tldr: This review will not help you. All I will say is that this story does not have any glaringly huge faults.

Not bad. Much better than what I can write. That alone gets you four stars.

I did a quick skim to test. It wasn't unpleasant to read. A bit too descriptive in some parts, a bit too much telling over showing, but to be fair, I wasn't reading too closely, and there's only three chapters. Some grammatical errors here and there, but I'm only bringing that up as there's not much to nitpick about. Sometimes it reads like this paragraph, frankly. Sometimes it doesn't. Long short, short long.

I will admit, I'm a bit biased. I'm reading Mother of Learning at the moment, which is undoubtedly better than this. And I would give that a stingy 4.5 stars. I'm trying to be unbiased, though, and this is getting off topic.

Honestly, it's not a bad story. I don't see too many flaws in this; it reads like a teenage/young adult novel. It also reminds me of college essays. There is a bit of a contrast in the writing style between the prologue and chapter 1, so start with the latter, unless you've really low expectations like me.

4 stars for now. Maybe I'll read this at a future date and give it a 5. Or maybe I'll have gaslighted the author into oblivion and end up giving them a 1 star just to lower their confidence even further.

On second thought, I will give you 5 stars, mainly because this is a new story and I enjoy knowing I have contributed to the manipulation of the trending system.

Congrats for reading this far. I just wasted ten seconds of your life. Progress. 

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I am excited for when you update this book I love it so far.

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