I'm a normal guy, with a recently gained writing hobby. I, of course, would be delighted if you support it with your extra money that you don't know what to do with it... Well, my novel is of the cultivation genre, and it is more focused on romance. Give it a try, you may like it! Its name is "Heaven, Earth, Me"
... (looking at something)
*Shake head in silence*
I won't say anything.
I only agree with the third point. It is true that close-ups are more popular nowadays. Thanks for the feedback!
It's the "big melons" in particular.
And in fact, now you zoomed, the flaw is even more obvious.
I don't dislike big but it's obvious from this artist he is not so strong at drawing breasts. Beginner error of "it looks like they are just stuck/added on body" = not natural feeling
2nd relooking on zoomed cover
In fact i can even add (sorry to the artist in advance of my words) : it seems like (s)he just randomly chose the position of them. Because looking at HER left breast, the position is not correct.
1) Her shoulders are too frail and even malnourished. And then there is the face. Perfect but problem the body is "IRL realistic". It is a mix that can never mix. Like a cosplayer wearing anime eyes.
Reason i didn't detail so much with my first post. Is because there are TOO HUGE flaws and explaining, risk creating "troubles".
It's like a scene of a beginner genius creating a good work and happy about it. Exposing the problems would just "pour cold water" and hurt both emotional the creator and the exposer (guilt)
The illustration will take more time since we had some problems in communication. It should be done for the 17th of June, a day before my birthday~.
What the hell is that animation quality!? So fluid, so beautiful, Wow. I'm speechless.
Trailer of hololive alternative
Possibly they gonna release a game as the "original girl not a Vtuber" 's info mention she is "customizable main character"
Also indeed the quality go through the roof XD
Hololive's profits are high = easy to spend a lot
1) Recent animes (and mangas/manhwas) art are crazy well drawn
2) Animators know the IP hence more easy to succeed. Arcane is an example
3) They also do clips fitting characters (duck subaru/WatsonxGura)
But the best is the song.
What kind of creators did they hire to get a so powerful masterpiece like that ? oxo
First in trending again~ Thank you all for reading!
The re-do of Yasenia is advancing, I expect it to be done by the 12th or so. Let's hope the current illustrator portrays our dragoness right!
Gratz !!!!
btw i got a example of how a cover is quite fundamental.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Akebi%27s_Sailor_Uniform
Lot of people probably know this really popular anime but look at first cover of the manga. Even me didn't read it because of that despite later covers being better. Usually i near always have read the mangas before animes but this one somehow wasn't because of the cover
Because when it appeared in manga websites, the cover gave me the wrong impression it was turn out to be a full-drama school series. Just like old mangas that had this style of drawing. The sentence of "I want to get friends" also didn't help as it gave a bad premonition her school-life gonna be hell.
Edit : Common logic + quote of a CN
"The first impression is fundamental for everything. And when someone got a first impression for something/someone, it needs a really big effort to erase it"
Cecile's illustration is completed! The full image will be on Patreon, and I will upload the partial image in today's chapter. I hope you like it~
Huh? Wait I'm first on trending?
CONGRATULATIONS !!!!!!!
oh today it's at 8th place
Found. It's called "waifulabs" i think.
Look : https://www.scribblehub.com/read/221239-returning-transcendent-opens-an-idol-agency/chapter/222772/
bottom of chapter
Try to experiment with it so you kinda got a prototype of the designs of the characters
Could help having the drawings of them done faster if you give the prototypes to an artist
I prefer... 梵修 <- this guy/girl. The one I linked below to you.
IMPORTANT ! (me rushing back for this comment)
You must pick a cover that exude erotism. Previous one exuded a ton because of a special charm from it's drawing style (which fitted the FMC by coincidence) Without even knowing the plot
See this cover in front page ? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/422807/villain-with-netori-system/
If the previous cover is 20/20, this novel cover is 13~17/20 in comparison
PS : now i see why you don't want animeish cover
Okay, I'll take into account all that you told me. Thank you for taking your time to write~. https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/5438311 This user picked my interest. So if my current illustrator isn't up to the challenge again. I will certainly contact this one.
Good good.... (palpatine voice)
Try to see if you like : User https://www.pixiv.net/users/5438311
https://www.pixiv.net/artworks/97276740
https://www.pixiv.net/artworks/94623128
(recent works / old ones are lower quality and slightly no soul)
This artist also is really high quality : https://www.pixiv.net/artworks/66868734
Or you can ask this ones :
https://www.pixiv.net/users/73318055
https://www.pixiv.net/users/585981
https://www.pixiv.net/users/8821927
They got (Looking for requests)
5) Of course it is a hobby to write but as you know yourself, there is a ultra hard balance between "writing for yourself (author) and catering to the public"
And recently, not sure in other countries but anime is now mainstream compared to years ago
Even a jp politician is fine talking in a interview talking about Vtubers
Even the news announcer in japan can joke openly about having similar hairstyle as Yor
Most west High schoolers know about animes compared to thinking it's for degenerates
Also not trying to mock the artist you picked but they probably will never rival the first cover ever. The chinese female face image you picked is a masterpiece.
He is too "generic old school fantasy" type
It won't catch the eyes like the previous one did
The previous one had it's own charm that can't found easily. Beside "looking at viewer" tag and close-up, it felt like the image had a soul because of it's original style
Look at this : https://www.youtube.com/shorts/a0_PJltzyLg
to understand more easily
Offtopic : Just like american people don't really like blondes as there are dozens of dozens (a person said to me), asians are not fan asian eyes
Animes don't have asiatic eyes (unless its a particular character)
In short, i recommend to try finding a chinese xianxia character style or jpish
PS : don't try doing a poll in your novel to ask oppinions. Internet users are not reliable for most. Even me i am not reliable. Try asking to your patreons
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Hu Wenhua snorted, and then said expectantly: "Your Zhongshan Road Food Street in Guangxi Province ranks among the top ten food streets in the country along with Hubu Lane in our provincial capital. I have been famous for a long time, and tonight finally You can have a good taste!"
Okay, I've heard your pleas, and I've changed all the *Moan* in previous chapters here in ScribbleHub! No more *Moan*, now we have Aahn~, Ohh! guh! Hyan, and more! What a joyful day!
I didn`t complained before, though I prefer Aahn~, Ohh! guh! more than *Moan*, anyway I like your writing so much, please keep writing, also I know writing sex scene is very difficult as it`s requiring to be not-repetitive and hot all the time, that is why most authors nowadays avoiding writing detailed sex scenes and instead writing short ones or just teasing. sorry for my bad English. thanks and best of luck.
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Reading help to write better. To know how feel the reader pov. And to know "landmines" (bad writing) that authors sometimes do
Feelings is something both good and bad. Because of good feelings you can't see obvious problems. Because of bad feelings/prejudice you can't see the beauty of some things.
It's like having phobia of water and not knowing swimming is nice.
A new public poll on Patreon! It closes tomorrow, let's hear your opinions. https://www.patreon.com/posts/66447515
So... Do you like the new Novel cover?
Also mortrexo said he expected better. He was basically scammed for this one and i feel bad about it as random people i know can doodle better
That is why i tried to help Mortrexo find another artist.
Lastly, try finding some random people (possibly not friends) that often surf the net + liking animes/mangas, and show them the cover. I bet they will say it's not good looking
Also sure some ani chara got melon boobs but it is not discordant with rest of the body (unless for funny effect). They are attractive
Hestia, is short with big breasts but she is popular/attractive
Quetzalcoatl, the blonde from Kobayashi Maid dragon, got big boobs but it's to showcase her ero contrast with the shota
+ Ilulu, is simply comedy about having too big ones so people don't take care seriously
The only recent thing i saw melon boobs and being really weird
is the manga/novel about the protagonist being a "trickster" class max lvl, wearing a white suit + hat, hence at begin of the series, he finally can get the "sage" class. He will gets 2 shorty girls with mega melon boobs
Also i repeat, this novel is high quality
One of numerous reasons of the popularity is partially due to it's really perfect first cover that fit, that used lot of luck to find, with it's quality writing that made readers addicted
I feel bad that a favorite novel/author was scammed and is forced to use a bad quality 2nd cover
Analogy : It would be as weird if coca-cola switched it's red color products to a bright pink and company having paid 1m for the idea
https://www.pixiv.net/novel/show.php?id=8538628#1 (futa, FGO not incest)
https://www.pixiv.net/novel/show.php?id=16249355#1 (futa POV)
https://www.pixiv.net/novel/show.php?id=7444419 [3parts] (futa samurai x blonde isekai)
https://www.pixiv.net/novel/show.php?id=844237#1 (futa short)
https://www.pixiv.net/novel/show.php?id=16625895#1 (yuri short)
I hope it will help for writing
This ones are more for comedy : https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts?tags=mimonel+translated+&z=5
From same author "nonco" :
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2175636
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2274722
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2303403
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2629917
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/3020035
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/3411008
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/4357150 <-- This one is hot~ The rest are quite funny.
Yep
Somehow the quality is as high as Mimonel
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