The entire world had changed; from flying cars to flying horses as the adventurers from the game became hunters in real life.
Nobody entered Love Heart Online expecting to be merged with their in-game character nor did they expect for the game to slowly influence real life in more ways that just economically. But when the first wave of people began to merge there were those who had no intention to remain hidden while many of those in the lower rungs of society decided to take a slice of the cake. By any means. It therefore didn't take long for the world to become like something out of a comic book - heroes flying in the sky fighting villains - if with a fantasy flare added in. Yet, before the world could even adapt to that, a second wave of chaos came.
Many who were previously worth nothing in society became champions across the planet, fighting off the dungeons full of monsters, after mana seeped into reality for unknown reasons. Yet that does not change the fact there was still a clear class division. Armor-Cordis was well aware of this fact as they worked for one of the core members of the HERO guild yet that did not mean they lived well because of their masters role. Abuse was part of their daily life (not just the physical or verbal kind) however none of this matter... Because they had a promise from their mamma.
With absolute trust in their mothers instructions they set out in the world to experience the lowest lows in human society - a situation that led them to eventually being picked off the street by the supposed Heroes. Even then they spent their time stealing as much information as they could since they knew it would come in handy in the future.
Or rather, it would come in handy in the past.
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Come read as a urchin rises to become a gluttonous white lotus spirit takes advantage of her future knowledge to rule two worlds and beyond.
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For me, this is a story I quite enjoyed, with a protagonist I really liked, but it also has some problems (or at least things I didn't like).
On one hand, the protagonist isn't heroic (nor anti-hero) since she has plans for world conquest (and I like that) with her adopted family (Also I like that), but on the other hand, she's not that evil either (if we ignore the whole world domination and war crimes thing) since she mainly focuses on killing sinners (people who have done bad things), I hope he moves away from the "I'm a villain who only kills other villains" trope and make enemies of some (Goody Two-Shoes, sanctimonious people, or literally heroes [really good]).
On the other hand, I quite liked the story, but I would have liked it to show more of the battles, wars, and war crimes she participates in (they're only mentioned in passing) and less of the Olympic competitions. I also would have liked to see more s*xual content, rather than leaving it out by mentioning that she has s*xual escapades. Finally, I would have liked some romance in 95 chapters, especially for a story with "love" and "Yandere" in the title.
The problems mainly comes from: "it feels chaotic". Many times while reading, I lost track of the point of view. There are frequent shifts between first and third person, and although the story tries to maintain an air of intrigue and secrecy, it is so poorly executed that you often don't know what's happening, especially during flashbacks that follow random events or when characters appear out of nowhere, with no context provided for the reader.
If I had to give a verdict, I would rate this story a 3.5. It doesn't deserve 4 stars, but in my opinion, it deserves more than 3. Since I can't give decimal points, I think this story deserves closer to a 4 than a 3, simply because the story itself is good and I love the protagonist once you get past the chaos.
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