It is a cute 'girls love' short story... It is well written and fun to read... There really isn't much else to say.
You should read it, it is short and an incredible ride well worth your time
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To the author... I guess I could mention things like the world building is funny, but simple. I know the MCs are kinda insane and whatnot, but the whiplash of the numbers of dead not being blinked about... Including friends and family is a bit weird. Sometimes it seemed women in general, and especially those 2 women were the only important/smart people in that world... (Like no one in that world can make an anti golem ward?)
But I feel like I am just trying to find something to complain about in a nearly flawless short story and I am glad I read it.
A great way to spend an afternoon and a great example of why short form stories have a natural advantage.
The author seems to have a knack for saying what should be said and leaving unsaid what shouldn't. The story flows quick and lets the imagination carry the reader almost as much as the words. Speaking of the words, the sense of humor here doesn't leave one wanting. Wording and sentence structure work well towards immersion and keeping the reader going with some stops when the reader pauses to just, again, imagine.
Oh no! Aizen’s plan succeeded! Fortunately, Aizen succeeding with his plan was part of Yuna’s plan all along. Unfortunately, Aizen succeeding being part of Yuna’s plan was part of his plan all along. Fortunately, Aizen succeeding
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It is a cute 'girls love' short story... It is well written and fun to read... There really isn't much else to say.
You should read it, it is short and an incredible ride well worth your time
To the author... I guess I could mention things like the world building is funny, but simple. I know the MCs are kinda insane and whatnot, but the whiplash of the numbers of dead not being blinked about... Including friends and family is a bit weird. Sometimes it seemed women in general, and especially those 2 women were the only important/smart people in that world... (Like no one in that world can make an anti golem ward?)
But I feel like I am just trying to find something to complain about in a nearly flawless short story and I am glad I read it.
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A great way to spend an afternoon and a great example of why short form stories have a natural advantage.
The author seems to have a knack for saying what should be said and leaving unsaid what shouldn't. The story flows quick and lets the imagination carry the reader almost as much as the words. Speaking of the words, the sense of humor here doesn't leave one wanting. Wording and sentence structure work well towards immersion and keeping the reader going with some stops when the reader pauses to just, again, imagine.
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