Author Note :
Well, looking at yesterday's poll make me think I did not need to wait for another day. After all, Reiko got 48 votes, while OC got 24 votes!
Then the love interest is officially Reiko <3
Enjoy the Chapter !!
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3rd POV
(Inside Monitoring Room)
All the teachers of UA looking at the monitor in front of them. Displayed on the monitor are students candidate. The screen changed a few times until stopped at a silver haired girl with pair of horns on her head.
The girl using a long sword cutting the robots with a big grin on her face.
"Who is that girl?" Cementoss asking white mouse? in the room.
"That is Nakiri Ayame. The former heir of Nakiri's Corporation. That girl caused a commotion on TV 3 years ago because she suddenly stripped off from her position as Nakiri's Corporation heir." The Mouse? in the room, Nezu, Principal of U.A answering Cementoss question.
"Nakiri's Corporation, you mean that big Corporation? Why do they strip her position as an heir?" Midnight the only R18 Hero in the room asked Nezu.
"They didn't publicly the reason, but there is a news that Nakiri's Corporation Owner, Nakiri Asano, had a fight with Nakiri Ayame that cause her stripped from her position as an heir." Explain Nezu.
"That's not important right now, focus on the exam." Said someone with an appearance like a homeless person, that person is the Pro Hero Eraser Head, Aizawa Shota.
"Yes, that's correct. Let's focus on the exam." Agreed Nezu.
The teachers focus their back on the monitor that shows various Examinees.
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1st POV
I running at my top speed while slashing and hacking some robots in my way. I did count my score, and I plan to stop when my score reaches 65. I don't want to become the first rank at this exam, that's why I don't give a damn about the other examinees and obtain rescue points.
My score right now is 67 points, I will stop at the next robot.
"And that's 69 points." I said while sheathed my sword.
"Huh, isn't my score dangerous? In a certain way." Looking at my score I realize my mistake.
"Damn, my score really dangerous. I will search for 1 more robot then, or my reputation will be at stake!" I said while surveying my surrounding, there are many half sliced robots laying on the ground but no moving robots were found.
"Well, I am too lazy to search it. Because my goal is reached, let's just watch the other examinees from the rooftop."
I jump to the nearest building rooftop. When I reached it Present Mic announced the remaining time for the exam.
"5 MINUTES LEFT!!"
"Wha, only 5 minutes left? Or rather it just 5 minutes since the exam starts? Nai wa~ how fast did I run, I never test my full speed at combat so I didn't realize it."
"Umm, what do I do now. There are still 5 minutes, hmmm…" I place my hand on my chin.
"Let's observe them then, I have nothing to do after all." I sat at the edge of the room observing the examinees below me.
After observing them for a minute, I got bored. I mean, they just do anything without any technique or style at all, they just use their quirk to destroy the robots and nothing more. This made me once again realize that this world depends too much on quirk.
So, because I got bored watching them. I start singing one of my favorite songs, 'Legend Never Die'. Unknown to me, there is someone that hears me singing.
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3rd POV
(Inside monitoring room)
On the screen, the figure of Ayame sitting at the edge of the roof singing is displayed.
"What is she doing?" Ask Midnight with a frown on her face.
"She is singing." Answer Nezu.
"I can see and hear her singing, but my question is why the hell does she sing when her task is accumulating points by destroying a robot?"
"The point she accumulated right now is the highest among the examinees, she destroys all the robots in her surrounding area already." Explain Nezu to midnight.
"She is strong, not only that. She is skilled." Add Aizawa.
"What do you mean by that Aizawa?" A blond haired boney looking man in the room asks Aizawa. The man in the question is no other than Toshinori Yagi or better known as ALL MIGHT.
"The way she uses her sword, she is well trained in swordsmanship. While the others only use their quirk, she use her skill to surpass all of them." Explain Aizawa. "Principal, isn't it time for the 2nd phase?" Add Aizawa while looking at Nezu.
"That's right." Said Nezu while pushing a button named Yaruki Switch. "The real exam will start now."
'The examinees are strong, do your best Midoriya-Shounen!' Thought All Might.
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1st POV
While I am singing the last part of the song, suddenly the ground started shaking. I saw cloud of dust start forming in the distance.
"Oooohh, is that the zero pointer? It's huge! Seeing it directly sure give an impact." I put my hand above my eyes observing the zero pointer in the distance. With my enhanced sight, I can see the zero pointer coming out from the cloud of dust.
"Hmm, can I cut it with my sword? Maybe if I use the wind pressure produced by Tsubame Gaeshi I can cut it. But.."
Before I finish my sentence, I see someone wearing a light green tracksuit jump in front of the zero pointer and punch it.
"..it's his time to shine. I will do flashy thing another time."
After I said that, Present Mic announce the end of the exam.
"TIME'S UUUUUPPP!!"
I jumped off the roof and walking towards the exit of the simulation city. Because other examinees did not change their outfits, I kept mine too. Walking toward the bus, we came back to the previous orientation location.
I go to the restroom again and use dress change to change my clothes to my 1st Set. After that, I contact my driver to pick me up at the previous location where he drop me off.
While waiting for my driver to arrive, I sent a message to Reiko.
Me : Hey Reiko-chan, Good work.
Reiko : Good work too Ayame-chan, how'd you do in the exam.
Me : I am doing good, I got 69 points huhuhuhu.
Reiko : You got 69 points!! I just got around 45 points.
Me : Well that's good enough Reiko-chan, at my area there is a lot of people who got score worse than that.
Reiko : I hope so
Me : Well Reiko-chan, I need to go now. I will message you again. Bye~
Reiko : Okay Ayame-chan. I will be waiting for your message then, goodbye.
While messaging with Reiko for a while, my ride's arrived. I enter the car and signaled my driver to start driving.
'The entrance exam is over, now is the time for Ayana's debut.'
I just finished reading the released chapters. Pretty good so far. While I understand that the MC is not really Ayame and is just a yakuza girl who looks like her, I still think it's kind of a shame that she's completely different from the actual Ayame, lol.
While reading this I was actually thinking about how the personality of the vtuber Ayame could seriously become the next symbol of peace, in a different way from All Might's kind and the kind Deku dreams to become.
"Her giggles that bring happiness to everyone's lives, her songs that soothe the pain in their souls, and her kind heart, which make her shine like a beacon of light amidst the deep abyss. The big bright smile of the number 1 hero brings peace to the world."
...got a bit poetic there, but that really would've been amazing and hilarious, lmao.
For the romance it would be good if you could make it develop slowly like you said, where they get closer to each other bit by bit. RN I honestly think it's going quite fast, bumping into each other once then getting close enough to casually text each other immediately after. Makes me wonder how she didn't have friends in junior high school despite being sociable enough to do this.
On another note, it might be interesting if she also becomes a streamer here, lol. That could be a source of development outside of the typical canon events.
These are just my personal opinions, ideas, and preferences as a fan of MHA, Ayame, and the story. Even if none of these happen I would still read it. You're the author so it's up to you to decide what to write, just putting it out here in case you find them interesting.
Good luck and have fun
Thanks for your opinion, the reasons ayame didn't have friend at middle school is because everyone is afraid of her.
and for romance i will do it slowly, right now they are just friend. No feeling at each other at all beside being friend.
and for the streamer thing, i guess i won't say anything about this because there will be something similar at future chapter
@RaizarP
Since I don't know Sh about vtubers I am happy i get to experience her personality instead of having to search it apart.
@TwigTree dont worry about the personality at all, i make Ayame didnt have the same personality as the vtuber ayame.. i just use her appearance as a base.
"And that's 69 points."
Motherfu-
Tsubame Gaeshi?! So she also mastered a 1 sword style. She must've hella talented if he could master both 1 sword style and niten ganyo style in less than 20 years. And also please explain her version of Tsubame Gaeshi cuz I confused it with Noble phantasm Tsubame Gaeshi.
"Ayame, can we have a talk? Don't, you can continue your training while we are talking."
um i think this was the previous chapter but why did you add the (don’t?) Its kinda weird
The Mouse? in the room
The Mouse?>The Mouse Principal
Nai wa~ how fast did I run, I never test my full speed at combat so I didn't realize it."
Isee what you did there(Kumo)
w8 its a yuri?! i didn't notice lol
Author Note :
Well, looking at yesterday's poll make me think I did not need to wait for another day. After all, Reiko got 48 votes, while OC got 24 votes!
Then the love interest is officially Reiko <3
I was whatching hologra(the one with the clones) and noticed(in 1:33) that Ayame model have a red tatto in her neck.
Thank you for this chapter!
Hold on a second, does she realize that if she kills the machines nobody else can thus making it harder for people to catch up to her compared to if she went at a slow pace to get that score?
Thanks for the chapter
Me : I am doing good, I got 69 points huhuhuhu.
Nice
The point she accumulated right now is the highest among the examinees, she destroys all the robots in her surrounding area already."
Points
Are the highest
Destroyed