Chapter 364: Suspect of stealing
Zhang Jian comes out of the dressing room, and the clerks couldn't help but gasp at the sight.
"That suit looks perfect on you!" The gray suit accentuated Zhang Jian's proportions and gave him a softer and kind look. Zhang Jian scratches his head as his face turns red. He felt embarrassed.
But then he noticed that Lu Chen was missing. He asks, "Where is brother Chen?"
"He's in the changing room right now." "I see."
"Let's get you more clothes!" Zhang Wenling wasn't going to stop with just one suit. She felt that she could buy all of it. As they continue to look around for the clothes,
"Zhang Jian! Where have you been?!" The happy expression Zhang Jian had before turns twisted. Never did he expect this person to be here.
Zuo Qiaolin and Zhang Ying are standing there. And they weren't alone. Zuo Qiaolin's friends and children were beside the two.
"Why are you people here?" Zhang Jian's voice is rigid. It's filled with the blackest of hate towards those people.
"Why couldn't we be here? We just came here to buy Xiao Ying and his friends some clothes." Zuo Qiaolin's expression shows no sight of anger or contempt. Instead, she was more smug. Since Zhang Guo wasn't there, there wasn't a need for her to act kindly to Zhang Jian.
While she has that expression, Zhang Ying was the opposite. His face was dark, and he was glaring at Zhang Jian, showing his hatred towards him.
Zhang Jian just gave a mocking smile, "How's your face doing?"
"You!" Zhang Ying's still angry from the beating. His face still had bruises from Zhang Jian's punches. He wants to lounge at Zhang Jian, but Zuo Qiaolin stops him,
"Don't get angry at what he said." Zuo Qiaolin denounces her son. But then she turns over to Zhang Jian, "Come back home with us.
Your father is worried about you."
However, Zhang Jian laughed at what she said, "Worried about me? Can you not word it like that? We know what he wanted to do to me."
Zuo Qiaolin sighs, "How can you be so stubborn? Do you know what chance we are giving you?"
"Stubborn? How am I stubborn when I don't want to be used as a pawn? We both know that we don't like each other. So stop trying to act kind, you old hag." Zhang Jian wasn't going to hide his disgust for her.
"Is that any way to talk to your mother?!"
"Qiaolin, stop patronizing this boy. If he doesn't want to go back home, then just leave him on the street."
"How can he be your son? No manners at all."
"Do you know how good Qiaolin has treated you even though you are her stepson?"
Zuo Qiaolin's friend begins to denounce everything about Zhang Jian right at his face. And the two can hear their children snickering at them as well.
"I don't know what type of poison she has been feeding to you guys, but do you really think she treated me well?" Heck, it might have been better for him to live on the street than be here.
"And what are you going to do about staying out? Do you think becoming a singer will help you make a living?" Hearing that, her friends and the children were laughing at him. Zhang Jian's hand gripped into a tight ball. He knows if he throws the first punch, it's his loss.
"Would you all be quiet?" But a cold and piercing voice broke all that snickering. Zhang Jian's anger leaves his body as he looks at Zhang Wenling. She has a cold gaze locked onto the group.
"What do you want?" Zuo Qiaolin's expression continues to be stale.
"Do you think I will just sit here and listen to all of your bullshit? How dare you talk about Zhang Jian like that." Her voice turns colder and colder as she talks.
"And what are you going to do about it?" One of Zuo Qiaolin's friends sneers. And she looks at Zhang Wenling up and down, "Wearing such a cheap dress, and you think you can talk down to us?"
"I bet she can't even buy anything in this shop."
"Probably just another window shopper."
"Isn't he wearing one of the suits?" Seeing Zhang Jian wearing the suit, one of them sneers. She calls out,
"Manager!"
"What do you need, miss?" The manager quickly comes over.
"I suspect that these people are going to steal these clothes. Please contact the security."
Ohh my friend if I do what I do it's because I think that you novel has a lot of potential,like I said I hope to read something really good of you the next time .
First of all thanks for your work, I know it's not easy to please readers and attract more, however you take your time, I hope to read something really good of you in the future, I know you can.
Unfortunately this time I don't think it's the case, you've been going very slowly, I've read the comments since chapter 1 so I know what you plan and you already answered, but how are you going to finish divorcing the mc in chapter 1980 and the rest give him happiness until the end in chapter 2000.
"The childhood friend" if you can call it that is ridiculous in every way, I understand that you want to create characters that shape the mc, but I think that without it the mc would be the same as a beta, and the same development would have.
It is very dense and I do not see anything, no progress, I have read some literary works I do not consider myself an expert on the subject but in all of them, even if the author lengthens, there is content that keeps readers hooked, you also do it for a while , well I am here , but in the end I ended up hating the protagonist, it's my opinion I don't expect to offend anyone, but I even made a scribble account because I can't stand it anymore, I had to tell you even if you ignored me.
1) Thank you for the support
2) The reason why I've been going slowly, for the most part, is to add more context into the beginning so later on, it'll be easier for me to add new characters. For the divorce scene, in particular, a lot of people are tunneling into it too much. I never thought of it as a climax or something along the lines that Lu Chen has to do it quickly. I thought of it as the end that marks the beginning.
3) For the childhood friend not being and still having the same development, it would not have the same development. For one, the reason why I did the childhood friend is to give a backstory for everything that has happened. In addition, a way for readers to also sympathize with Liu Fei Fei as I didn't want Liu Fei Fei to be viewed as a villain just through her actions. That's why the childhood friend's backstory is there to provide a reason for her hate for Lu Chen and since it's through childhood, it's like a ticking time bomb.
4) Yeah, kinda went overboard on adding a lot of things. Can't deny that. XD. If I posted more frequently, then it would have been fine I think. But yeah, a little too much on my part XD.
Thank you for taking the time to respond and for your work.
I understand that you have your clear idea of what you want to do, although I feel that the divorce of the mc does not need to be the last thing to continue with your book, I explain myself, he still has to take revenge if he has to make his family get ahead and not go through the same thing, you really should know that if you have enemies that will end your family and your life well you should take action, and so far I have only seen him learn a little bit of martial arts and try to start a business, to investigate Or take measures nothing, we don't even talk about romance, he is very dense, even her family and his relatives know that she cheats on him(they have the bodyguards so they for sure known), even so they want him to continue with the commitment, I know that marriage for convenience are like that, but he must take more drastic measures , in the end(previous life) he end up murdered and with a green hat, I understand that he has trauma from the past but for that reason he has a second chance .
Well how he is treated I would say that it seems ironic that the friend if you can call her like that wants sometimes to mediate between the mc and the ex, but when the mc is treated badly she doesn't say anything, many people would send her along with the ex to fly.
Excuse me friend, I don't want to offend you or anything about your work, since I think you're good, but you lengthen it a lot and I disagree with you on that, that doesn't mean that it detracts from what you do, it's just a personal opinion.
I think I'm not the only one who one to see something that can make the mc more better or that he do something really cool.