Hmm, I can't say much about the plot bc it'd spoil things, but what I can say that this is a very Unique approach to NC and it's problems.
The MC and her Mom feel very real, and so do many other major (and random) Nc dwellers in this Fic.
Feelings and Emotion are not out of place, and the actions and subsequent plot feel just "Right".
The only critique i'd have is that it felt like the Author had to first figure out how to write his story, the first and second chapter are written quite differently than the rest of them.
Nonetheless an awesome read, I can't wait for more.
I- lost her… I lost everything…
That was the day when she died, when my sister, Kana, died.
Reiko Kestui’s parents died when he was 16, leaving her only family member Kana. Kana, however, was very ill, she didnR
Hmm, I can't say much about the plot bc it'd spoil things, but what I can say that this is a very Unique approach to NC and it's problems.
The MC and her Mom feel very real, and so do many other major (and random) Nc dwellers in this Fic.
Feelings and Emotion are not out of place, and the actions and subsequent plot feel just "Right".
The only critique i'd have is that it felt like the Author had to first figure out how to write his story, the first and second chapter are written quite differently than the rest of them.
Nonetheless an awesome read, I can't wait for more.
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