The story begins with the protagonist awakening to unfamiliar noises and being cradled by a woman with blonde hair. As the days go by, the protagonist realizes that he has been reincarnated and that the young couple he first saw were his new parents. His main goal becomes to learn the language, and he gradually starts to understand the basic words spoken by the maids. He also learn that his name is Alfy, short for a longer name they can't recall. 

The setup for the story is interesting, you mentioned it was inspired by Mushoku Tensei, and I can see that. But I'm glad you just took inspiration and you didn't just copy it, the story has your own style to it which makes it good and doesn't feel repetitive to people who've read MT (like me).

The writing is immersive, allowing me to feel like I'm  experiencing the events firsthand. The mystery of Alfy's past life and his struggle to remember is intriguing, and it adds an extra layer of complexity to the story.

As I mentioned in a comment, I feel like the story could use some more descriptive writing, to make it even more immersive.

The characters are well-written, Master Rafine and Prisilla are fine additions to the story. The character interactions are natural and fun to read.

Overall: this is a good story for people who like Isekai with prodigy main characters, the story is well-written and has a good cast.

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The story is really good so far. Good pacing, good grammar and well written characters (+yan :D). Definitely the best work I've read in a while.

Great job author, keep it up!

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