A decent story that gives off a lot of similar vibes to xuanhuan Chinese Novels, though we don't immediately follow a protagonist seeking to transcend the heavens.

The writing style is promising, but mechanically needs polishing and TLC from an editor. There are sentence structure issues and mischosen words scattered throughout, which could be a potential turnoff. If they were fixed though, I think that it'd be a really enjoyable style. 

So far, the story is still in the prologue arc and setting up the groundwork for what comes later. Because of that, it's not too clear how things will go, but I'll tentatively rate it a 4 due to the story's potential.

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