The story is way slower then the last but only in terms of level. 

The world feels bigger or more alive? We can see how people near the MC feels about him and influence him. The world move and go without the MC being the center of attention. 

Unlike other story, this one doesn't follow a railroad where we know what's gonna happen next. We can expect things to go a certain way but we are never dissapointed.

Love your story telling.

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Now that I have finally caught up, I thought I'd give my 2 cents.

TL;DR: it's an enjoyable read with some dice rolls. For details, see below.

Plot:
The story is about a normal guy who was reincarnated into a fantasy world with a D&D system. But not only once, but twice. This is his second life in a world probably parallel to his first, in which he reconnects with people who haven't met him yet, but whom he holds in high regards.

Obviously, this gets quite chaotic, as his knowledge is only half-backed, considering that it is from a different world, and so we see him stumble though it, causing problems left and right, while mostly enjoying it.

To my understanding, lots of the happenings are affected by the author rolling the dice, and we can therefore only make guesses at what is next to come.

Characters:
The MC, Adam, is nicely fleshed out, with an aggravating personality and a mouth big enough to swallow the world. This, obviously, causes a lot of situations that go haywire and need to be resolved, often in a violent way, sometimes with even more talking.

He is pretty much the one that keeps this story going, fun, and interesting. Well, he is the MC after all.

The side characters, too, have all their own personalities, believes, and problems. Although there are a lot of them, and the focus is therefore quite a bit lacking when it comes to them.

World:
The world is your typical fantasy world, with lots of racism, political intrigue, and fights for supremacy/honor.

We do get some insight in different cultures as Adam interacts with them, and the diversity adds to the depth of the story.

Additionally, we sometimes get glimpses of events far away, happening to other people, though one of Adam's ability, foreshadowing future events.

Writing:
The writing is well done, and errors are almost non-existant. Pacing may leave something to be desired, since there are long stretches of Slice-of-Life in between the adventuring. Although I do enjoy his goofiness, playing with children and doing normal work, it may not be to everyone's enjoyment. (I'd wish to get as much downtime in D&D campaigns too, but it is rare).

The chapter length averages at ~1, 8k and is therefore decent, the release speed on the other hand is phenomenal with pretty much 1 chapter a day, sometimes even more.

System:
The entire world, is seen mostly through Adam's eyes which gives us lots of dice roll in combat, and even some in conversations. Those who like D&D will certainly enjoy this story, those who don't care can simply skip the rolls, since the actions and consequences are nicely described just afterwards. 

Personal 2 cent:
I like the story so far, since I both enjoy D&D and have similar values to Adam. Luckily, I put more thought into my words, otherwise my life would get pretty complicated, pretty fast.

I have often thought how this story would go if he hadn't found a strong defender who he found protection under. It would most likely either have ended fast, or gone a way darker route. I do enjoy the goofiness that is being portrayed as of now, especially since there are lots of darker scenes brewing in the background that he is mostly aware of.

My only real criticism would be that, since the world is so big, and he makes many allies, the side characters with him don't get as much screen time as they should. Especially during downtime, they appear to just fade into nothingness for a month or longer, only to pop up for a conversation, or similar, and to disappear again until they go out for another adventure.

In the last, what, 50 chapters or so? We got some more intermissions with scenes away from Adam. I do hope there will be much more of that in the future too.

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A great novel which builds on what the first book did well and improves upon anything. If you like slice of life fantasy with great characters (and a lot of them) then this story is for you. Loving the daily updates and I'm constantly looking forward to the new chapters every day. 5/5

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I am sorry but I just can't get what is so great about DnD and dice. RNG is the great idea to start off but just like with most things there are much better alternatives to it. 

Story is really hard to read. Unless you are a fan of DnD and all that comes with it getting through chapters is a slog that never ends. It might be fun for some but definitely not my cup of tea.

Writing itself is of alright quality in terms of grammar but nothing stellar either. If you're a fan of said things - check it out otherwise I'd not recommend reading this one.

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