I just can't feel that he cares about the characters or the people who he met. Like in his first 3 or 4 lives he seems like he is developing his relationships, but the next lives he takes a different route and he seems to forget about everybody.
This story acts like a real game and for me it hurts this story.
I liked the story but it got boring later on... By the way this might not be a proper review.
This story has an interesting premise but it was poorly executed. Trying to be many thing but in the end being none of them.
SHORT VERSION:
This novel is a fast pace novel with none relatable and blank characters, total misuse of the time travel, unimaginative unarousing s*x scenes and a story that fails to draw you in.
LONG VERSION:
The time lops instead of spicing up the story make it feel hollow, you are not worried about anything bad happening to the MC or the characters he loves. Instead they make him stupid (if he fails he will try again immediately in the same stupid way as before instead of trying to improve himself, he is even told this is what he is doing but he ignore it)
The main character faces no difficulties and has no relatable backstory. He becomes op immediately without doing anything. I believe that was intentional with the Adult, Harem and Smut tags but that is where the problem arises if that was the goal, the s*x scenes feel dry and not at all arousing.
Aiden Alexander Maddox was never what you’d call a ‘good guy’. With his hobbies including, but not limited to, clubbing, drinking, fighting, doing drugs, and occasionally accidentally seducing another man’s wife and snortin
I just can't feel that he cares about the characters or the people who he met. Like in his first 3 or 4 lives he seems like he is developing his relationships, but the next lives he takes a different route and he seems to forget about everybody.
This story acts like a real game and for me it hurts this story.
I liked the story but it got boring later on... By the way this might not be a proper review.
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This story has an interesting premise but it was poorly executed. Trying to be many thing but in the end being none of them.
SHORT VERSION:
This novel is a fast pace novel with none relatable and blank characters, total misuse of the time travel, unimaginative unarousing s*x scenes and a story that fails to draw you in.
LONG VERSION:
The time lops instead of spicing up the story make it feel hollow, you are not worried about anything bad happening to the MC or the characters he loves. Instead they make him stupid (if he fails he will try again immediately in the same stupid way as before instead of trying to improve himself, he is even told this is what he is doing but he ignore it)
The main character faces no difficulties and has no relatable backstory. He becomes op immediately without doing anything. I believe that was intentional with the Adult, Harem and Smut tags but that is where the problem arises if that was the goal, the s*x scenes feel dry and not at all arousing.
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