The Incubus System Chapter 176. A Suspicious Royal Guard
09.21 PM
"Do you have to go home that fast?" asked Pearl who sat beside me with a pout. Her hand that was holding a warm damp towel moved to wipe my naked body, cleaning our naughty play traces from it, stimulating my skin with the towel soft and warm texture. But of course, she couldn't clean it all up completely, especially some hickey on my shoulders.
"Yes, I promised to --- Ng ... have dinner with my sister ... Uff --- and I'm already late." Some slight moans mixed with my words, since I endured the stimulation and tingling sensation from Mia's licks on my cock. My hand held the back of her head. While her hands hugged my waist.
To be honest, I didn't think that our game would take this long. That's why after Emma fell asleep, I quickly sent a message to Celia that I would be late. Shortly after that, Mia and Pearl woke up. And just like when I had sex with Diamond in the car yesterday, their faces looked brighter and their bodies felt more energized. That's why they offered to clean me. Although they cleaned me with damp towels at first, finally Mia cleaned my cock with her tongue since, ahem ... She was tempted by the remaining semen that stuck on it. Well, of course, I couldn't refuse it.
After that Emma's cellphone rang and woke her up. Since she picked up in a panic, I guessed it was a call from her father. That's why Pearl took the initiative to show her the bathroom so Emma could clean herself before going home, especially since she had just been playing with the whip cream before.
"Done," Mia said as she pulled her face away from my cock. Her tongue licked the remaining semen stuck on the tip of her lips and she sat on my other side. While Pearl took her hand away from me, indicating that she was also done.
"Thank you." I gave Mia and Pearl a kiss on their cheeks.
After that I got up from the side of the bed and put on my clothes, my eyes remained on Mia.
"Are you sure you want to stay here?" I confirmed once again. Previously, I offered to take her home, but Mia refused it and said she wanted to stay at Pearl's mansion tonight. Besides that, she asked me to take Emma home instead of worrying about her. Well, since she didn't know about my portal skill, so I couldn't say anything.
"I'm sure of it. Besides, I want to talk a lot of things with Pearl," said Mia with a reassuring smile. But despite her smile, I caught traces of uneasiness on her face.
"Okay. But please let me know if something is bothering you. I will help you as best I can." Despite my hands moving to button my shirt, my eyes looked at her in worry.
"I will."
* Knock * * Knock * * Knock *
The knocking sounds came along with the door opening sounds and we turned to look at it.
"Excuse me," said Emma politely. Her hand opened the door in hesitation. She looked more refreshed after taking a bath, also of course due to my Demonic Erection's influence.
"Shall we go now?" I asked. My feet went to the sofa to take my bag.
But before Emma answered, Mia interrupted her.
"Emma, can I have your contact?"
"Of course."
Without wasting time, Mia stood up from her seat, took her cellphone and they exchanged contacts.
"Thank you. I hope you won't mind if I call you to ask some questions someday," Mia said.
"Okay," said Emma. After that, Emma and I walked out of Pearl's mansion escorted by her butler.
"Is that also your ability?" whispered Emma as we walked toward the exit.
I quickly caught that what she meant was my Demonic Erection's effect.
"Yes. Do you like it?" I replied with a mischievous smirk.
She was silent with a flushed face, but from her expression, I already knew the answer. I chuckled at her expression. And her face was getting redder because of it.
"I want to hunt some demons tonight. Do you want to join me?" I whispered. I remembered I had promised to teach her how she could use her Mana Strike as a weapon and I thought this was a good opportunity for it.
In an instant, Emma's face brightened.
"I'm in!" she said excitedly. But then, she closed her mouth in reflex and turned to the butler who escorted us in embarrassment since her voice was too loud.
While I chuckled again. I could guess she was too excited since though she wanted to patrol, she couldn't do anything because the association confiscated her Demon Compass.
"Okay, I'll pick you up tonight." But of course, this time I wasn't going through the front door.
"I'll be waiting for you," said Emma with a smile.
After we left Pearl's mansion, I brought Emma with my portal skill to her house before opening my portal to my room.
'Incubus Form deactivated!'
[You have deactivated your Incubus Form.]
A dark aura covered my body as my feet moved through the dark passage. When I stepped into the light, I could hear Foxy and Celia's voices from my room.
[The portal has closed! ]
They sat on the side of my bed, facing their back to me.
“Are you sure he's okay?” said Celia in worries. Then she stretched father's damaged suit from my fight with the Imps a few days ago and I realized there was no blood on it.
"I mean look at these clothes ... He can't be all right."
"Trust me, master is a strong demon. He even can heal himself," Foxy said confidently. Her hands were folded in front of her chest and a proud smile on her face.
"Foxy is right, you don't have to worry about me." After putting my bag on the chair, I decided to join their conversation. My feet moved towards them. I couldn't possibly tell her that I was seriously injured a few days ago.
They stood in surprise by my sudden appearance.
"Brother, you startled me," complained Celia. While Foxy greeted me cheerfully.
"Welcome back, master!"
"I'm sorry. Did I keep you waiting for too long?" I asked.
"It's all right. The important thing for me is you are safe," said Celia.
My hand took my father's suit which was full of holes in her hand.
"Did you wash it?" I asked Celia.
"I am the one who washed it, master," said Foxy and I turned to her.
"Some demons have a sharp sense of smell. So I was afraid the blood would lure them here, " she explained.
"Really?" I was quite taken aback by Foxy's words. I thought only lust demons like me had a sharp sense of smell. I didn't think that keeping these clothes would endanger our safety.
"I'll throw it away now," I said in a panic. Without further ado, I walked towards the exit.
"We'll be waiting for you in the dining room," Celia added before I walked out of my room.
And I nodded in reply.
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I stood in front of the trash bin in front of my yard and looked at my father's suit, which I had put in a plastic bag.
"I'm sorry ..." I muttered before throwing it in the trash bin. After all, it was my father's favourite suit so there was a heavy feeling of throwing it away.
Just as I was about to return to my house, a Python in his 20s with neatly combed black hair and serious face approached me. He wore a neat suit and his black tail was combined with some silver scales.
"Good evening, sir. May I ask you something?" he asked.
"Good evening. Yes, is there anything I can help you with?" I said with a smile. I could already guess what he would ask. Besides that, I also found the oddity from his status above his head, that's why I used my skill.
'Observation.'
[Observation skill succeeded.]
[Name: Jonathan Silvertail]
[Age: 28]
[Level 22] [Race: Hybrid-beast]
[HP: 591/591] [MP: 115/115]
[Skills: Holy Barrier lv 5, Holy Whip lv 5, Sunlight Beam lv 3]
[Emotion: Worried]
[Love meter: 0/10]
[Condition: Normal.]
[Weakness: Chest, Neck, Head.]
[Talent: High Stamina (Stamina is higher than other races.)]
[Relationship: Single.]
[Profession: Serpent Rock Kingdom's Royal Guard.]
As soon as I saw his skills, I frowned in confusion.
'Why does he have similar skills with demon hunters?'
I know the R18 chapters are rather integral to the story, but I enjoyed this chapter more than the last 10 put together. The world building and character interactions are what really keep me interested.
I find joy in all these chapters so I’m all good
Well what is your liking are subjective. Some people are hornier than others. For me I don’t really like R18 for 5-6 chapters in a row, i prefer to keep it short. If I am really horny I would just go to Nhent@i
Like, the normal story and interactions with his women are fine. But when you start pretty much the exact same s*x game with Pearl or Diamond, and it lasts for 5-10 chapters even though most fights or other important plot stuff barely takes half that it's just super annoying to read.
Like, just do a small time skip when you're having them have their little games since it's the same as last time anyway. Leave the extensive smut scenes for important events. Like a new lover or a time integral to the story, or your sister, or whatever.
Interesting to see one of Mia's guards approach Ethan at his house. And I know the 'party' just ended, but... s*x with Celia! s*x with Celia! s*x with Celia! Been waiting months for this one =D
I know that this was discussed in the previous chapters in the comments and I don't care how many chapters 18+ come out, if they were released in 1 day and did not interfere with the main development of the novel. And so it turns out that readers have been reading po*n for almost a month. IMHO this is bad.
I thought I already discuss it in the previous statement. Here I will copy paste it once again.
From the beginning I had planned to upload this kind of chapters on Patreon, that's why I thought this was the last game I uploaded for free release. But after I read some feedback, it looks like more than 3 chapters R18 will be really annoying for some readers, so I will take 3 chapters as my max limit of R18 in the future and lock the rest on Patreon.
But then some of the readers said he didn't mind to have the R18 chaps and objected if I place it in Patreon. While my Patreon like it (They pay me). I will stick to 3 chaps R18 tho for free release. But here I will said, I'm in a difficult position where I have to make everyone happy and I can't do it. I can only do a little for everyone.
@Nanakawaichan
You absolutely can do it, you just apparently don't want to do it. I doubt that these "games" were written longer than 1 day and they could have been laid out in 1 chapter and those who do not like will miss 1 issue, and not as it happened the last time that the main readers abandoned the novel for a whole month. Although if you set a goal for a large number of chapters, then you can divide them into 2k characters and get 500 chapters out of nothing. No offense will be said, I read novels from a million characters and only 16 chapters and it did not soar and did not bother anyone.
@HaimaUrt I'm not a english writer. These games look simple, but I need to think what are they doing. How the MC reacts, how I can make him not too harsh, but not to make him too weak. Making a balance is more hard than you thought. I also have 2 others novels in going, sometimes I got writer block like everyone. Got sick since I also another job in RL . But hey, TIS never take hiatus from the first time I uploaded it. Your simple is not simple for me. So I disagree with your 'I don't want to do it'. Some other authors lock his R18 in their Patreon to get more money, but I release it for free with illustration and character pics. I made the chapters with good intentions tho, so all my readers can enjoy it not only my Patreon. But since I got my feedback,I already know what to do.
@Nanakawaichan
I believe that those readers who are on your Patreon are not there because there is R-18, but by transferring R-18 to a commercial basis, you will simply lose part of the audience.
@HaimaUrt But if you demand to upload all R18 in 1 go that mean I have to push myself and sacrifice my health. I better back to my old life and forget my writer self. 1,5-1,6 k words is my max limit.
@HaimaUrt I'm sorry, but really? We are getting this story from him for free. This is a unique system that you won't find outside of internet communities like these. Although the reasoning is that most of these stories are amateur stories by hobbyist writers, most stories of this quality people have to pay for. We have no leverage to make demands of the author, or shame the author for "not giving us enough", and by doing so, it makes you a Choosing Beggar.
@Nanakawaichan What level of patreon would have access to Dragon King's Harem and The Incubus System side story, you only wrote about the Demon Lord's Succubus side story on patreon.
@dilbertini I haven't made them yet since I thought I want to make all R18 free. But since this is an Incubus story, it will be more R18 later and based on this last games, it doesn't give good feedback so I will take the R18 train to patreon later. If you check my last Patreon chapter,you will also know why. I will announce after I release it in the usual announcement.
@Nanakawaichan I honestly liked the first 5 to 7 chapters but then it got repetitive and monotonous, and occasionally for fun and I believe in my humble opinion these games are used to rekindle a relationship in danger of breaking and the MC is not close to that point with them For a long time and both in reality and in fiction, the foreplay that lasts too long becomes boring and monotonous kills the passion, so I would recommend two or three R18 chapters followed by the main story, interspersing the plot with the erotic and When there are many female characters, extend the R18 chapters to satisfy the on-screen scene display of all the heroines and thank you very much for the chapter and I look forward to the next updates because I must say, you are incredible and I have nothing to complain about the novel this fantastic and I hope it continues like this this is the wish of a loyal fan
@Nanakawaichan and remember to take care of your health since many hope you are well and give them their dose of shawty XD
@godriak Thank you. I just a little bit confused since when I release this train in paywall, I got about 9-13 likes/chap in patreon. While usually I get about 8-10 likes/chap (20+ likes for confession chapters like Celia's and Emma's). With no complain at all. And when I uploaded in free release, what I got was the opposite.
@Nanakawaichan do not worry about them there are novels that not everyone can like, but I can assure you that there are many more people who like your novel, and those who dislike it will only be a few capilos no more and I'm sure they will they like the novel, and they expressed this dislike out of concern for the quality of the novel (which I have full confidence in nana-chan), if they didn't like it I would just stop reading instead of criticizing, so have more confidence in your writing now that you are an incredible writer
@godriak Thank you for your support. It mean so much for me
@Nanakawaichan One of the writers I follow is making several polls monthly so that he knows what his readers like/dislike or would like/dislike, you should do the same just like you do with the picture polls, that way you can avoid doing harm by meaning good :)
Also @godriak sayed it right, we only criticize what we care about, so don't take it too seriously, we still love the novel and you the same as before ;)
But before all you have to stay healthy, because if not then we will send Larry to nurse you and then you will truly realise what it means to mean good but do harm.
@Rommel