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The story has promise, judging by the tags. It is not at the point where we see what the tags are about — yet. Still, I can say what I have read so far.
The MC is a goofball with overpowered abilities. He is a bit too trusting, but seems to be using some sort of ability to judge people. So, maybe not so trusting as more of a relying on the ability? The other MC, the hero from the different world, is a sociopath that you would expect to find in an anime.
She attacked the MC for no other reason than because someone told her he could not be defeated. I don't believe that she is emotionally mature and there is room for her personal growth. With the MC helping her.
There are no info dumps, and close to no description of the world around them. I imagine it is an Urban Fantasy alternative Earth? If it is, there should be a tag saying so. Otherwise, it should be hinted in the world building.
The fight scenes are detailed. You can imagine every attack, they are vivid. The style is also good. The grammar, for the most part, is good, apart from a couple of slip ups. I left a comment with what I saw. Hopefully, they will be fixed.
This novel reads like a light novel. So, expect numerous overpowered characters.
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