From the first chapter to the most recent, I have fallen in love with the author's dialogue. What I originally thought was a lucky meet-up with the nicest person on campus (a pretty common trope) was quickly thrown onto its head by a wonderful twist. The smut is well written and exciting, and the LitRPG elements are creative and interesting without their format being suffocating.

This story really is a treat!

This is definitely one that I'll be keeping an eye on. Thanks for writing this!

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I just binged this today. It has honestly been a great read.  I came for the smut, but I'm staying for the plot.

The power system is interesting and well thought out. Also the logic behind why they all have kinky classes doesn't feel forced at all. The smut aspect fluidly fits in with the story, not taking away from it at all. 

I'm excited to read more and see where the author takes the story and characters.

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Absolutely love this so far, great fun to read, super interesting character and there's already interesting tension and stuff happening. Can not wait to read further 

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Just finished binge-reading this and holy sh*t what a ride! You’re definitely not getting the recognition you deserve because this story is phenomenal.

There are many things I can praise, such as the interesting world-building and the way it’s presented without any exposition dumps but rather weaved into the narrative, yet still giving enough info for us to basically be able to tell what happened, even if the characters haven’t put it together yet. The unique premise of the characters actually having to restore the system rather than it just existing in the background. I’ve certainly never seen such a take before. I could go on, but I think there’s one thing I really enjoyed most of all:

How real it all feels. How real the world feels, how real the characters feel. The way everything is a bit of a clusterf**k, because that’s how life is. Nothing is simple and straightforward. Sometimes bad things happen and sometimes you don’t have any good options to make, and yet you have no option by to try your best. 

And, of course, the smut is amazing. I know it’s not everyone’s cup of tea but personally? I like my smut with a heavy side dish of plot and you’ve really delivered excellently here. 

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An interesting Lit-RPG, smutty girl's love, noble academy web series. My biggest praise is that the story and characters all flow very well at a mostly smooth pace with a few jumps forwards as the dramatic stakes raise. The smut is also all very nice that balances taste without overwhelming the actual plot.  

I like the character relationships on the whole. Everyone is 20+ in age. It is a girl's love story so all woman, and cis women. The key ones are lewd as befiting a smut story. But, the suthor balances an attractive character with the social pressures every character expereinces. So not all the smut works outs. It is an elite noble academy setting with a commoner MC. The romances are thus fraught with angst, and heartbreak. All the main women have some kind of dark, emotional burden that weighs them down and to unpack. Where the smut works out more often there is tension that it may all fall apart due to socieital pressures. The MC is very 'hungry' for more smut so pursues many interactions with a wide, and varied cast of woman. It is very good. 

The world building and setting is good with interesting lit-rpg power system that blends being lewdly wacky without being overpowered. This stories really leans into and relishes that the characters are strong, but not overpowered. They are heroic, extraordinary, but mortal. The world building has evil factions, the system, the imperial, noble academy, criminal groups. All of them work well with perhaps being some room to really make them spark into conflict. The priority of mystery so important to keeping the reader engaged does keep some the factions a bit static. The actual setting has some fine details keeping it interesting and lived in. 

The writing quality is overall good, with decent grammar and spelling. I, personally, think the action should trim down the description for short, snappier sentences, and keep the paragraphs for one character, then make a new paragraph when switching characters. That is my opinion. Too much details can overwhelm and dull action writing which is already chaotic, and moreso for group fights. As other reviews mention the dialogue is very good. I would add description of moments of pleasure be it food or otherwise shows a care of craft that does appear on the page. 

Without going into much spoilers or details, Book 1 is overall a more dramatic, impactful story combining introductions, and powerful big bads to be a hard hitting story. Also very lewd, and smut as a gradual progression. It has a save rhe sytem momentum that is lost (in feeling) after book one. While book 2 has common sequel problems of being a developing continuation with lower stakes. It has has the depower trope, and it does make sense within the story, and allows for meaningful storytelling, but still annoying. Both are good, but book one was my perference. The story does go dark at points, but the main group do have that luck, and plot protection to carry them through. 

The current book 3 takes pushes for a coming drastic change which while it is needed for the story, it hard to make sense of how it would apply to colledge/uni students during their first year. Maybe if it was a widespread volunteer drive (world war styles). In story they are cherry picked likely for scheming and political reasons. The execution is decent with room for extra flavour. Overall the move is a much needed push for more drama. It is too early to make much judgements. It is a good continuation of the story so far, and I would forward to reading more, if the author feels eager, able and health to return. 

Book 3 looks difficult thing to write. If it goes darker there is a lot of drama to explore, but this is a smutty girl's love story. It might be hard to explore that during a war arc. Especially the mutli group pov. 

So, currently as of writing, rhe story is on a hiatus. The chapters do feel like they get shorter as the story progresses. I noticed moreso starting with book 2. In part this seems like the struggle of a multi-weekly upload schedule. In part by the creation of a new series by the author. I have no judgements to make here. But it is important to note for any new readers. My opinion is that any free web novel is a generous act by the creator. 

Overall, good work author! Five stars!

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Binged this up to the current chapter and loving it. The way the author handles relationship dynamics and kink is so refreshing. Excited for new chapters whenever they may grace us.

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