A good story with a nice litRPG system and I enjoyed it a lot (love the attributes, skills, lvls, class and the caps on them are gold really fulling a perfectionist spirit), but it has its flaws.

The repetition of information, there are chapters in the early part with up to 10% of the chapter being the same information repeated again and again to the point that you think the characters are game NPC having just a few lines. This is a constant throughout the story, but is less of a problem in the later parts.

The MC does not really behave how the story dictates. In the 1st dungeon he is the hunter not the hunted! Yet before the 2nd one he is shaking with terror before entering... If anything he should be overconfident and exited, greedy for further power! Like riding his 1st bike, having his 1st kiss!!!

In the 2nd dungeon the boss fight feels like filer. Several chapters used on the fight and nothing much happens in it only for the MC to reveal a power he has been practicing of screen to kill it... Like 1st we have a boring fight then we are made to feel like an outsider with the MC having a life without us!

And what I think is a wasted opportunity. The fact that the MC has a lot of modern medical information and does not share it as much as possible with the inhabitants of the 2nd dungeon. Him just writing down the cures for a lot of diseases and modern medicines and there production would have helped that world a lot while at the same time making us really feel a doctors spirit. It is attempted to be explained with the danger of the inhabitants closing of there minds to new information that contradicts there current believes. But it does not fit as the cures/ treatments/ medicines would not contradict those believes till much further down the line, once they have become invaluable and people try to understand them further.

It could have even been a few sentences of the people praising him further down the line hailing him as the father of medicine. Making us as the reader feel that the MC actions have an effect on the world. Maybe even a system reward or better yet the true doctors spirit of helping people without expecting a reward (something that has gone extinct). Instead we get a shower at the end...

All in all a good story and I cant wait for more.

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If you're going to read this story, read more than just the first few chapters, and decide on whether or not you like it based on the premise because the writing does improve as the story progresses. I think this is 100% a good pick if you want to quickly binge a unique LitRPG.

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