A seventeen-year-old orphan working at a soup kitchen at Star Military Academy. He has fluffy dark green hair and dark green eyes. Has a sharp tongue when you get to know him but otherwise a nice guy who cares about his friends. Seems to be hiding a lot of secrets.
Otrio Attribute: Wind, Ice (Hidden), ???
Otrio Attribute: Earth, Light
The daughter of an innkeeper on Glassroad, Wan is a bubbly Siren with an extroverted personality that allows her to get along with pretty much everyone. She may not be the sharpest tool in the shed, but she's a hard worker.
Otrio Attribute(s): Water, Ice
The 39th Princess of Kraus. She is an exception to the Princess Selections and is estranged from all the Royals. She is quite reserved but will open up easily once you get to know her. Her goal is to restore her family's reputation and make friends who accept her for who she is.
Otrio Attribute: Fire, Earth
A lazy silver-haired Unicron from the influential Khan family Bauxite whose curiosity gets the best of him. He hates troublesome things but always ends up getting involved with them. He is mentioned to be good with technology, more so than the other characters. He has five siblings excluding himself but it seems like his relationship with his family is strange. He is Drew's roommate.
Otrio Attribute: Life
A Banana Leaf Harpy whose family owns a dojo. Her dream is to become a renowned fashion designer. She seems to be quite close to Wan. [Information regarding this character is incomplete].
Otrio Attribute: Light, Wind
A socially awkward Feline from Yerburn who happens to be one of Drew's roommates. He looks intimidating at first with his piercings and silver jewelry but cares deeply about his friends and family. He's started opening up to everyone in Drew's group and hopes to get to know them better. He's also known to be a skilled Swordsman.
Otrio Attribute(s): ???
One of the many planets in the Orion Alliance located in the Cerber System. Home to many races including Llelfs and Unicrons. Is made up of one massive continent with many Provinces. The capital of Kraus is Ozwarth which is home to the prominent Star Military Academy.
The capital city of Planet Kraus. Home to over 100 million people and where our main story takes place. Located on the Western end of the massive Krausean Continent. Ruled by a monarchy and one of the few planets to still have one to this day.
This story is developing pretty well, I'm definitely bookmarking it. However I have two gripes with it. The story is supposed to be set far into the future in alternative universe where we have already colonized many different worlds and have developed many advanced technologies. With that in mind the constant use of pop culture references is jarring and has no place in this setting it would be like someone today constantly quoting references from ancient Greece, Rome ECT. And everyone getting them. The other thing is that technology too underdeveloped for the setting. As I said its set far into the future where man has colonized many worlds but aside from a few things the tech they use is not out of place today, in fact its even worse in some cases.
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Wheeew okay, here's the tea
First few chapters are a majorrr turn off because author starts info dumping on topics that have a large impact on the story but not relevant in the early stages or maybe not really needed anymore because the reader gets the gist of the first few lines. Some scenes are forced and awkward, which I only got to appreciate when it's discussed again during times, you wouldn't really discuss about. Additionally, I got a bit peeved when I get assured that they'll be the start of something new for the future or the overly idealistic views of growth and self discovery (maybe the author is driving a personal message I would approve of if I wasn't pessimistic) yadda yadda cuz obviously he's the main character. So it took me the better half of the day to read through.
BUT!
Guys it gets better. Don't worry the plot gets wayyy better, writing improves a bit and I am now enjoying the story and Drew's progress and slightlyy angstly revenge. I'm surprisingly happy to read Heir de Winter which is a bad ass name.
Edit: f**k im craving smt like Heir de Winter cuz its kinda original for me
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This novel had been really inconsistent in updating, grammar, and plot. But all of this has been nullified by the last three chapters. My opinion on this novel has rapidly changed and I cant wait to see where it can go! Congratulations to the author for making such a nice story. (Sidenote: I hope that Elias and Wan can get together soon, and Aaron's current relationship with Sylvia feels forced.)
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I love how solid this story actually is. While yes it's got its holes for a non-professional story its probably one of the best I've seen. I constantly come across stories that are good or ok but I would say you made this one of my top 5
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