Announcement? (Real chapter at most 19.02.2021)
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Announcement
Alright guys.
I would like to know what does majority of you think about this?
There were multiple inquiries about making some revisions. Especially to the oldest chapters.
I am kind of a lazy guy in general so... i kept putting it off but i think myself that it actually might be a good idea to do so.
Still i thought that because i am in trending now and all that i would use this chance to get as much feedback as possible.
Thank you for taking your time to read this and please vote. Cya for now
Do you want me to spend more time on revising the older chapter or focus more on new chapters?
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Do not care do your thing. Just give me new chapters regardless. Votes: 21 22.3%
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Sure. They were horrible. You need to fix them. Still though give me new chapters. Votes: 16 17.0%
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Eh... bro past is the past, focus on the future. Votes: 46 48.9%
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I do not care. Votes: 11 11.7%
Total voters: 94
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Do what you feel like doing
@Ediav42 nice. Thanks for telling me.
Revising is best idea, but like how I am it’s gotta take a bit of time. Or I’m just lazy.
Revising old chapters a good idea, but takes time.
Also I’ve been in stuck without power so it takes a whole day to revise a whole chapter
@Businesssn i can totaly understand that. I am lazy myself and any power outage is annoying af. Hope it gets fixed soon
The old chapters isn't that bad. Although it is rough, Its readable and easy enough to understand. Most of the mistakes are just minor stuff.
But once your novel gets a lot attention you'd definitely need to clean the earlier chapters.(for those picky readers who like to complain)
I told you before... i wouldn't be here if i didn't liked this(i think this is also true for most of your readers)
@Vyrphax
early tomorrow i will release a new chapter...
I’ll just say that first impressions mean a lot, unless there are amazing reviews chances are many aren’t going to read past bad quality. NOT That I’m saying they are, I usually check the last updated chapter before reading to see if it’s been axed or not, I haven’t even read chapter one yet but I wouldn’t mind waiting if the quality is going up a notch
@Akaeye thanks for telling me. I will proly do that at some point. Dont want to change it too much though so it will keep the same kinda spirit. Anways thank you for taking your time to tell me.
The first few chapters are...rough. But I never thought of not reading further so I guess they work anyways? Your chapters after the shadow core are a lot easier to read tho.
@Helkyrk good to know. Thanks for telling me
You can also comment your specific reasoning in here. Also give me examples why... and which chapters in particular deserve the most attention.
Anyways cya for now and thank you all for taking your time.
I do like your story but the new chapters after your long hiatus are kinda jarring. It went from moping around the dungeon finding out stuff to in love with a Dragon and fairies. There seemed to be no build up to it...almost felt like you were continuing a completely different story. Had to go back and reread chapters and there felt like nothing built up to where we are now.
Or what it seems like was you were writing what came to your mind before and now you at least have a outline to where you want to go.
@Fafulin It was the nature of the Stonehenge dungeon. Chaotic, random place. (intentional btw, there are some rules to that place but thats a secret)
I dont know about you but falling in the love is something sudden always. Then the fairies. Well they were an idea of a reader. It also was somewhat planned. The fairies were a memetic creature so it also was a sudden thing once he started to go all weird about the possible love and remembered fairies from fairy tales.
Memetic creatures are basicaly spreading via knowing about them at all. Anything information about them makes them born or spread. So there is that. I also added it now because i felt like it will be another good reason for the god to do a hard reset. Which i also planned.
Admittedly some things were made on a spot because i had the luxury of doing so in the Stonehenge but that will no longer be the case in the jungle. It will have clear design with no randomness when it comes to creatures etc. I dont want to spoil so i wont.
Also there is something that people always seem to forget and i am probably going to add some reasoning about this in the description. There might be alot of things that just apear one way but are not really exactly that. This story is written from the perspective of Felix or w/e i decide. So he thinks that the things are this way. He is almost never sure. Even when he states i am sure. He isnt. He just thinks he is.
One great example would be... people really hate the fact he died and didnt give a shit. Despite clearly his way of thinking is already really... and i mean really different. He thought he died. What happened in reality was that he felt his hp droping to 0. Which still didnt kill him but it sure as hell felt like it to him when it happened for the first few times because he simply didnt understand.
Anyways still thank you for sharing your opinion.