Losing inspiration~~~~
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I've been enjoying your story so far (i just don't like commenting)
My only suggestion would be to work on the pacing ? It feels like everything is moving really fast
Ok
Keep at it you're doing well.
Story's a bit clunky but I still enjoy it.
Dude , it is my first novel , but yeah thanks for the feedback