Welcome back and happy holidays!  I liked what was there but you're right about the overall mood/tone of the story.  Might work better if you go for a morally indifferent/grey MC as opposed to an evil one.

You are correct , but I was thinking outside normal fiction based entities, fanfiction Overgods, Sparked Jumpers, or even literally any entity that played a CYOA and got a total limit break perk. That would mean time is a suggestion, but more importantly, so is the mental integrity and mental continuity of the protagonist. Such beings could literally existence-rape the MC and he could do nothing about it. 

Unless in the future he becomes an existential constant, in which case he probably survives, but in a sorta 'trapped and unable to escape while suffering because you still exist' scenario.

Actually, he would start at the beginning of one single instance. As soon as he hit the point where he dies within that instance, he would not be reset to the next instance and would move on instead.

That one way to go about it. I'm gonna assume some sort of absolute 'upon death move on' regardless of contingencies. I like that.

Damn, congratulations!

 The absoluteness of knowing you said it is complete has broken a little something in me I think… and at the same time… Congratulations Bro! That is one that I know has been hounding you for a while in ensuring you have the correct wording and flow.   Now to dig in and read it lol!

Merry Christmas bb 

Mrry crshlr

Right back at you.❤

You are the absolute best Boku! I've been dying for more AMP and I get two chapters? Best Christmas in a decade

Honor Harrington? I LOVE YOU ❤️

I've gotta agree with Dave, because this made my year

Wooooo!

take cover

The wind is already picking up. 140 km gusts is going to suck.

Prep the gen, get groceries, stay warm and safe friend!

Stay safe, you devil, you! 

My new diabolical scheme: 

The first thing I'm going to do when I'm rich (hopefully soon or ever) is to get you one of those mini PCs you can carry anywhere, a solar power generator, and starlink connection so you have power and internet access anywhere.  😇

Then I'll watch you give in to your writing addition, so I'll have endless content to read. 😈

@Scarecro ... if we are going to dream about fantastic things, how about we just dream BB into an uber-healthy body, piles of money (and free time to write) and tropical climate with a solid internet connection. That, or we can just skip to our isekai system-enhanced new life... I call BB for my team (every team needs a solid thoughtful bro)!!!

@TDM you know that if you were to isekai with bb, you would enviably become a busty girl, right? The power of the horny can't be denied! 

He wouldn’t… but… bruh… ugh. Yeah, he probably would.  I’m not personally into switch fiction, but if permanent, if I had a decade or two to adjust, and I wouldn’t be shunted back into a man. … meh. Whatever.  Advantages to either sex.

Dude are you Elijah Price or something?

I definitely feel like it. As time goes on, I'm just getting worse and worse. Told my doctor and there's not really anything to be done except stay hopped up on over-the-counter pain meds. Since they don't really do anything for me, I'm pretty much out of luck.

Some day, maybe this year even ^^

I responded to this already. It's a few messages down. I'm only at 15,000 words with the next chapter, so it won't be soon.

YIPPEEE HP