Hey, I just stumbled on your writing. You have a lot of flourish, which I like. With a little editing, it can really shine! I'd be happy to help, if you need any. Will drop a rating when I've caught up with the latest chappie.
I hope it doesn't disappoint but it's not strange to get bad ratings, I've had plenty of them on all the books I've written, it doesn't matter that much.