While sneaking over to Antarctica to visit some penguins over winter break, a green bolt suddenly impaled the protagonist. He was instantly transported into what looked like a palace hall with hundreds of unknown creatures surrounding him. They would all soon find out that they were chosen to represent their species in a battle royale, in which they would become rulers of a realm. Tasked with building a planet from scratch with a limited amount of resources and species available, what ruler will be able to come out on top?
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Please give it a shot :p I'm a pretty new writer, but I'm proud of this one!
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After going through numerous novels of similar genres none can compare with the potential this work holds. You just jump right into it and the current just pulls you into the Author's imagination. Honestly, I can't place my finger on how creative this story is which influenced me into placing my second review (ever!). So I really hope that whoever reads this review doesn't take it as a grain of salt. The only downside about this novel which I absolutely despise is it's once a week update...
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This is absolutely phenomenal. Lots of great ideas, done really well. Always in anticipation what could come next! I got hooked very easily on it and couldn't lay down my phone until I finished reading. We'll done.
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Excellent work, waiting for more. The synopsis presented by the author is quite accurate, it is not the typical novel of a building that summons troops, it follows more the path of evolution over time similar to the history of the earth, of course altered but that is the idea.
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I really like the story and thought it would be nice to give it a review, so that hopefully more people come to enjoy the story. So first of all, it is a typical realm-managing story, as the title says. So the protagonist has to build his own realm, and then his realm needs to fight against other realms. But compared to other stories of the genre, you never have the feeling that there are some unknown mechanics or rules you are not aware of that strongly influence the character. So the characters decisions are reasonable and understandable. Besides the MC, we also get to know a few other Realmlords (they are called Seedlings in this story) and they are also depicted in a nice way and have unique personalities. The interactions between these characters are always interesting to read and further either plot or character progression. A nice addition to the realm management is that the author supplies drawn maps that help you visualize the realm and understand the tactics used against other realms. The fighting scenes and tactics themselves are also well written. Another plus for the story is that the author invests some time into researching the science behind a few phenomena to give educated explanations and reasonings while staying on a level that it doesn't turn into a science lecture. Another huge plus for me is that the author takes time to answer the comments of us readers. He naturally doesn't give spoilers and doesn't appear to influence these comments, but it is always nice to see an author that appreciates his readers. So read this amazing story and join us in the comment section at the current chapter!
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Hello, I just made an account to help the author by leaving a good review. This story is my current favorite! I visit scribblehub from time to time and there aren't many stories to scratch my kingdom building itch. This, however, is perfect. I binged it in 2 days, on the first I read 30 chapters, went to quit my job, came back and read more, on the 2nd, I caught up to chapter 51 (at the time it was the newest one). This story, while not a "normal" kingdom builder, is simply better. I found out that I enjoy it more when the MC is a God overseeing his creatures, rather than a down to earth ruler (hehe). I also really love the thought put into everything, from the creation of the world, to the character development of individual people and most importantly, enemies (seriously, too many authors portray the enemy as mindless evil doers). I can keep yapping about the other good traits of this story, but I highly reccommend others to read it for themselves. Also, does the author have a discord to join to keep up-to-date? I dont visit this site too often and would like to be notified of a new chapter ASAP. Tl:dr - Good, read it!
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TL;DR 6.5/7 - crazy good story, great- nay, grand even some might say. The synopsis is accurate & keeps being one of the many hooks that reel you back in every chapter. Lovable characters, intriguing world, great grammar & readability, & maybe most of all a loving author that clearly cares about the work itself. If you're looking for a quality ready & the synopsis piques your interest, it's worth the shot! Additionally, the author is one of those types that loves interacting w/readers any chance they get, which is heartwarming ^_^
Grammar 6.5/7 - great, good even [sic]. There's minor mistakes every other chapter or so, but they oft get fixed too quickly for you to see them since the author reads every comment (& thereby sees readers pointing out said mistakes).
Style 7/7 - it's superb, readability like this is encountered in the same way that one distant family member of yours is - once in a blue moon yet you wish it was every day, & you love every moment of it (hopefully, my condolences if this analogy doesn't work for you..). The author knows when a moment is serious, & when it's time to make jokes. Both are executed splendidly & are a joy to read. What you want to know you know, unless you don't. In which case it'll be used down the line in a spectacular way, or @the very least a satisfying one. Sentence structure makes sense & the pacing is just right, adapting to what is needed rather than strictly adhering to a fast/slow pace.
Story 7/7 - a setting that captivates you & only gets expanded upon, realistic interactions & reactions sprinkled w/a dash of humor, a world & its rules keeping you wanting to explore its workings, & characters that you feel for. What more could you ask for? Not much, yet as a limited time deal we readers have gotten ourselves a pro-bono freebie which throws in creativity that makes predicting what's going to happen nigh impossible (& then some!!). Alright well that's a bit of an exaggeration, but it is a genuine joy reading a story such as this one where you actually didn't predict 99% of the plot from the synopsis alone. Also, there's a few side stories sprinkled throughout, about characters we know nothing about - I love that sort of thing & wish there was more, but if you don't share that passion w/me fret naught since there's only about half a dozen of them.. If you do share this passion, I extend my sympathies, I feel your pain & am here for you should you need a shoulder to cry on.
Characters 7/7 - they go insano style.
.. Alright well for those who don't know what I mean by that, shame on you, but I'll be a good Samaritan for once & elaborate. I already mentioned how you feel for them & their realism being wonderous, but what I haven't mentioned is how lovable some of them are!! Well I have since I always write the TL;DR section first in my reviews, but that's semantics for another day. The MC is someone I could see myself being fast friends w/, simply a joy to be around. The main companions are incredibly adorable & you will fall in love shortly after they're introduced. The antagonists, well there are really only opponents here not antagonists.. But anyway, the antagonists are "the enemy", yet not one you'll really hate. Everyone's got motives that aren't contrived nonsense, & you see a side to them that there's nary a time light shome upon. All in all everyone's good, many are great, & some are grand. I've shed some tears for the grand ones, more than once, & I'm very proud to admit that. There is one character I.. Dislike is a strong word, but I guess I do slightly dislike them. They're not particularly important & I think many readers like them, but I did want to be transparent since this is an honest review. That said, tho I do dislike them, I will admit my dislike is borne out of personality clash rather than poor writing.
As a final closing remark, do make sure to read this if you're @all interested by anything here. I've consumed thousands of stories, & I'd put this firmly above the vast vast majority of them. I used repetition, so you know it's good. W/everything all wrapped up tho, I bid you my greetings. So long. Farewell. Auf Wiedersehen. Goodbye. I leave, & heave, a sigh & say Goodbye~~
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