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I'm your author.
You're my readers.
Let's chat.
I have some questions I'd like to ask you.
- What have you thought of the story pace so far? I know we haven't gotten that far into the story, but I'd like your thoughts on how fast or slow you think I should be going.
- How much of a cheat do you think Austin's system is? I know it's a lot more convenient and especially since he can't cultivate (for now) so I'd like to get your thoughts on if anything seems a little too much.
- Chapter quality? That's something I definitely would like your opinion on. How do the fight scenes hold up, do you think I should add more detail, that sort of thing.
- Lastly, thoughts or suggestions on where you'd like to see the story go? While I am mostly writing for myself (and for this contest), I like to make sure it's an enjoyable story for my readers. Tell me what you'd like to see or what I should change!
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The story's fine. My only suggestion would be to put the bestiary chapters(like with the ent and the stone herb) in the glossary and just provide a link in the relevant chapters. Other than that just keep writing what you want to write. And, try not to pay attention to any negative reviews or comments(you will get them, everyone does.).
Good suggestion!
Seconded. This is a good and interesting story. Maintain or improve the quality, however you would like.
I hope that the summon cultivator does not simply create a new individual, that would make those characters very flat. Options with a better potential could be teleportingnto him an existing cultivator that was seeking a sect (not automatically friendly, but probably likely to accept if it was his/her last chance) or a variant would be affecting reality to send the summoned cultivator his way (like for example a young cultivator fleeing bandits or similar "random" encounter. Both options would have the benefit that the new sect member would be a real person with a past history allowing the character to be more developed that "sect/harem member #462"
Well, the skill turns the offering into a human being so they are a bit of a blank slate, but they won't stay that way! And there definitely won't be any harems in this story. At least, Austin won't have one.
1. slow pace but slow pace is good.
2. its not really cheats its divine intervention so its fine
3. great
4. n/a
1. Perfect
2. Isn't the system going to find ways to screw him over anyway
3. Marvelous
4. ???
5. Profit
Longer chapters if at all possible
Many feel the pace is fine, but it's kinda slow to me. If it wasn't for the system I wouldn't still be reading, but with the system the story has some potential.
1) story pace seems fine. everything is a bit confusing for now but nothing you can do about that given how the story is going.
2) why cant the system just do things for him? like automatically construct the buildings if he has the materials. upgrade his cultivation and stuff
3) does the ent thing even count as a fight? there wasnt anything else that comes close.
4) i would like for the mc to screw over the gods who dragged him into this mess. the demon/fairy is kinda funny so i dont think she deserves too harsh a treatment
2. I was thinking about that and honestly, I'm not sure how much I like that. I think it's nice that he has to build things himself. It doesn't feel like the system is just his end-all, be-all or whatever.
@Schwab sounds nice in its own way. so the system only provides knowledge and directions?
@drakensji Basically, yes.
1 - The story pace is good for me, I just hope you will not stretch the time the MC need before he begin to cultivate and become stronger. No need to be OP be at least he need to be more powerfull than his future 'junior'.
2 - The system is not really op lol. All he offers are doable things over time for now other than maybe the summon cultivator thing with a plant. Like the bloc for contruction and even the sect just need time and knowledge on how to do them (which he therefore doesn't have a system to help)
3 - The quality is good for me and the fight too, no need to have 4 chapter fight with all details in, that not dragon ball
4 - First and foremost I want a yandere, the fairy becoming this would be fun ...... Ok, Ok, more seriously (I want a yandere fairy all the same), maybe the god can give him a cultivation book ? Like, if the guy die that not good for them but they just give him random thing lol. I am pretty sure they can give him some good-not-OP cultivation method for him and other not to the same lvl for his 'junior' too right ? They are gods.
I would like the sect building time to be not too short too, like, click here and BAM sect is there. Maybe first clearing a area, collect materials, etc. The disciple number would be depending on the size of the sect too. First the building are not much but with time he collect materials and use the system for make the sect bigger and be able to summon more guy, something like this.
So that all I want say, that much but hey, you asked for it.
Just make him and the monkey kiss for DNA exchange then it would transform into a waifu
I was thinking the same lol
@Stonelight what can I say great minds think alike
Nun is...male, though? And he's like, a teenager in monkey years <.<
@Schwab a shame though
@Surfing_Cipher Man the author forgot to say than he will be a trap later in his human form
@Stonelight yea