And here is my first foray into digital arting! By taking my Kiana sketch, editing it in 3d paint, tracing lines over the lines, filling in the colors, and adding a new speech bubble with easier to read text!
A promising beginning. Let's hope it at least hits 60k words. Unlike other mtf isekai/reincarnation stories it seems to be well written. I would just prefer it if the parents knew of her previous life on Earth. I don't like when protagonists hide stuff like this for no reason.
The author need to work on story 6 things characters development and WorldBuilding and plot structure and dialogue and grammar and writing style and theme exploration be better and more golden
Absolute comedy gold from the first chapter and keeps on going! This is an absurd story that takes the OP trope and runs away with it, the author has taken the concept and turned it into something fun. There are too many that take the concept and milk it to be funny, but this makes it a lot more interesting by making it the punchline in a running gag of a plot. We are starting to see more serious issues cropping up but with this MC? Should be absolute fun. This is well written and properly spaced so I have no issues there either, so if you’re interested in a story that does something different with the tropes than usual give this a shot.
Alice is a girl who loves science and lives on Earth. Then, suddenly, she was punted into another dimension. A dimension where magic and monsters roam the land, and, for some reason, a System keeps dinging at her and telling her that her stats and
An editor at the prime of her life—and with maybe just a little too much free time—finds herself waking up in one of her favorite RPGs with no clue as to what’s going on or how to get back home.
This might be the part where others rej
A promising beginning. Let's hope it at least hits 60k words. Unlike other mtf isekai/reincarnation stories it seems to be well written. I would just prefer it if the parents knew of her previous life on Earth. I don't like when protagonists hide stuff like this for no reason.
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The author need to work on story 6 things characters development and WorldBuilding and plot structure and dialogue and grammar and writing style and theme exploration be better and more golden
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Absolute comedy gold from the first chapter and keeps on going! This is an absurd story that takes the OP trope and runs away with it, the author has taken the concept and turned it into something fun. There are too many that take the concept and milk it to be funny, but this makes it a lot more interesting by making it the punchline in a running gag of a plot. We are starting to see more serious issues cropping up but with this MC? Should be absolute fun. This is well written and properly spaced so I have no issues there either, so if you’re interested in a story that does something different with the tropes than usual give this a shot.
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