Three Warriors.
One dungeon.
Limitless darkness...
In the land of Averix, one threat looms large over the entire realm: the great gaping pit in the earth known as The Everloft - a sentient dungeon with ten floors, all more gruesome than the last. For centuries this rot-infested chasm has lured adventurers to their doom with promises of riches beyond belief, only to swallow them one by one.
Now, in the cold breath of winter, three more unsuspecting mortals shall vow to traverse the darkness of the dungeon. And, while their motives might be quite different from each other, one truth remains:
The Everloft hungers. And they shall be its finest meal.
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Quite simply, this was brutal.
Aside from that, you have a very clear, even elocute way to tell a story. It goes without saying that you managed to gaine and easily keep my interest/attention as a reader.
My only fears are that this might just be too dark for my taste. Still, I will check out a few more chapters before making any conclusions.
The writing itself is prime quality.
I could see in half a chapter that you are a practised writer, with quite the experience and talent in the bag.
I would actually not believe it if you stated otherwise. :'D
The future contents based on some of the chapter titles are expectantly quite radical in nature, which can explain the three 1 stars. However, the difference in taste does not detract from the skill with which the story was created.
And so I can easily foretell that this story is deserving of a unquestionable five star.
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