My Apologies, but I am taking a break from writing Death March - Fix. Like when I read the original--I quickly went through the first 8 - 9 volumes (When I was releasing 3 - 4 chapters a day) Slowed down 10 - 11; and then had to take breaks after that lol.
I have to read better written and more interesting books (like the dictionary cover-to-cover; or textbooks on economy...).
This isn't saying that I am permanently stopping; and I will still be uploading chapters on Lazy Swordmaster - fix. As for the R18 chapter with the guildmaster, I will write and post it in a few days.
If anyone has suggestions of other fixes they want to see, please feel free to comment and I will look into them.
Man, there are so many novels, mangas and animes that I want corrected, it takes almost 99% of harems in japan and they are on my list. Most characters are too beta, herbivore, stupid, dense or all of the above. So I'll give you a hint of a story that has already ended and I've never seen them make Fan Fic, Sekirei is good, but it could add dungeon elements or powers to the mc.
As long as you don't drop this, I'll wait for as long as you need
If there's something that needs fixing, I think Masou gakuen hxh(hybrid x heart academy ataraxia or something like that in English) would be the one that I choose
It's not like it's bad or anything, but their ending is quite unsatisfying for me, there's also a lack of 'getting to know' part in this novel, despite being one of the most borderline hentai novel I've ever read
Disclaimer: it's been a while since I read masou gakuen, so whatever I said below might even be wrong
Spoiler if you never read Masou gakuen:
after 'getting to know' almost everyone in the end chapter, only his original team and his sister's the one that stay with him. and some of the 'rejected' even get pergananant too, what a waste of big harem potential
I know they're not exactly rejected or anything like that, with 'their world are getting separated' plot and whatnot, but you know, the power of author could easily solve that.
Not only that, half of the girls he get along with even stayed on earth like him, but go their separate ways, like the America team
Spoiler end
Overall, if there's something to fix in this novel, it would be the lack of mc's intimate interaction with other girls except the main one, and the unsatisfying ending with a wasted big harem potential I stated above
I will look into that as well; thanks for the suggestion.
A story that needs fixing/ finishing in pretty sure the author dropped it either that or translates did roughly 220ish chapters in is
SLAVE HAREM IN THE LABYRINTH OF THE OTHER WORLD
Bleh copy pasted a all caps
I will look into doing it--thanks for the suggestion.
For stories....
He who fights with monsters, defiance of the fall, path of ascension, primal hunter, under the dragoneye moon, realm of monsters, path of the chosen, reroll, path of the dragon mage...
I can give more, but those are the first ones that come to mind.
Stories to read, or stories you may want a fix to?
I should put it in the main one, but I can't do fixes to Xanxia...they have one of the most **Absolute-Opposite** (I am unsure what word would work to describe it) of correct understanding of how the universe really works.
Their 'comprensions' are so cringe-worthy, and bad--that I usually skip those parts lol
@Tek stories to read... You said you wanted to read something decent.
If you want Xianxia that avoids most of the cringe you could try reaper of the martial world (pro tip, he actually gets the girls AND knows what to do with them).
@Blizzisme Thanks I will try that.
Yeah, I did say I wanted things to read, as well as any suggestions for what people wanted 'fixed' - which is why I verified.
@Tek actually, been ages since I thought about it, but one of the best super hero stories of all time was a web serial (long since completed) called Worm. This predates sites like RR and scribblehub. If you've never read that one I highly recommend.
@Blizzisme I will try it, thanks
@Tek so what did you wind up reading?
@Blizzisme For now, I decided on a re-read of Coiling Dragon, I will get to the others once that is finished--probably Worm first.