Yep, this story is great.

Overall, the quality of it is excellent. The chapters are all very polished when it comes to grammar and spelling. They are also written in a style that is succinct but also easily includes humour.

The entire plot and the facets of it feel very well planned out including both the world building and characters which are brimming with life.

The first act is one of my favourite ever and while the first chapters are bit slow they do a very good job of building up the story and the expectations you can have for it.

Most importantly it has a very 'fantastical' feel in its world which can ironically be a bit rare in the fantasy genre.

If you're at all a fan of fantasy stories make sure to read this as it's one of the best I've read on ScribbleHub. Even if you aren't a fan of LitRPGs I can still venture to say you should give it a try because they are pretty non-immersion breaking and flow very well into the world.

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So far a quality story with a person facing several realities of their second life. The dark  elves are set up as a culture with history in a very believable way. There are hints of some much bigger scale intrigue going on

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