It was a long and hard battle for both of them, lasting well over ten minutes.
It began with a simple exchange of words.
“I’ve been hoping for a chance to fight you again.”
“Same here. Remember, no matter who wins, we’re friends at the end of the day.”
“Right!” said Srassa, gripping her blade. “No matter what happens, we’ll be friends!”
Momo nodded and gripped her beloved blade, a gift from her dearest grandfather.
Then it upgraded to a swift volley of back and forth replies, but they used their swords to do the speaking. It was as raw as it could be, with swipe after swipe and slash after slash, both meeting their opposite. Metal sparked against metal as the cheering of hundreds of people encouraged and strengthened their sword arms.
A few minutes in, Momo caught a lucky break and managed to block an overhead slam that threatened to bypass her defenses.
The strength in her opponent’s arms gave way, and Srassa backed up, choosing to focus on defense for the time being. Momo went to raise her hand for a Magic Missile, but she couldn’t even do that. Her arm was screaming in pain that it wanted to rest, that it didn’t have anything left to give.
In a huffed breath, Srassa spoke to her opponent. “Your…arms hurt…too?”
Momo simply nodded, “I..can’t swing it..anymore,” she said in between breaths. Sweat poured like a soft waterfall from both girls’ faces.
Srassa grinned and spoke two words, “I can!” and darted off towards Momo.
She’s incredible. Momo thought as she rolled back, avoiding a thrust. As Momo recovered to her feet, she was met with a Magic Missile that struck her in the chest. That forced the air to be forcibly evicted from Momo's lungs. Her armor protected her from any permanent damage, but the pain from the impact remained.
She went to the ground, clutching her chest as she tried to catch her breath. But that wasn't the only thing she did. Her hurried gasps and gulps of air were a curtain to disguise her true aim.
Srassa knew how crafty Momo was, and she kept her distance, choosing only to raise her hand in preparation for what her opponent may do.
“I know you’re pre-casting,” said Srassa, “I watched your matches very closely when we got to the finals.”
Crap! Momo got to her feet and didn’t know what to do.
I could use Magic Missile, but the moment I raise my hand, she’ll attack. Stupid Instant-Cast! Wait….what if I use a skill I don’t have. Like Thunder Snap? Yeah, that might work. If I do that, she’ll have to use a technique, but will it be Magic Missile, Thunder Snap, or Lucem? I can’t raise my arms to cover my ears or eyes. They’re so sore! But if it’s a handstand for a few seconds…. Okay, focus, Momo! Close your eyes and do your best to remember where Srassa is at.
Momo completed the pre-cast for Thunder Snap and shouted it at the top of her lungs. Srassa went to shield her ears after she used a Lucem of her own in retaliation. She did it so fast that it took a few seconds for her to realize she was duped.
I didn’t hear anything…. She doesn’t have Thunder Snap?!?!?!
Momo used that instant to sheath her sword, roll in, and transitioned into a handstand. Her end plan was to spin on her hands and used her feet to attack. Unfortunately, her arms gave out, causing her kick to be something akin to a diagonal slash.
But it worked out anyway.
She managed to kick Srassa's side and fell to the ground. Not wanting to miss the right moment, Momo transitioned into a roll, straddled her opponent, and held her hand to her foe's armor-covered stomach.
Srassa's sword was knocked away, sliding a short distance that neither could comfortably reach from their current position.
“I win!” shouted the Singi as she chanted Magic Missile.
She thought she had it in the bag….
Srassa’s mind raced back to the conversation they had just minutes ago.
Remember, no matter who wins, we’re friends at the end of the day.
Right! No matter what happens, we’ll be friends!
The short conversation played like a record, and Srassa uttered a single word.
“Sorry.” I’m definitely going to win!
“Wha—GGAAH!!”
Srassa realized that Momo did not pin her arms down, and she could still raise them. Taking advantage of that, she brought her fist up and clocked Momo across the jaw.
That distracted her long enough for Srassa to push Momo off of her. She didn't know what powered her punch. It could've been the growing anger at potentially losing to Momo a second time, or it could've been the regret she knew she would feel after the fight was over. She thought it was a dirty move, but Momo didn't see it that way.
Srassa went to get up, but Momo responded by sweeping her legs. They clashed against Srassa’s ankles, and she went down again but not before reaching out to grab the hilt of her sword. She managed to touch it with her pinky but failed to reclaim it. She did, however, slide it towards her a little bit, shortening the distance.
Not missing this moment, Momo straddled Srassa again, this time on her chest instead of her stomach. She immediately chanted and used Magic Missile.
Srassa coughed blood and cried out in pain. The skill didn’t penetrate her body, but since it was formed at such a close range, the heat produced ended up burning her armor, staining it black. In addition, Momo overcharged it with Skill Energy, forcing it to shoot out at such a high speed it almost pierced through the armor.
“Forfeit!!” screamed Momo, who prepared another Magic Missile. Sweat dripped down her face and into her mouth, covering her lips in the salty liquid. Her hands trembled from a mixture of adrenaline and excitement.
“No!! It’s not over!!” Srassa yelled. Her hands struggled against Momo's legs until her palm faced her foe's back. Taking advantage of her Instant Cast, she emptied her Skill Energy Reservoir after using Magic Missile four times.
They all hit the same spot, piercing through Momo's armor and burning a part of her flesh. But that wasn't the end of it. The impact of the last one had nothing to hold it back, so it inflicted the most damage it could, breaking the skin and drawing blood in the process.
Momo cried out. Her strength drained as quickly as the falling crimson stained the ground, and gravity took hold of her body. She fell on top of Srassa with a loud yelp of pain and deep breaths full of agony.
With all of her strength, Srassa pushed Momo off of her a second time. Somehow, the Singi used her training to convert the push to a backwards roll and got to her feet. But she wasn’t in the best shape. Momo's back had such a wound that it felt like a fire-enchanted saw was carving her spine, and there was a dull, throbbing sensation in her jaw from where she was struck. However, she didn’t retreat empty-handed.
“I’m… totally…tapped..out…” gasped Srassa in between deep breaths. Her Skill Energy Reservoir was drained, and any hope of using another skill was a pipe dream.
“I’m….not…” eked out Momo, who clutched her side. “But..it..hurts to…talk…” Momo teared up at the pain in her jaw, which suddenly seemed to intensify.
Talking....hurts...a lot...
“That’s how to stop…skills… Can’t talk…can’t chant….or…use…” Srassa looked down at her waist and realized she didn’t have her sword. She swore she grabbed it before Momo swept her ankles.
“Here…here…” said Momo, grinning even though it hurt. She had Srassa's weapon in her hand, leaving the Human with no way to defend herself.
“Haaa...” Srassa started giggling and realized she was at a disadvantage. Or was she?
“I can’t use skills, and…” she trailed off, trying to find a way to stall for time as she walked backwards. She needed two minutes to regenerate enough Skill Energy to let loose a single Magic Missile.
She didn't get it. Momo wouldn't allow her opponent the chance to recuperate even the smallest amount.
Momo dropped her opponent’s sword to the ground and drew her own sword, but it was useless. Her arms didn’t have the strength. She went to step forward towards her steadfast opponent and cried out with each step. One of her kidneys was damaged, and every step just multiplied the pain, but she never gave up. That thought never crossed her mind.
Srassa started walking too and eventually broke into a sprint. Momo did the same, even dropping her sword so she could run a bit faster.
Both girls yelled a mighty cry as they used the last of their strength to punch each other. All of their feelings and hopes and desires and wants and everything else-- their core being-- was put into their fists.
At that moment, the only thing that mattered was the girl who fought for herself and the girl who fought for her friend.
Perhaps that was the difference that decided it all?
The crowd went silent as their fists connected with each other’s faces and the sound of bone being cracked underneath such a pulverizing hit was audible to even Toni, up high in his announcer’s booth. He started commentating when the match started but quickly stopped. He was mesmerized by the sheer fighting spirit displayed by both girls.
Having given everything they had and with nothing left, neither girl had the energy to remain standing. Falling at the same time, a single voice of hope cut through the dark silence.
“MOMO, I BELIEVE IN YOU!!!! YOU CAN DO THIS!!!!”
Steadying herself, Momo remained standing. Blood dripped from her back; the same red liquid snaked out of her mouth, and her armor was soaked in so much sweat that it felt like it weighed a metric ton. Her arms stayed motionless by her side and her eyes closed for just a second.
But she was standing. Her opponent was not.
Toni shouted over the voice loudner, giving his immense thanks and praises to both fighters before declaring Momo the winner.
The crowd went wild, and Dineria rushed into the arena. Servi followed her.
The medics were already there. Three were using Remedium Lux on Srassa, and four were doing the same to Momo.
“Momo?” asked Servi as she got closer.
The Human medic that helped Servi spoke up.
“She can’t hear you.”
“Explain,” barked Dineria, who prepared her healing skill.
“Umm… Momo passed out.”
“Passed out?” questioned Servi.
The medic nodded. “It’s rare, but people can pass out on their feet. The damage they both sustained is healable. Though they’ll both have sore jaws in the morning, and Momo might want to take it easy for a day or so. If she gets all of her rest, she’ll be good to go in about two days. Now then, if you’ll excuse us, we need to take these two to a bed.”
Servi and Dineria nodded and moved out of the way. They went back to Fisher and the others and told them of the damage.
A few minutes later, when it was time for the reward ceremony, Momo was still unconscious. On Momo's behalf, Dineria accepted the grand prize ticket for a camping set valued at 600 dupla. That wasn't all. The mentor of the winner, also Dineria, received a cash prize of 1,000 dupla. Both gifts were presented in their own decorated boxes engraved with an emblem in the shape of a yellow bird.
While Dineria was collecting the prizes and saying a few words, Servi was sat right beside Momo. Using both of her hands to caress one of the sleeping girl's hand, Servi could only smile.
Shall we heal her? I mean, just a little bit? We’re alone, and nobody should notice. I don’t want it to be unnatural, so I’ll just heal her a little bit, okay?
Servi just nodded and began to talk to her best friend. “I’m very proud of you. In fact, I’m more than proud. You went out there and used every bit of strength you had, and you won. You’re my best friend, you know that? You’re probably the first best friend I ever had. I….I hope you’ll be able to accept my past. You’ve grown so much over the past two months, and it’s incredible. I have no doubt you have the spirit, ability, and courage to live a one-of-a-kind life. I just hope you’ll allow me to stay with you. I hope you don’t end up hating me. I…..”
Servi trailed off when she realized something important.
I can’t cry….I should be crying tears of happiness, but I’m not…..
Dear diary, my name is Momo! Wait, scratch that. My name is Momo, the first winner of the first tournament held by Warden in the city of Canary!!!!
Okay, I shouldn’t let it get to my head. At the end of the day, I'm still just Momo.
But I figured now would be a good time to write in my diary. It seems like it’s been a whole year, but only a single day has passed since the tournament. I can hardly remember the fight, but I know it was intense and came down to the wire. Well, I guess I'm lying a little bit. There’s one part I can clearly remember.
It was when Srassa and I were running at each other. I had taken her sword, and I dropped mine because I wanted to run faster. That, and it was strangely heavy. I remember we went to punch each other, and I think we hit each other in the face, with each of us putting all of our strength into one final attack.
At that moment, I was happy. I was even more than happy because I gave 120%.
Then I heard a single voice that belonged to my best bestest best friend ever. She told me that she believed in me. She believed that I could do this.
I think, for a fraction of a fraction of a second, I focused everything on standing. I felt like if I fell, she wouldn’t be proud of me because she told me to win. I didn’t want to make her upset or angry.
So I stood tall. At least, I think I did.
I remember waking up maybe 12 hours ago in my room. It was morning, and the sun was shining bright. It wasn’t until I looked around that I saw that it wasn't my room. It was similar, but also not.
Then the door opened, and Servi walked in. Grandpa, I immediately cried like a little baby. I don’t really remember the conversation, but she hugged me tightly and said how proud she was of me. At that moment, all of the pain I endured was worth it. It really was.
Oh, but speaking of pain, when I woke up, I didn’t feel anything. My face wasn’t hurting, and my back was perfectly fine. Like before, it was like I was a brand new Momo!
But then, she showed me the magical ticket, the whole reason for the tournament. The one single key item that will allow me and Servi to go further and travel more!!!
It was the ticket to get a camping set. The store is at the shopping center where Levadia Woods is, so that’s where we’ll go in the morning.
I told Servi and all my other friends (yes, grandpa, all of my other friends!!!) that I never had as much fun before, and they all agreed. They said the tournament was so fun too!
Speaking of Srassa, there was no animosity or anger or hatred between us. She greeted me with a smile, and I did the same. Then, we hugged. Then I cried, and she cried, and it was just a whole heap of emotions.
Now that I think about it, Servi didn’t cry a single bit. Maybe she already cried after the tournament? Or maybe she has a stronger grip on her emotions than I do.
Regardless, we all went out for lunch, except Claire because she had to work. I’m sorry, Claire!! Dineria offered to pay for everyone with her 1,000 dupla prize.
Oh man, Claire was so jealous. When we left Warden, I overheard Claire say she wished she had that amount of cash. I do too, Claire.
Oh, speaking of Warden, the room I was in this morning was something that Servi rented for a single day. She didn’t want to go through my bag and find my key. I told her it was okay because I trusted her, but she said she knew how important it was to me. So yeah, that was kinda sweet of her.
But now I’m in my room properly. It’s almost 10 PM, and it’s getting really dark. I’m in my pajamas that I bought to celebrate my victory. Well, Servi paid for half of it. I told her she didn’t need to, but she didn’t take no for an answer. So I said she could help me pick them out. It’s a cute yellow top with a bird in the middle and black pajama pants that are super soft!
I told her that I’ll always cherish this moment, and she just smiled. I hope I didn’t freak her out by saying that because it’s true. Every single moment I shared and will share with Servi will have a super special place in my heart. She’s my best bestest best friend.
Wait, where did that come from? Oh well, it’s the truth.
But I might want to stop writing for now. Tomorrow is July 10th, and Servi and I are meeting up early. The plan is to go to that shopping center and get the tents and canteens and stuff like that, then go food shopping. If it’s not too late, we’ll officially take the promotion quest and start our journey.
I already have my bag and sword laid out, as well as my underclothes and armor.
Grandpa, I’m so thankful I’m alive. After I left the village…..during that incident, I really wanted to kill myself. But I felt like it would be disrespectful to you. So I didn’t.
And I’m so glad I didn’t kill myself.
I found Servi, and we’re really good friends. Best friends, even. And then there’s Fisher, who’s kinda scary. He has a look about him, but he seems like a good person. Silverado and the others are super nice.
And Dineria is amazing. She’s so kind, and her gentleness almost reminds me of you. The way she patted my head just made me so happy. And Srassa is super friendly. She might be my rival, but I would say she’s more than that. She’s almost similar to me, in certain ways, but she’s also different. We both gave it our all, and I’m proud of both of us.
Good night, grandpa. I love you. I hope you’re proud of what I accomplished. I know I am. When I see you again, I’ll tell you everything. And then you can meet Servi. I don’t know if I’ll have Srassa or Silverado or the others with me, but it’d be nice if I did.
Sincerely, Momo.
Fin~~
Thanks for the Meal
Sweat dribbled down her face -> I think "dripped" might be a better verb to use here
But that wasn't all. -> maybe "However, that wasn't the end of it." ?
loud yelp of pain and exasperated breaths full of agony. -> I don't think exasperated is the word to use here, unless it's to convey Momo's annoyance at Srassa not surrendering? Even if it is I think a better word might be "labored" (laboured) or "desperate". Maybe "agonized gasps for air?"
got to her feet. But she wasn't in a good condition. -> feet, but
was a dull thunking sensation -> maybe "dull throbbing" ?
exasperated Srassa in between deep breaths. -> again, I don't think exasperated would be the word to use, maybe "gasped" or "wheezed"?
eked out Momo, who clutched her. -> clutched her what? Side? Back? Throat?
But she didn't get it. -> maybe "However, Momo would never allow her to have enough time to regenerate enough Skill Energy." ?
her own sword. But it was -> sword, but
With a mighty cry from both girls, they both went to punch each other. -> maybe "Both girls gave a mighty cry as they went to punch each other." ?
All of their feelings and hopes and desires and wants and everything else, their core being, were put into their fists. -> maybe "All of their emotions, even the very core of their beings, were put into their fists." ?
other's faces, and the sound of bone -> remove comma
With all of their energy expelled, and after giving everything they had, both girls didn't even have the strength to stand up. -> maybe "Having given everything they had and with no energy left, neither girl even had the strength to remain standing." ?
Blood dripped from her back, the same red liquid -> back; the
on Srassa, and four were -> remove comma
"Momo?" said Servi, as she got closer. -> asked Servi
The Human medic that helped Servi spoke up. -> The Human medic that had helped Servi before spoke up.
Dineria had to accept a ticket that was redeemable for a camping set, which was the main prize and it was worth 600 dupla, on behalf of Momo. -> maybe "On Momo's behalf Dineria accepted the first prize ticket for a camping set valued at 600 dupla." ? can use first, grand, or main as an adjective for the prize
And there was also a gift for the mentor who mentored the winner, which was a 1,000 dupla. -> maybe "There was also a 1,000 dupla gift for the winner's mentor." ?
With both of her hands sandwiching a delicate hand of the sleeping girl, Servi could do nothing but smile. -> maybe "Using both of her hands to hold one of the sleeping girl's delicate hands, Servi could only smile." ?
You went out there and used every bit of strength you had, and you win. -> You went out there, used every bit of strength you had and won.
But I figured now would be a good time to write in my diary. -> remove the extra space before "But"
remember the fight. But I know it was intense -> fight, but
Well, I guess I was lying a little bit. -> I guess I'm lying
when I woke up, I didn't feel anything. -> when I woke up I didn't feel any.
My face wasn't hurting, and my back was perfectly fine. -> remove comma
much fun before. And they all agreed. -> before and they
I trusted her but she said she knew -> her, but
We both gave it our all, and I'm proud of both of us. -> remove comma
Yeah, the diary entry at the end really makes me think Momo's grandfather is dead and that she was bullied/chased out of her village. I'm pretty sure when Momo takes Servi to "meet" her grandfather, it's going to be to a gravestone. Maybe that is what will be the thing that makes Servi start on the path to getting the necromancy skill so she can bring Momo's grandfather back.
The scene may have been similar, but this time to one that remained standing was the one I was rooting for. I was always kind of sad that they had the anime end that way with Yusuke losing to Yomi like that. The fight was really great, but it kinda stunk his last major fight in the series was one he lost. Even if he had won that fight though, I know he wouldn't have won the tournament because of all of Raizen's old friends that showed up and were at a level of power similar to him-way out of Yusuke's league. That said, I really love the series, definitely one of my favorites so thanks for the link and reminder of it
Oh man, that spoiler. I was trying to get this chapter edited in time but I had people coming in and out of the house all day. I kinda got stressed and gave up. I promise I'll do better.
Same here. I love rewatching it, but I kinda get depressed when I get to the end.
@RuggyRuggy It’s understandable, life happens. Don’t beat yourself up too much over it. The first third or so I couldn’t find any mistakes, so I’m guessing you were able to get that part fine before all the interruptions?
Is the last arc with how Yomi and Mokuro change part of the inspiration for characters like Fisher who seem like antagonists, but have the chance to be redeemed/become allies? Hiei for sure too, maybe Sensui? Though Sensui maybe not so much
@FallingLeaf
The first third or so I couldn’t find any mistakes, so I’m guessing you were able to get that part fine before all the interruptions?
Yeah. The thing is, I had some of those fixes you suggested already fixed, but I forgot to save when I turned my computer off.
To be honest, my only intentions were to mimic the final fight. I will say that I was thinking about Hiei and other enemy-turned-friends when I was writing Fisher's parts. I guess that had some influence on me.
@RuggyRuggy oof, I know it sucks to lose progress like that because you forgot to save.
At least Fisher didn’t have it as bad as Hiei did, being exiled from the snow demon village as a newborn for the crime of existing, and then hunted by almost everyone afterwards. I still dislike the snow demons for having done that to Hiei
@FallingLeaf There's still a chance for Fisher to have it bad. Well, not as bad as Hiei. Fisher's children still don't know about his past. The same with his students.
Screw the snow demons.
@RuggyRuggy Yep, but hopefully that won’t happen. I’m pretty sure Feral won’t really care since he respects strength the most of all and Fisher has proven he’s changed, but the rest could go either way.
Is the new profile picture the possible Servi pic you mentioned? It does have those little antennas like you said
@FallingLeaf It is. Other than the antenna and maybe a little bit longer hair, is how I pictured her. I tried using some photo editing software to get rid of it. This is the best I could.
https://i.imgur.com/XT5dZ7O.png
EDIT: I went ahead and changed it. I figured it's better to get as accurate as I could.
@FallingLeaf Why is every one so dam soft hearted on Fisher?Just because he is changing and has a family and the author force him in the spotlight as a god guy every chapter ?So every one forgives him
@Lord_Grimm For me? Not really, it's more of he's useful to keep around instead of Servi feeling the need to kill him.
Fisher has sincerely repented for his past and now is moving forward to atone for it, so that's something. Forgiveness will take time though, but the need for Servi to kill him is gone and he's more useful alive than dead since he's a good source of info and is in a position of influence in Canary
It also helps that we didn't actually see any of his prior cruelty/crimes in the story and from what he was saying it had been a while since he actually did anything like that. We've just seen bigotry that soon went away from meeting non-humans he could respect and care about. If we saw him running around slaughtering innocent non-humans like...the prior week and then suddenly repenting after something, then it would be a lot harder to think he was serious about it and possibly worthy of forgiveness
@Lord_Grimm The reason most are soft on him is because he is Captain of the Guard. Most people love him. He's one of the strongest people in Canary behind Claus, Qina, and Servi. If you're talking about when he didn't do anything when one of the Singi twins had their ear cut off, or attacked, or pushed down, he literally couldn't. He was weak. And remember, the people were cheering for it. Some of the people in Canary are sh*t bags. They love hurting slaves. While unfortunate, that's the demographic that loves Fisher. He's going to use his pull to help convert that demographic. Also, that group of people was prevalent in Book One. Book Two has a lot of people who aren't necessary part of that demographic.
And try to look at it from Servi's point of view. She opened up to him because she's been lying to literally everyone. Her relation with everyone, except Itarr, is built on lies. The relief she felt when she finally spill her secrets was something she wanted. Remember, she had to keep every thing a secret for over two months.
Don't get her wrong. Servi wanted to tell Momo, but she was afraid. Maybe the next book will reveal she had no need to be afraid. Maybe it'll reveal the opposite.
He might be getting off easy in the physical sense, but not mentally. He really does hate the person he used to be.
I notice in your review you said this
So fisher and servie talk and just like that out of nowhere Servie forgive Fisher becous it was a misunderstanding after he tels him it was not him that cut the ears of the children? (my point of wiev.. WTF he had the pover, autorithie to stop him doin it but he just wached so he is as much as guilte than his friend no misunderstanding)
And you're right. He is as guilty as his friend. He knows that. The only thing that probably prevented Servi from killing him after waking up was the fact that Itarr told Servi his story while she was asleep. If not for that, then there's a high chance he would've died and been absorbed.
Like FallingLeaf said, he can do more good alive than dead. The orphanage is an example of that. It'll help the homeless of the city. In time, when and if he can do stuff something about slavery, then the former slave homeless children can have a safe place to stay.
One more thing. There's nothing written in stone that says his children, Momo, Silverado and the other mentees, Claire, Srassa, Dineria, and any other character will forgive him. I'm not saying anything, about whether he will or won't be totally forgiven because of spoilers, but let's just say there's a chance for Fisher to suffer more.
But let me make one thing clear: I do know where you're coming from. I can see it from your point of view.
@RuggyRuggy yes he can do much more good alive thean dead but my point was never on that or on dose he get punisht or not.the problem is that any other character had a natural build up to become frends whit momo and servie and u did a gread job on them but everie think around fisher is forced just to make it happen so he can become where he is now,and also about the demografie as i sad in the rewuev if u put in some conversation in book2 we could get a bater understanding how people se those things.so let me be clear if u made fisher and servie relashonship more fluid and not rash and forced example thru out one more book slowlie to gain here truts i would hawe no problem i also do agre as i sad in my other post that fisher can be used to chanche cannary in a bather way,but this way its just forced no other way a can explain it just feels out of place forced and rushed.well anyway what done is done evrething els is prty good gz for finishing book2 waiting for book3 and pls if ever fishers past get reweald dont make servi or momo stod up for him that would be to mich
@FallingLeaf i agree whit u on some points,and also the moment we got the backeound i know servie would not kill him,dose he deserw to die? Even in moder days those actions warantie dead pennaltie but.... he wants to chancge we only se him for a week as changed persone in the book,from the momment he defets his inner demons and the tournement thets one week if i remeber corectlie but my problem was never the character but how author force his relatcionship whit servie.Fisher could have benn a major character for me in the book even go so far as to help servie in many ways if it wass not forced and to be honest i dont hate or love him but whit this setup its just iritating for me.and if author wanted somone that servie can talk to and have some common past the elfs from book1 would be the best chois
@Lord_Grimm The elf cousins from the slave market raid might have been good people for Servi to talk to, but remember-she only happened across them by coincidence and they were already planning on leaving with the freed slaves afterwards. After Servi joined up to help them free the slaves their paths split apart for now. I’m pretty sure they’ll return later in the story-the one elf did give Servi a token/symbol of his family so she’ll be able to use that to either get passage or allies through that land.
If it helps-right now I don’t think Servi particularly likes Fisher yet or has really forgiven and forgotten, think of it more like Fisher has been granted a stay of execution and is working towards penance and possible forgiveness, but he may never get it. Servi also feels guilt for some of the innocents/unrelated people who have been caught up in her revenge spree like guards who weren’t in on the slave trade, but were in the wrong place at the wrong time. That gives her more reason to sympathize with Fisher since she feels guilty of similar crimes
@FallingLeaf she forgive him even the author sad and even f*ckin apologiest for trying to kill him,some inner monologs also pointing to that that she respects him on some way,and no the only innocent she kild was the dwarf i think on the streets,on the nightstroil she even send masseg to evacuate the mansion for the maids and the rest before she burnt it.the guards are like soldiers no innecent there and the elvs kild also not just servie and thats why thay are the best chois,and no guilt ittar lockt the guilt up also i think.so its gonna be interesting to se when all those emotions break free and hope its note ginna be fisher hoe helps her.as i sad if there would be build up for there realetionship i would have no problem at all but it was just a flip of a swich from enemy to best friends so the plot can progres , just read thro the book houw many times he has been prais in some way or a nother ?is tajt natural or normol?and i mean praisd bu serve and i stil dont thik they are simmilar,from firs book almost all tje charavter did the sam think in killing guards entc as servie so they actuly have somthing in comon