
Story is heavily inspired by the game "King of Summer".
Enjoy!.
Edit: A few pictures of Uncle Ross, Jessica and Mike (Warning: might be NSFW in the future!) https://imgur.com/a/oB0GhPI
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