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For me, this is a story I quite enjoyed, with a protagonist I really liked, but it also has some problems (or at least things I didn't like).
On one hand, the protagonist isn't heroic (nor anti-hero) since she has plans for world conquest (and I like that) with her adopted family (Also I like that), but on the other hand, she's not that evil either (if we ignore the whole world domination and war crimes thing) since she mainly focuses on killing sinners (people who have done bad things), I hope he moves away from the "I'm a villain who only kills other villains" trope and make enemies of some (Goody Two-Shoes, sanctimonious people, or literally heroes [really good]).
On the other hand, I quite liked the story, but I would have liked it to show more of the battles, wars, and war crimes she participates in (they're only mentioned in passing) and less of the Olympic competitions. I also would have liked to see more s*xual content, rather than leaving it out by mentioning that she has s*xual escapades. Finally, I would have liked some romance in 95 chapters, especially for a story with "love" and "Yandere" in the title.
The problems mainly comes from: "it feels chaotic". Many times while reading, I lost track of the point of view. There are frequent shifts between first and third person, and although the story tries to maintain an air of intrigue and secrecy, it is so poorly executed that you often don't know what's happening, especially during flashbacks that follow random events or when characters appear out of nowhere, with no context provided for the reader.
If I had to give a verdict, I would rate this story a 3.5. It doesn't deserve 4 stars, but in my opinion, it deserves more than 3. Since I can't give decimal points, I think this story deserves closer to a 4 than a 3, simply because the story itself is good and I love the protagonist once you get past the chaos.
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