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Grave Of The Goddess
Grave Of The Goddess
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The Labyrinth was a test crafted by the Goddess, an unending and deadly place filled with worlds inside of worlds which threatend to devour any who entered. Many of the people who had tried to pass through to the final floor never even came close, a large amount failing on the earliest floors.

One soul fought his way through and managed to reach the final realm, facing off against the final trial and barely succeeding. In the end his life was the cost for that, and with a final breath he accepted the end of his life with dignity and grace.

Then he woke up.

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Artificial Intelligence Beastkin Elves Fantasy World Reincarnation
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      ShEsHy
      Status: v2c17
      Jul 21, 2019

      It's OK-ish. Read it if you're bored, but don't get invested. 

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      There are several inconsistencies:

      • The MC is reborn as an Elf, a species whose status has dropped to slaves during his absence, and he couldn't give a f**k about it (other than when others look at him as a slave), but later on he remarks how they're all his wife's children when he discovers a different species has advanced.
      • The floors appear to be static (changes don't reset), so why do any threats still remain? They could've easily cleared out the imps/goblins/other hostile living creatures from entire floors, especially with those return stones. Just send some experienced people to the first floor and mop up from there.
      • The whole lower floor = lower tech level thing. It would work if travel only went one way, but it doesn't, so it can't.

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      But by far the worst of it is

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      the fact that the MC's quest to bury his (in his perception) just-deceased wife starts with picking up a new woman. Seriously, just days after coming back.

      If the author ever rewrites this, he needs to remove Kazu. The MC picking up his daughters and going to bury/say goodbye to his wife/their mother would be a much better story than this.

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