Fun Time With Bubbles-Sensei
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[This novel has been published to Amazon and Google Playbooks. The entirety of volume 1, namely chapters 1-75--in addition to all the side chapters--have therefore been taken down. However, you can read chapters 75 and onwards for free.
https://play.google.com/store/books/details/CupcakeNinja_My_Sister_The_Villainess?id=cVXUDwAAQBAJ
https://play.google.com/store/books/details/CupcakeNinja_My_Sister_The_Villainess?id=cVXUDwAAQBAJ
...If you love memes, cute tree spirits and general random chaos fueled by weed and soda, then you, my friend, have come to the right place.]
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DOnt cuck me like this
Not the cliff dad, anything but the cliff @!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"up Each" --> "up. Each"
"Plsu" --> "Plus"
"Speak on my" --> "Speaking of my"
"abilties" --> "abilities"
"it's power" --> "its power"
"desendant" --> "descendant"
"you're likely" --> "you'd likely"
"It's a slow process building your body up." - maybe swap this around or something?
"mana too much will rot you" --> "mana, too much will rot you" I think?
"make sense every" --> "make sense of every"
"way the" --> "was the"
"a very big an area. Besides this" --> "a very big area. Besides, this"
Hmm so did the mom send him there to help his friend or did she arrange it and she's absolute scum? Tyvm for the chapter!
Oh and mind pointing it out when you think my fix is wrong? Would love to improve
@severinus3 Sure bro. I mainly get spelling errors or use commas too much myself but the first is just due to like negligence or sleep deprivation. Still, nice to see them pointed out for a quick fix. You dont gotta do the whole sentence tho, just gimme the words and describe where the error is at in the story and I can find it easy enough. Many thanks my dude
nice I like Spongebob. Also next chapter some people are gonna have a few more assholes then necessary. Thanks for the Chapppppp...
thanks for the chapter
Let's see!!
Satan's ass crack + a whole cathedral built of black jade (has the ability to seal) + aeil priests+ "angelic" sacrifice + it is a place they went to to find the mc's mother who kidnapped his friends + final boss =
Okeanos or whatever his name is sealed in there isn't it?!
The plot thickens