Ok guys. I've went back to the drawing board a little on all my stories and projects and I feel I am.ready to go forward again.
I will be posting a new chapter in a day or two,
BUT I ALSO EDITED CHAPTER 15 WITH A LOT MORE INFO TO HELP EVERYONE OUT...
before I post the new chapter, does anyone have any questions of the story so far?
-Gtmaxter
"where is the vanilla? and where is the slaughter of the sinners... And if I want both in the same story"
The main character has several issues he has to contend with when it comes to the vanilla.
1) timing, its only been about 26 hours of the actual story, but many years has taken place within it. So he really wants to curl into a ball and be cuddled A.S.A.P (Lofa's final days in his timeline could be a good side story mixed with Vanilla if you'd like)
2) Even with the knowledge of the future, he is still embarrassed about being proactive for intimacy.
3) I really want some damn sweetness too right now. But its at least 2 chapters away.
For the sinners, the big issue is that Yagami isn't just a prick, he's popular. Aloha only has Mayu, and Alofa now, but Yagami is surrounded by people that would make sure the fight between mayu and Yagami wouldn't end well. So unfortunately the evil bastards will live for quite a while...... there are also a SHIT TON of villains coming out if the woodwork, but a lot of them will be killed so I hope that helps.
-Emervoid
"He still feels relatively weak and with you almost giving us different versions of him it just makes the Aloha 2 seem like he has no chance of even remotely getting a good chance at life.
So my question is will there be more alternate versions of Aloha coming?
And will you actually give him a chance to use his Cannibalism skill more efficiently by which I mean using it on actual humans ?
Can Yagami die as well in the most brutal way possible and also Pls kill off the entire kingdom in the process"
I hope you read the chapter 15 edit, it gives a better glimpse at Alofa's Stats as an adult, so that can give a little idea how Aloha can grow. I have also put in the explanation of How the "Cannibalism" skill can evolve.
What hasn't been mentioned before (because it wasn't relevant yet) was stat jumps across the different grades, stat caps, and level caps. Suki has a long way to go.
I have been trying to leave subtle hints here and there that Aloha's(Suki's) current timeline, has been altered in more ways than one. The ripple effect caused by Aloha1 was actually a tidal wave and the consequences will appear later on. There will be different versions of Aloha and no one has to worry about a Deus Ex Machina saving everyone all the time in the future. Aloha already has a very powerful version of himself shown in chapter 17 and we don't know his motives yet, it'll get spicy.
Yagami needs to die, but despite him being a fucking asshole, he's not a pushover. His death will feel as refreshing as the purest spring waters hidden away from the world and given to you on your thirstiest day
I had a concern. Will the MC's love interests get more rape scenes from here on out?
Considering Yagami is behind their tails it wouldn't be too weird for it to happen again.
But the thing is you already used that card once so it would be redundant for the story if it keeps on happening
I'm not a big fan of of the R word, but I use it when relevancy will make it mandatory.
If you are worried about MC's lovers having s*x with others.... then yes I do have a couple more situations planned, however they will be done smoothly and with purpose. There will be more violence over everything though.
@BLuU I don't mind really as long as it serves the plot and doesn't seem too forced for a plot. Good luck 👍
@Twin thank you, I will try not to disappoint
He still feels relatively weak and with you almost giving us different versions of him it just makes the Aloha 2 seem like he has no chance of even remotely getting a good chance at life.
So my question is will there be more alternate versions of Aloha coming?
And will you actually give him a chance to use his Cannibalism skill more efficiently by which I mean using it on actual humans ?
Can Yagami die as well in the most brutal way possible and also Pls kill off the entire kingdom in the process
Answered in the post.
@BLuU I do hope he grows some balls and be more active as it goes I know years of being down is hard to get over without someone's support so I wish that his girlfriend will be the one to help him.
Also you didn't tell me what happens to the kingdom but judging from the story so far it will not go that way.
Unless they do something horrible to our MC.
@EmerVoid mentioning the kingdom will be too much of a spoiler. But will be answered in 10 chapters or less
where is the vanilla? and where is the slaughter of the sinners... And if I want both in the same story
Noted
Questions in the post.