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An Author For Fun
I read a few dozen light novels and wanted to write one without any prior experience or probably sufficient vocabulary. I am a teenager who is a non-native English speaker. I haven't seriously written any stories both in my native language or English. So any suggestions or criticisms on my storytelling or grammar would be appreciated, though please keep in mind that I am an absolute beginner in writing and about elementary or middle school level proficient on English, compared to native speakers. I hope that you have a great day!
Well, shit. I think I am about to die like Elliott.
Goodbye
—The Imposter Author
Hah! I didn't die! And my stomach is better than ever!
Gimme a chapter!!
I don't think there'll be new chapters very soon. I realised that I am utterly incompetent in creating a working dystopic society model in a fantasy setting. I can go with a more generic society but then why bother writing, really. There are already thousands(?) of generic isekai stories anyways.
In addition to that, I mainly want:
A lesson to be learned from reading the novel,
The novel to have characters with real philosophies or ideologies.
Sadly I am not quite good at figuring these out as well.
So ultimately, I don't really know where the story should go; and how. Since I don't want to add another terrible and generic story to the genre, I will continue posting after I have enough wits to be able to create a functioning world.
I am slowly building little pieces of it daily but I am not sure when I will post again.
Ok, take your time
10th chapter up. I have taken an unorthodox turn on my story telling, tell me if you liked it
New chapter up.
Please check the latest announcement to decide the fate of the "split personalities"!
My exams will be held in 3 days, so a new chapter in 4 to 5 days. After that, I will start publishing more consistently.
I like turtles 
I like rocks
close enough
paragraph was a ref to, but also cuz im waiting for ur ch to stack up so im not caught up w ur story so far
Aside from the skill and magic lore this chapter was something built from scratch
ch8 on the noble wanting to be a commoner was done well actually. u explained why she would rather be a commoner than be a political baby maker chip. After all grass is always green on the other side. I think the whole ch was well done, minus the actual style, it was kinda confusing, and i didnt know who the last
I have heard that from @Stonelight and @BlueEarth as well. So I removed the random symbols and made the part where she and Alp met narrated through Alp's POV. Could you guys tell me your thoughts on the changes, when you have the time?
New chapter published.
For the sake of being 8th at trending despite not posting for a week, I shall publish the 8th chapter at 8.28 pm (+7 UTC)
Hey fiend can you stfu ? do a direct message to the author if you want to share your ideas so badly. I was waiting badly for the updates and you spoiled it. WTF is wrong with you ?
eat a dick, hes not using a single idea I mentioned. Not to mention if it was all spoilers, my dude would have deleted all the comments from his channel if he was using the ideas. @Shadow_Tempest
sorry @FIEND
No worries man!! sorry for being rude as well, i deleted my comments to avoid confusion form his page
Well. That de-escalated pretty quickly
and i do mean that the novel he who fights with monsters is trash and im ranting to u
i meant it to u? all the best to ur writing
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An Author For Fun
I read a few dozen light novels and wanted to write one without any prior experience or probably sufficient vocabulary. I am a teenager who is a non-native English speaker. I haven't seriously written any stories both in my native language or English. So any suggestions or criticisms on my storytelling or grammar would be appreciated, though please keep in mind that I am an absolute beginner in writing and about elementary or middle school level proficient on English, compared to native speakers. I hope that you have a great day!
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