That's great

While I will say that I think I prefer Dragonfire- Lysette is also an amazing story. (Although I've kinda forgotten most of the first book's plot by now...)

Very much looking forward to when you start posting it again  (however... I do have a question~ will Mirae be introduced any earlier in the rewrite? No complaints either way, I'll just miss them.)

I don't know if I'll post it here again, since it's being published.

Although yes, they will.  Big mistake the first time around.  Now they are introduced in Chapter 15 instead of 40, and get a lot more screen time in the rewrite, along with more time for me to expand their character arc.

 no- no way!

 double or nothin.

Glad we could come to an agreement 

 I've got finals coming up

Got to finish a research essay on how legalisation against Obeah delegitmizes Carribean culture in order to reinforce a colonial framework... (I have no clue why I chose this topic.)

Then I have exams in logics, great philosophers (this is worth 60% of the grade and I have no clue what the exam will cover. Scary class.), feminism, and applied psychology.

I'll be back to commenting... in a few weeks? (I don't know specific exam dates yet.)

All good, and good luck!

Your writing is great, so I followed a soon as I noticed the story being updated here (but my phone was dead so I didn't see for a while... still- now I can binge the story here!) 

@empress_omnii That's a lot of pressure to live up to; I hope the story is not-bad as you're expecting.