Even though I hadn’t expected him to suddenly attack me, months of practice in the dungeons left my body reacting even as my mind was confused. I leaped out of the water, and with the wave of my hand I manipulated the water to create a screen to hide my movements. He slammed into the water with a splash.
“Ah… a mage!” The guy said, laughing.” It’s too bad for you, I’m a pugilist!”
Although he was attacking me, he had a playful demeanor about him. I didn’t have the feeling he was being all that serious. Rather, it felt like he was looking down on me and confidant in his own abilities. He didn’t seem to want to hurt me, but at no point did he feel like he couldn’t get what he wanted out of me. The feeling really irritated me.
Pugilist was a job I’d like to learn. All of my sword knowledge came from the hero job, so without a sword, my knowledge was basically zilch. One of the many things I wanted to do in the capital was research the requirements for other jobs. Chief among those jobs were some kind of martial arts or pugilist. If I could battle with my hands, I wouldn’t have to depend on the sword anymore. In all honesty, I didn’t like fighting with a sword. It was sharp and scary. I was happy to leave that kind of work to Lydia.
“Too slow!” He cried, leaping through a wave of water and reaching out to grab me.
There was a feeling about his hand that caused my neck hair to rise, so I instinctively jumped back and dodged it. However, he kept moving forward, trying to grab me. None of my skills could be called acrobatic. In fact, if I didn’t have the cheat skill of three jobs boosting my status at once, I’d have been overtaken within the first second. I created a water jet to knock him back, but it only caused him to flip away to avoid me.
It must be nice to be able to move like that. He was all acrobatic and smooth. I was just barely managing to clumsily avoid him. I had been fat my entire life, so being able to move so smoothly was something I just couldn’t do! Wait… why do I keep complimenting this guy in my mind! He’s clearly a pervert who is up to absolutely no good! I couldn’t allow him to do what he wanted with the girls!
Rather, I had nothing I could fight him or deflect him back with. I recalled a dungeon ability called electroshock! With the water all over him, I could easily stun the guy and knock him on his ass. It was the easiest way to bring him down given the circumstances. Jumping back and sending out several jets and another water screen, I reset my ability.
The mistake was apparent immediately. In the end, switching abilities in mid-fight really was impossible. As soon as I lost my two jobs, I became extremely sluggish. I barely had my dungeon menu up when he had already blown through my defenses and reached out and grabbed me. His hand shone for a second, and then I felt my muscles go stiff.
I had one eye closed, waiting for him to strike me or attack me in some way, but when he did nothing, I tried to open it, only to realize that I couldn’t. In fact, my body couldn’t move at all. The guy let out a laugh, dusting off his wet hands as if the battle was completely over.
“See, that wasn’t so hard, was it?”
I was completely paralyzed!
This is just plain frustrating. He first notes that he is only barely escaping by having three jobs, then decides to reset his points, going back to one job, and now he's paralyzed, about to be used as a stool to help another man see his girls naked.
Now, I'm not saying he should have attempted to kill him in the previous chapter, where he instead took a dig at probably the readers advocating for him to use lethal force against specifically murderer-rapists. I am, however, saying that a single fireball wouldn't kill him, especially with all the water around, and would be relatively justified...
Or, perhaps, if he really was as "let's use my previous worlds standards in conflict solving wherever possible, and especially as a first resort regardless of the situation" as it seems he was meant to be, how about shouting, very loudly, at him "are you trying to peep at the girls side, you pervert!?" Get people's attention. Wouldn't that work? No?
I still think some singed hairs, and a minor burn is the least this asshole deserves - "let me just rob you of your freedom of movement, and use you as a stepping to stool to spy on bathing girls"
Even temporary, total paralysis seems like a terrifying experience, and sure, he didn't that's what he was trying to do, and surr he didn't feel like he was trying to kill him, but he has attacked plenty of people so far without killing them, right? Remember the bandits? Right? And why did he NEED to handle it himself? How about barely dodge-dodge-dodge the f*ck out of the room? To the front desk? "This f*cker was trying to peep, and needs a lifetime ban."
I swear, MC be like "Hello, clearly uncivil person, would you mind having a civility?"
"That didn't make sense. Also, no."
"Shock, gasping, and horror! A person doing the wrong thing not doing the right thing!? This is literally not conceivable!"
Besides some of the MCs reactions, and the length of the chapters, I like this story. I really do. It just gets so frustrating sometimes.
Uses a fireball
It fizzles out.
Takes advantage of the confused and occupied Deek. Deek is paralyzed!
Dr. Smut writes a comment complaining about how dumb it was Deek tried to cast a fireball while physically in a pool.
Better? It's just funny to me people are always so determine to say how THEY would have done it, when I can easily poke just as many or more holes in their logic and end up with the same results.
Because... in the end... that's what this outrage is... it's not over Deek's actions... it's over the results. I write stories where things don't always go 100% the MCs way. If you haven't figured it out 250 chapters in... well buckle in, because it's gonna keep happening.
Thanks for reading, i do appreciate excitement. If you weren't invested, you probably wouldn't be getting up in arms.
@whatsawhizzer wait, why would the fireball fizzle out? It's not like he'd be making the fireball underwater, or throwing it into the water, right?
Is there just that much steam in the air, to snuff the flame out? Or does the environment have such a huge impact on the power of certain magics, that the fireball would be weakened enough that just the steam fizzles it out?
@whatsawhizzer
It's just funny to me people are always so determine to say how THEY would have done it, when I can easily poke just as many or more holes in their logic and end up with the same results.
With as many different skills and spells that Deek has at this point, there was surely some combination that would have achieved a result he would be satisfied with. Either that, or this Peeping Tom character is way too overpowered.
Besides, Deek very loudly shouting something like "are you trying to peep at the girls side, you pervert", like Dr.Smut suggested, would have definitely ruined his peeping. It seems conspicuous that you failed to address this suggestion.
Because... in the end... that's what this outrage is... it's not over Deek's actions... it's over the results. I write stories where things don't always go 100% the MCs way.
I think it's far more accurate to call his comment a "nitpick" rather than an "outrage."
So, you write stories where things don't always go in favor of the MC? I respect that. And, on thinking, this explains quite a bit about your writing style. I think it even explains a few of the plot points that I had questioned or nitpicked earlier.
Is it safe to assume that you dislike the kind of stories where things usually happen in the MC's favor or he usually gets his way? Personally, I can enjoy either type of story, so long as it is well-written. Though, depending on how it was written, I can usually enjoy the latter type of story (i.e., the happy-go-lucky MC) more.
Anyway, I disagree that this "outrage" is over the result. Rather, it's how the MC presented himself - how he spoke and behaved. It was more about what Deek failed to say or do instead of how it ended up. As long as Deek was at least somewhat smart about it, that's what really counts.
Deek is the main character in this harem isekai. And readers will typically put themselves in the shoes of the MC as they read. But here (as well as in some earlier cases) Deek acted far too much like a naive child. Why wouldn't we be disappointed?
I swear, MC be like "Hello, clearly uncivil person, would you mind having a civility?"
This one sentence seems to sums up the main problem. It should go without saying that Deek did not have to try to murder this person to come across as dealing with this situation in a satisfying manner. But, clearly, Deek could have handled it better. He could have said something cool or done something clever. He could have, at least, warned his girls. Instead, he talks and acts rather wishy-washy.
It's really not about the results, it's about the MC actions. I've read stories where things go horribly for MC but they get through it without sucking.
It's his f*cking story. Let him write it the way he wants to. Not everybody is brilliant genius writer like yall my guy that can satisfy every need and want. This story is ACTUALLY VERY REALISTIC AND RELATABLE!!! But everybody wants to be this super cool, super smooth, handsome, genies tactician that's always on top winning like the alpha male that he hits when he was just a normal regular guy before he got isekai. 99% of people reading these stories are NONE of these and just wishing to be the MC of the story. But I'm not. I'm this guy that got isekai. I'm a fat introverted guy with no confidence. I've lived through these moments. Y'all just can't relate. That's why this story that y'all can't relate to, doesn't fit you. Y'all never experienced walking in someone shoes like that. So it really irks me when reading comments that bash on this story and talk about how the MC should of done this or that instead what was written. Seriously, what's the point of hating on the author?? He's doing a damn good job.
@OldSoul211 My condolences you're as stupid as the MC. Checks out though necroing a year old post, good job.
@Lameduck987 I'm glad all you want is attention so thank you thank you. It's usually never too late help and try to fix the ignorance of the narrow minded. Now, I have too genuinely and sincerely apologize too you young man. I was too late to help you. It's proven that using manure can lead to greener pastures and grow healthier, stronger plants but your brain is too corroded from that excessive amount of bullsh*t you keep in it. Poor kid, such a shame. Oh well, can't say I didn't try to help. Go live a little a more and try to experience life with others. Then possibly with a broader perspective, you'll be a little more open minded so you'll grow up and be a little more understanding of others. You disappointed me but I still love you, ok. Have a blessed day😇
Also. If you never ever went outside and screamed your opinion where the whole entire world could hear you, they could still look and see that you are bullshit. You gonna accuse me of necroing your 1 year old comment and degrade yourself to name calling like bit*h ass kid with pretend make-believe daddy issues. This f*cking thread is 3 years so what are you then when you commented 2 years later after the last comment? YOUR A DUMBASS. My genius comment offered a new perspective and a fresh outlook to new and old readers. I'm sorry for your ignorance and impulsiveness and your lack of self control for neither of those.
Comeback with either:
1. Something that adds to thread
2. Shows you have at least a little intelligence or common sense
3. If all you really want is more attention because you have nothing better to do with your time and grinding your last 2 brain cells into more ignorance just isn't doing it for you today, this is what you do. f*ck Off. And when you get there, f*ck Off from there too. Then f*ck Off some more. Keep f*cking Off until you get back here. Then f*ck Off again.
@OldSoul211 Get off your high-horse, jackass. I wasn't going to say anything, and didn't even read your whole post originally, but you made me read through it, and reread the past few chapters to refresh my context.
"It's usually never too late help try and fix the ignorance of the narrow minded" setting your grammar aside, saying this in response to being told you're necroing a post implies that you think of me as ignorant and narrow minded - me, who called out the ignorance of the MC and proposed several alternate things the MC could have done in this situation.
Meanwhile, you accused me of hating on the author, which I did not. I expressed my issues and tried to stay respectful to the author. "It's his story let him write the way he wants" if the author didn't want comments, they wouldn't post the story anywhere that could get comments. And before you respond about the author posting this for free, this is over 200 chapters into this story, their story drew me in with the premise, writing, etcetera - sure, it's the author's prerogative to write how they want to, but if you even try to say it's unreasonable for me to COMMENT on my frustration in a COMMENT section about something that I have invested hours and hours of my life reading, usually enjoying, and thinking about when something happens that ruins that enjoyment even partially... I could only call you NARROW-MINDED.
Are we not allowed to have differing opinions? Do you think your opinions are more valuable than others? Or are you just a troll attempting to frustrate people? I'm leaning towards the latter, but I enjoy ranting and venting, so I'm typing this. By the way, if you bother responding, I'm blocking you after this if that's an option since I assume you're a troll.
"I'm this guy that got isekai. I'm a fat introverted guy with no confidence. " do you assume I'm not introverted? Do you assume that I have confidence IRL? I am, and I don't. I CAN relate. And as for being smooth and super genius, I'm not asking for that. All I was asking is that the MC doesn't make decisions incredibly likely to lead towards the worst possible outcome given he's in a fantasy world where any random old man or lady could probably hypothetically get strong enough to destroy a building with a flick.
This is the type of story where we want to live vicariously through the MC. The MC, through the result of his own stupid, poorly thought out actions got into a situation where they are currently completely paralyzed (something I would consider to be a form of hell, especially with my ADHD and energy), and is basically being used as a tool to low-tier cuck (visual only, not literally ofc) himself.
I do NOT want to imagine myself in that situation. Maybe you do. Maybe you're a masochistic cuck, but I'm not. Maybe you'd be fine with other people staring at women that you love naked, but I'm not. Obviously, there's a few degrees of separation between me and this character, but it is still UNPLEASANT to read through in a story I've otherwise so far enjoyed.
The one who said you were necroing, I think, was the first person to actually insult a real person directly in this conversation, calling you stupid. But even before that, you were rather rude. And now you go around calling people ignorant, narrow-minded, dumbass, saying "f*ck off f*ck off f*ck off"
If you are not a troll, you need some help. Help I am not on enough of a high-horse to think that I can provide.
As for your 3 final points:
1. Claiming someone's opinion or view is invalid and shouldn't be shared is detracting from a thread, not adding to it, hypocrite
2. All I was originally asking is that the MC reacts with a tiny bit of intelligence or even a little common sense, and you didn't agree, hypocrite
3. I'm fairly sure you're just a troll that wants attention, but you once again bringing up ignorance in a convo that came about from you ignoring someone's opinion is rather ignorant, hypocrite
And, in case you have a short attention span, or you missed it, I'm just going to remind you that I believe you are a troll, and will be blocking you if it is possible. I just don't want you to think you've won or something if you respond to this when I don't respond to that. Because I won't. Have a stellar day / night.
@Dr.Smut @Dr.Smut my good God dude. Let's get a few things straight. Ok.
So first, I'm not a troll and didn't . Just emotional and attached to this story and character.
I will apologize and I'll admit that when I wrote my first comment, I was a little too aggressive and emotional with my wording and word usage because I was a little upset and agitated after reading quite a number of comments filled with their "criticism" basically saying, and I'll just sum it all up, how stupid and lazy the author and how terrible he is at what he does because he didn't do it a certain way. Yes it pissed me off but it wasn't a personal attack. I just vented the anger i was feeling from amount of frustration I was holding in and aimed it at EVERYONE, not just the ones who commented here. I was angry and throwing a tantrum and decided now or never so I threw my tantrum on thread this thread. Once again, I apologize. I was in the wrong for that but I didn't make it personal attack nor did I make my insulting. Just a personal rant, aimed at no one and everybody, and was equivalent to silently screaming in the mirror where no one can hear or see what your doing.
Now bare with me for my next opinion. For my conversation with lameass9000, I was just feeling like being an arrogant asshole in my reply to the opinion of lameass9000 was the proper response to his reply to my comment. Like I said before, I was a little aggressive in my original comment but it wasn't a personal, insulting, or aimed specifically at person. Lameass9000 made it personal when he attacked and insulted me after he read my rant. So I will not apologize for my response, for that is between only me and him. Which is why my reply had his username at the very beginning of it and worded specifically that aggressive because I chose to attack HIM right back. Therefore everything in my response, my reply, was directed at just him because no one else in the this thread was involved with his reply. So how can I hold anyone in this thread accountable for what comes out his mouth when y'all just minding your own business??
Which leads to my response to your first statement where you tried to make it all about our you for some weird and confusing reason
"It's usually never too late help try and fix the ignorance of the narrow minded" setting your grammar aside, saying this in response to being told you're necroing a post implies that you think of me as ignorant and narrow minded - me, who called out the ignorance of the MC and proposed several alternate things the MC could have done in this situation.
So I gotta ask, how can I be referring to you and calling you that when your referring to a comment that I wrote that CLEARLY had nothing to do with you nor had your name brought up and mentioned once as it was very obviously directed towards to lameass9000? If anything, I would call you "self centered" but I'll just label it as a misunderstanding for now.
Your next two statements please. What a doozy.
Meanwhile, you accused me of hating on the author, which I did not. I expressed my issues and tried to stay respectful to the author. "It's his story let him write the way he wants" if the author didn't want comments, they wouldn't post the story anywhere that could get comments. And before you respond about the author posting this for free, this is over 200 chapters into this story, their story drew me in with the premise, writing, etcetera - sure, it's the author's prerogative to write how they want to, but if you even try to say it's unreasonable for me to COMMENT on my frustration in a COMMENT section about something that I have invested hours and hours of my life reading, usually enjoying, and thinking about when something happens that ruins that enjoyment even partially... I could only call you NARROW-MINDED.
Are we not allowed to have differing opinions? Do you think your opinions are more valuable than others? Or are you just a troll attempting to frustrate people? I'm leaning towards the latter, but I enjoy ranting and venting, so I'm typing this. By the way, if you bother responding, I'm blocking you after this if that's an option since I assume you're a troll.
I didn't say anyone of y'all hated the author? I asked what was the point of "hating" on the author.
Dude what? I don't care if you and everybody else wants to share your opinion or thoughts in a comment for everyone to read my guy, f*cking comment away, freedom of speech so hell yeah man. So I really don't care. I mean hell, I didn't really find to much wrong with your opinion about the that personally conflicted with opinion and I would have enjoyed talking about those conflicting opinions (Which I will in sec)
What I do find unreasonable, however, is when people share their view and opinion on something which they didn't agree with and then express why they thought it was wrong and offer their insight into how maybe that particular scenario could have been solved and possibly improving the writer and the quality of the story(which is perfectly fantastic and a excellent ending to this scenario) then automatically label it as criticism because "if it's just my criticism, then that means I didn't say anything wrong because it's only criticism and the author can't get mad at me because that would be stupid because it's only criticism."(Still not technically an issue) Yes, it's very a very cringe and over dramatic exaggeration, but not far from the truth when you can clearly see that what they offered up as conflicts and the reasons why it is wrong to them was stupid as f*ck. Then, instead of asking the author a question about that something that didn't l doesn't make sense it but could have been easily explained so there can be some understanding or easily fixed by the author to make things clearer, their insight to fix it is just a bunch text filled with hate and ignorance. Only really saying how bad the other is because he wrote a MC that is dumb and if it was me I would have done this instead and because the MC didn't do what I they should have done, the author is lazy and I'm dropping the story.
Yes, mouthful of Yada Yada bullsh*t but the point I'm making is that we all have seen perfect examples of what I'm exaggerating about here. Somebody bit*hing about something that could actually be explained by the author or another reader and it was comments like that those that had me worked and when add the anger i was feeling to this PERV talking about I'm going to make you, boy over the moon and mountain I was. Damn I was lit
Like when you expressed your opinion about the bath scene. Perfectly reasonable frustration of the MC reaction and terrible way he responded to it and many valid ways to handle and resolve that he(the MC) could have used and made it more pleasurable for his readers to read. Because I would have personally transformed into a d&d wizard screaming "HEY YOU PERV. I USE A FIREBALL. IT'S A D20!!! That's a crit." And just set that to repeat until I ran out of mana or someone stopped me. But see, that's my line of thinking, not the MC. When I thought about who the MC is a character and as a person and who presents himself as to others, it was clear my line of thinking didn't fit him. One, he truly didn't like causing anyone any type of pain or doing harm to others. He's a big softie that don't want to witness harm done to others. And two, He's never been a situation like this and he wasn't prepared for it by no means so when he was put on spot, he froze and hesitated and ultimately made the wrong the choices but that's because he can't handle what he's not trained to do. Hell, he only had a little experience using a sword while fighting monsters, and no life experience to help him handle or cope with fighting a pervert civilian in a public bath house in the city using unarmed combat or martial arts. I mean he had plenty expertise on getting his fat ass beaten into the dirt at school by bullies but that traumatic experience wouldn't help him none. So instead of the author writing what we all wanted to happened and what we wanted the MC to do, he kept it very realistic and as true to the character as possible and I appreciate that.
NEXT!!
"I'm this guy that got isekai. I'm a fat introverted guy with no confidence. " do you assume I'm not introverted? Do you assume that I have confidence IRL? I am, and I don't. I CAN relate. And as for being smooth and super genius, I'm not asking for that. All I was asking is that the MC doesn't make decisions incredibly likely to lead towards the worst possible outcome given he's in a fantasy world where any random old man or lady could probably hypothetically get strong enough to destroy a building with a flick.
This is the type of story where we want to live vicariously through the MC. The MC, through the result of his own stupid, poorly thought out actions got into a situation where they are currently completely paralyzed (something I would consider to be a form of hell, especially with my ADHD and energy), and is basically being used as a tool to low-tier cuck (visual only, not literally ofc) himself.
I do NOT want to imagine myself in that situation. Maybe you do. Maybe you're a masochistic cuck, but I'm not. Maybe you'd be fine with other people staring at women that you love naked, but I'm not. Obviously, there's a few degrees of separation between me and this character, but it is still UNPLEASANT to read through in a story I've otherwise so far enjoyed.
Ummm yes and no. Yes, I was angry which led me to throwing accusations out in the air while I was ranting out my frustration. No, I'm not really assuming anything about anybody or you personally. I really dislike assuming about others when you have no idea of their past and what they live through and I apologize for that and I'm proud of myself for doing it. But you do have to admit that to certain extent, there is a certain number readers would found it to hard understand why the MC did what he did and then blame the author for being stupid before dropping the story after leaving some nasty super bias criticism that stems from that reason of not being able to relate. And no you may not want to be a super cool super smooth MC with genius intellect with OP abilities but these traits and qualities are really desirable by others and almost required to be given to the MC from the start or a later point in the story/ manga/ anime like it's a damn tradition or they'll be less liked by the wider view of the audience that only likes a MC of those traits in the stories of what they enjoy reading. And yes, as read about the decisions that the MC makes and how the author pens the details of the consequences of those actions and as he works them into the world that he's trying to build life into, I get what your asking and what you desire from your MC but what your asking of from the MC at this current time and place is impossible and would have broken character. Let's be honest or at least reasonable. In this current scenario, do you think it's possible that he's currently thinking that this dirty pervert that he's talking to about his plans might be a hidden master or a high level person capable of causing paralysis with just a touch OR is it more likely to play out like the author portrayed it happening. That's he's trying work this out in his head and now he's taking to long to make a decision because he's in the city now and he doesn't know how they operate and his future operations that he might have there, how far is to far, but he is trying to peep on my ladies so i really want to attack, stuck thinking, weighting his options while still holding a conversation with him. I'm sure we all know how this played out and why. Yeah it sucks he didn't do what we him do but probably went through the same process that most of us readers would find ourselves in if presented the same scenario. I wanted to burn him with fireball for even thinking about touching my women but that would have been a even worse scenario considering what I know now(no spoilers) so he didn't make the decision but at least he didn't make a worse one either.
When i mentioned that every body wanted to be the MC in the story, i was referring too being that cool smart OP MC from their favorite anime or manga my guy. Why did you even think i was remotely referring to the scenario of being paralyzed and forced to do something like?!? Seriously, how was that thought your first consideration of what I was saying and then you turn it into a damn possibly in your head for actual consideration?! You can't say that your not projecting your feelings now because that was one hell of stretch you made so you had to be thinking pretty damn hard about that too even come out your mouth to be put on paper
to make sure that it's clear, I would be absolutely livid if I was subjected to being paralyzed so I could be used as a stepping stone, a tool for his perverted goal of ogling my ladies and fantasizing about what he would do if given the opportunity. Just thinking about it leaves me no regrets if I decided burn him to crisp or split his throat from one side to other and watch his life drain out through his fingers and just before that last drop leaves him and he breaths for the last time, I'll heal him just to start the process all over again until he's properly trained. I wouldn't stop until he's to the point of every time he's thinking about being a slimy bastard that he would get physical and force some one to do something that they don't want to do just to get what he wants, every time he thinks that, his training would kick in and he'll be able to taste his blood in mouth and start hyperventilating as he struggle to breath. So yes, there may be something wrong with how far I'm willing to go but does this answer your quotation about whether I'm a masochistic cuck who would want to be NTR?
Next convo starter please!
The one who said you were necroing, I think, was the first person to actually insult a real person directly in this conversation, calling you stupid. But even before that, you were rather rude. And now you go around calling people ignorant, narrow-minded, dumbass, saying "f*ck off f*ck off f*ck off"
If you are not a troll, you need some help. Help I am not on enough of a high-horse to think that I can provide.
Yes I was slightly rude and aggressive with how I came off and could have been done in a more refine and eloquent way, i agree. And yes, lameassover9000 was the first to insult anyone and he chose me and didn't try to explain how or why(not saying that has to) he just tapped on my shoulder and ran back to his cubby hole wasting my time with bs. It was irritation and he provoke me first when he made it personal. But I've done explained myself so I'm fine with year. And I'm not a troll, i was just emotional and frustrated at the lack of understanding and the ignorance laced in their comments hidden behind the hate of their opinion they try to pass off as "criticism."
FINAL COUNTDOWN! GETTING CLOSE TO THE END
As for your 3 final points:
1. Claiming someone's opinion or view is invalid and shouldn't be shared is detracting from a thread, not adding to it, hypocrite
2. All I was originally asking is that the MC reacts with a tiny bit of intelligence or even a little common sense, and you didn't agree, hypocrite
3. I'm fairly sure you're just a troll that wants attention, but you once again bringing up ignorance in a convo that came about from you ignoring someone's opinion is rather ignorant, hypocrite
And, in case you have a short attention span, or you missed it, I'm just going to remind you that I believe you are a troll, and will be blocking you if it is possible. I just don't want you to think you've won or something if you respond to this when I don't respond to that. Because I won't. Have a stellar day / night.
One I never said don't share your your opinion. It's a just a f*cking opinion, it's like a asshole because everyone has one and don't give f*ck if you share it or don't. What I don't appreciate and will become very vocal about is when the opinion is shared, they don't write it like an opinion, they write it and treat what they said like it's constructive criticism. All that they've written down is the what they didn't like, which usually is just a choice that the MC or a decision that was made by the author(which is all fine and dandy to do). But the reasons they give for why they don't like are just so stupid that you can't even laugh at them because they are ACTUALLY SERIOUS ABOUT IT. And most of the things they they complain about can be easily explained by asking a simple question and an answer containing a very large amount logic and simple reasoning cam be provided for them. Instead, their reasoning boils down to how both the MC and author of just stupid and dumb for doing the because I would have this and this and that and because it didn't happen the way i wanted, my opinion is validated as proper constructive criticism and that means I'm right and the author is wrong so the story is bullsh*t because Yada Yada
All I'm saying is don't preach your bullsh*t opinions filled with even weaker opinions that are treated like actual facts and push it out like your "criticism" is right and helpful when it's filled with hate and insults thrown at the author. So I'm not hypocrite buddy.
2. How can I agree with something that I wasn't referring to since I was just talking in general. Even if I was talking to you about it, I still wouldn't agree with you on it. The point and reference your talking about, it was excellent way to show the mindset and thought process of the MC. What you wanted him to do would have been a character break because the current isn't prepared to handle something like that. It was showing how he was evolving as character and also showing how much further he has to go.
So I wasn't being a hypocrite because I was just venting in general and never actually mentioned or referred to you once. So instead of us talking it out with good old logic and reasons or just taking it with a good stride, you chose to comment on a reply, that never once mentioned you or came your way matter of fact, that I made to another user, and treat my words like they was a personal attack against you. Very very very very self centered. And how am I the hypocrite again? I'm glad you took the time to read comment so you could try to defend yourselves while throwing what little jabs you could but after breaking all you said into smaller pieces, more than half of everything you said is wrong because you based your argument on something that never referred to you and then you try to strengthen it up by putting in even weaker opinions of "all I want is for the MC to be a little smarter with his choices and then while you gave your criticism on how you thought he should have handled, you completely ignored the MC is at this point in the story and your trying to push the author into making the MC into more like what you want. Self centered and rude.
3. I'm not a troll I was just agitated and chose the wrong moment to speak.
FINAL CONCLUSION EVEN THOUGH I'M BEING RUSHED
You may not want to agree with the way i did it but my rant that consisted of strongly worded and straightforward opinion, and I'm not trying to sound like that guy right now or come off some type way, is still validated. I made a strong verbal case with actual even stronger and logical reasoning that's hard to argue against. So you don't like how I said what I said and you find it hard to even stand my presence, i understand. Even still, I proved the point I was trying and made it decently hard to disagree with. I mean, based on y'all's experience with what y'all have read and what you've seen said about it in the comments, how much was do y'all agree that I was right on? Honestly folks, keep it real. I may be wrong with how I said it, but everything I said was pretty right and spot on and y'all know it's true.😘🥰😍😋🫢😎
@OldSoul211 Dude your reply is longer than the freaking chapter, get a life.
@Lameduck987 yes, it is. I had hoped to answer in a simple enough way so that others wouldn't misinterpret my message.
Oh no worries, I live a wonderful life where I choose to use all the time I have in it to fill it up with moments of family and friends, love, joy and really whatever I choose to use it on including worthless pointless terrible moments like this. So thank you lameassover9000 for your analytical input once again and showing why your so fun to be around. I love you and pray that you blessed day
@OldSoul211 Thanks!