TLDR: this story suspended, will probably rewrite.
Dear readers,
I have decided, after I had a mentally exhausting couple of days, to effectively delete this version of the story. Writing this story has often been very fun, providing an outlet for me to express my creative interests and engage with characters who I sincerely enjoy, whose potential I have been looking forward to. I appreciate that many people also sincerely enjoy the story, to the point that I was just this last week in the process of making a Patreon for those people who had expressed a desire to contribute.
In the end, however, I have decided to take down this story because I have reached a conclusion: there are elements of this story which have made me question what on Earth I was doing. There are numerous factors which have built up to this decision, and one of the early ones effectively destroyed my self-confidence in the series, to the point that it is difficult for me to recommend the series. (It does not help that I have to visually see this particular factor on my story's page.) The deciding factor is an ethical problem in the story which was built up from the earlier chapters, however, and cannot be easily written away without it being terrible writing. Due to my lack of thoughtfulness, this fact only recently hit me, and I am unable to leave the story up without feeling like a horrible person.
I will therefore begin making private all chapters which make up this series, and you may expect these to begin disappearing from public view on Saturday. I had considered leaving this series up, but eventually decided against it.
However, as I said, I also love the characters I have made, and have enjoyed the world I have created. The reason why I am going to make the chapters private is so that I can review the comments left behind, and incorporate feedback into a potential rewrite which does not include these problematic aspects, and improves other areas as well. There is a chance plot beats might shift, though the overall progression would likely remain the same. If you have any comments, critiques, et cetera, please leave them here and even for particular chapters.
Finally, if I do publish a rewrite, I will provide a link to it through another announcement chapter for this story. It would likely come out within the next few months, so I ask any of you invested in my story to please keep it on your reading list for a little while longer. If I do rewrite the story, I would also attempt to keep to a schedule and include a Patreon with advanced chapters. You can check out my Discord server in the link below, where I will post updates about any rewrite. In addition, for the interval between now and any rewrite, I plan on writing short stories to while away my time. I am aiming to release one on June 1st for Pride Month. The link to my collection is below, and I would be super glad if you checked it out.
I wish you all a better reading experience,
Lacy
Short story collection: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/289592/lacys-short-story-corner/
Discord: https://discord.gg/BUQQmGz
why do all good stories i start reading get hiatus-ed, discontinued, forgotten or taken down for one reason or another???
getting a re-write would be a new one though and i hope it does happen!
any chance you could provide the old chapters to those who ask? i just reached the end of the chase arc and wanted to binge read other the weekend, only to find the story taken down..
even if you don't see a good way to continue the story and aren't satisfied with it anymore, it is still a really great story! and i want to read it to its current end, please? *insert puppy-eyes here* please??
I'd be willing to, especially since you tend to leave comments/points to consider. You can DM me here or on Discord.
@Lacy thanks! i will in a moment.
@happyhafer ok. i'm in your discord channel now. same name with capitel H.
@happyhafer
Hey you have the dough?
Sorry I had to XD
@Shadowlord0474 well, you have successfully confused me for a minute there.
@happyhafer
MUHAHAHAHA I AM ALL POWERFUL
@Shadowlord0474 But I have the high ground! (Of comment moderation.)
@Lacy
So what if you have the high ground I am still taller then you XD
Sorry I had too
@Shadowlord0474 ... *aggresively stands on tippy toes*
@Lacy
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I AM DIEING XD
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