Chapter 23: Redemption (1)
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"Kurai, you'd stay in this room even if you hear strange noises okay?"
Neji instructed Kurai who was sitting on her paws on the bed.
"What noises?"
Kurai asked with a tilt of her head.
"Like… screaming noises from Kimi. You get the gist of it."
"You're gonna beat Mama…?" She looked at Neji with a confused but horrified expression. "Y- you scum!"
Neji smiled wryly. "Don't get me started. Let's just say whatever would happen, she would enjoy it."
Without giving Kurai any chance to talk, Neji moved his hand. His fingers went behind her neck as he pressed a sensitive acupuncture point. Immediately, the self-proclaimed Death God lost her senses and fell unconscious.
With a shrug, Neji put a blanket over her small body and walked out of the room; locking the door from outside.
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Meanwhile,
Kimi was done making food. Today, it was mostly fruits and veggies, for some reason. Neji said it's better this way.
Life has been cruel to her ever since last year. The kid 1/3rd of her age has been ordering her around like a bïtch, and she was rendered unable to refuse him.
Did she have any choice? She has ruined his life, it's only fair that she would do anything he asks for, right…?
All this time, she has tried her best to reflect on her actions. She did what he asked, she obliged to all of his orders, she didn't even question when he went out and didn't return for a week. She had to somehow manage the calls with Gara, those were the hardest time of her life.
At this point in time, ignoring the fact that she has pleasured herself multiple times while remembering that night, she hasn't done anything sexual with him yet either.
Neji also seemed to not be interested in it. She recalled, he said his orders includes sex as well. But up until now, he hasn't done… much.
Except for making her lick his foot sometimes and make her go down on her four limbs while he sat on her back and played video games.
He seemed to find more pleasure in humiliating her rather than doing anything sexual. Maybe not pleasure… he was just punishing her for her actions. Truthfully, she was fine with this bit of punishment, as long as he never told Gara about what she did...
At first… Kimi barely held herself from crying. The anger she felt wanted to burst out of her eyes in the form of tears, but she didn't… she held still. Now, after a year, she has already gotten used to it.
His actions barely affect her emotional state now. In fact, she even finds pleasure in being humiliated by him… Maybe she has become a Masochist…?
'Not a bad thing,' she thought.
Unlike how she has said that one time in the car, she hasn't come to love him, not at all. But… her previous view of him did change a lot. He was a predator, she was his prey. In a relationship between the two, he should be at the top, naturally. Maybe this wouldn't have been the case if things were natural…?
Just… thinking about being ordered by him – and only him – she felt her inner walls clench themselves. To her, this was no lesser than "Love".
Fortunately for her, this had been Neji's plan, after he reconsidered something. She doesn't need to hold herself back for long. Now, she has reached a state where it's time for her to redeem herself.
"Oy, Kimi."
Kimi, who was serving food on the table, turned her head to the other side after hearing Neji's call.
"Ah, young master, food is ready."
Neji stared at her eyes with an indifferent gaze. Kimi's heart suddenly started beating faster…
'That look… is he gonna-' She gulped. 'H- humiliate me again?'
The [Bracelet of Intimidation] worked like a charm, causing Kimi to gulp in fear.
"Clear the table." He said. "Put the food plates on the ground. Strip naked and lay on the table."
He ordered, as to which, Kimi's mind went blank. She didn't expect him to ask her to go naked… is it finally time?
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If a person with a Flight quirk floated at the west side of Osaka city, they'd see an interesting scene happening on the highest floor of a tall skyscraper. Though they'd need a pair of binoculars to see it clearly.
Zooming in, at the penthouse's drawing-room, that was visible because of the crystal clear glass wrapping around the whole building, a blonde cat girl was laying on the glass table naked.
Her legs were hanging from the table while she was laying straight. Her gaze was fixed on the ceiling while her breathing was uneven. Right now, she was going through the most irritatingly pleasurable thing ever!
Slices of tomato, cucumber, orange, and leaves were served on her body. Slices of cheese were covering her forehead. Butter was sprayed over her slightly muscular stomach, and an orb of chocolate was served on her navel. Finally, two stripes of leaves were covering her nipples while petals of rose were covering her most private region.
Opposite to her, a child with shining mirror-like silver hair was sitting on a couch while biting on a slice of tomato.
The cat-girl, Kimi, finally broke the silence.
"Young master… W- what's the meaning of this?"
At her question, the child merely snickered. "Never heard of Food Play? I thought a pervert like you would know."
Kimi breathed out nervously.
"I am well aware of that… it was a rhetorical question."
Neji shrugged, got up from his seat, and walked closer to her, and spanked her thighs hard.
*Thrash!*
"Ahn-!"
"You're not allowed to ask me rhetorical questions." He stated in a heavy voice, at Kimi who released a sudden moan.
"Anyway, back to the point," Squeezing her ass once, he drew his hands back.
"Simply put, I am hungry. I am hungry for three things, food, information and sexual pleasure." He simply muttered. "This can do all three at once."
Kimi looked over the hunger for sex – since she knew he wouldn't go that far if she asked him to stop – and instead asked, "What information do you need?"
He narrowed his eyes. "I want to hear your explanation of your actions in that incident that happened a year ago."
Kimi's body stiffened. "What's the meaning of this? I- I have already submitted to you, why are you going back to that subject?"
"Mmm…" Neji licked his finger that had a slice of tomato on top of it.
"Truthfully, I have had enough humiliating you, I believe this is it." He simply said, making her eyes widen. "During our last talk a few months ago, I promised I wouldn't tell my parents, right? I have kept my promise until now."
They had already talked before once, but there was no explanation there. It was just Neji promising her that he wouldn't sell her, not that he ever planned to do so anyway.
He continued. "This time, I am kinda bored of this punishment thingy. If you have a solid explanation, I would surely forgive you. I'd even stop ordering you around. You'd be free."
'You'd be free-' That was a blatant lie.
Even if Neji did say he would stop ordering her, he knew that Kimi would never go back to being the same. She is too used to being ordered by him. In fact, from what he believed, Kimi would ask him herself to keep ordering as if he owns her – in case he does forgive her.
That's been the whole reason as to why he didn't ask for an explanation a few months ago and instead delayed this act, to begin with. At first, he wanted to give her a chance to explain herself just a few months after the incident – but he noticed something. She was starting to enjoy his orders.
The plan was working.
He had fully decided since he started the basis of the "master-slave relationship" with that collar on her neck, that he would break her and make her his.
It wasn't fully because of what she did, not exactly, it was in fact because she was irresistible. Timid girls are too hot for him.
He wanted her to accept him as her owner. The collar saying "Belongs to Neji" was the first step towards that, and by now… she really was his.
Even naked, she was still wearing that collar as proof of her existence.
So now, even if Neji says he would stop ordering her, Kimi would never be able to question where he is going, why Kurai can now talk, and even why she has become like that. It's not a bad thing, at least he believed it not, since she's enjoying it too.
Being ordered by him – and him only – has become a fetish for her. It's like a drug. Neji didn’t even try this time, she was just too perverted on her own.
"So,"
Neji walked between her legs and leaned forward with his hands behind his back.
Kimi's breathing got more stirring while she felt his breath hit her skin.
His nose went from her pussy to her navel slowly. His tongue came out, she could feel the wet machine gun of pleasure touching her skin.
"Mhm…" she failed to contain her moan.
The memories from that day, from the few kisses she shared with him, melted within her. She wanted to jump at him! Right now, devour him again!
But… this time, she was able to contain herself. 'No, Kimi. Not a second time.' She was stronger than last time. Her mind has been strengthened by the little boy in front of her.
She could feel Neji's tongue wrapping around her navel as it rolled around the ball of chocolate and took it in his mouth.
He raised his head again and licked his lips, leaving a trail of chocolate around his cherry-like lips.
"Finally, some good fucking food." He chuckled.
Meanwhile, Kimi was barely sane. Her body was getting warm and her breathing was hectic. She was in heat.
Seeing this, he grinned at her. "So, Kimi-'Onee-sama', why not start explaining everything you've got in mind?"
The best way to test her guilt, her current mindset, and her submissive self – would be to make her explain why she raped a 10 y/o while she is in here.
Would she succeed? Neji was deliberately making it hard for her.
Meanwhile, Kimi felt a tight sensation in her heart hearing the word 'Onee-sama'. It's been more than a year since she has heard it from his mouth.
"Hah…" Kimi breathed out. "Yes, young master."
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So he played a pro gamer move, he made Kimi like his orders (even if unwillingly). Now it's a win-win situation.
So... I'm a drug dealer and I know this guy that moderately likes drugs. Then, I somehow blackmail him to repeatedly buy drugs from me. Now, he's happy, because he has become addicted to drugs, and I'm happy, because I make money. It's a win-win situation.
You get it that this is a distorted logic to make, in a wicked way, right what's wrong right? Very ipocrite
He said it himself he is scum, why try to justify his behaviour lime this?
She still screwed up no matter how you slice it, a conscious or an unconscious decision, you would still have to bear the consequences.
@King.J.Elias te olvidas de quién comenzó ésto?, No fue otro que Neji el mismo se lo buscó, además si hablamos de culpa entonces Los 2 lo tienen, Kimi debió parar los masajes cuando la comenzó a afectar Y Neji como se dijo no tiene la mentalidad de un niño y sobre todo, es alguien con experiencia sexual como para notar que se está excitando así que los dos tienen la culpa , y si mal no recuerdo el autor dijo el prota no sería ni héroe ni villano pero lo que leo se inclina mucho a un villano no le veo haciendo algo bueno (y kyari no cuenta porque lo hizo como experimento para la manzana )
@Jampdarkness No Kimi is the one that got screwed over in this. Being able to handle a massage and being able to handle magic acupuncture massage are different. He basically ruffied her and raped himself. Then instead of listening to her explanation, which is understandable, he mentally traumatized her for a year and emotionally conditioned her to enjoy slavery, less understandable. At this point though, he’s right, a master slave relationship where they both do right for each other is probably the only happy ending.
Slices of cheese were covering her forehead
He's such a f*cking asshole.
At the beginning of this novel, he clearly hated the notion of raping that bit*h, but for me brainwashing your big sister figure to be your s*x slave is a hundred times worst than rape. Sure, she raped him. she needs to be punished in some way. But slavery is slavery. Not being a moralist at all, I would make her my s*x pet too, but I would have no problem in making that goddess bit*h suffer.
What annoys me is that, based on the maids character (and all the details provided from the previous chapters), she was supposed to have a good morals and distinct personality.
After all, she used to be a f*cking HERO.
So when she raped this f*cking asshole, she felt guilty and was even thinking of going to jail. Which is fair and reasonable. Hence, when this asshole of a kid started treating her like shit, I was honestly hoping for her to snap and just-- "f*ck it, I'mma just go to jail".
that scenario would have cahuse the two of them to clash and bring more flesh to their characters, while also establishing a new form of bond. It would be difficult for the author, but it would bring more drama and honestly would be more satisfying if done right.
However, she didnt. Instead, she developed a masochistic side that would only be controlled by that asshole. --- this scenario was honestly the "easy mode".
By becoming obedient, she was honestly no different than a f*cking puppet. Except a little bit horny. A flesh bag, a slave--- a type that honestly became bland and bland the more chapters pass..
So-- honeslty, i dont like where this is going.
But-- if the author manage strengthen her character even if she was being a pervert, that would be good. As long as she was still a "person" who has her own opinons, then i thinks it shouldnt be that bad.
So, please-- for f*ck sake--- just dont make her bland.
And if possible, this asshole of a kid should receive some lesson as well. Like maybe, a slap in a face or something. Cuz this f*cking sh*t never struggle hard.
where the hell is the character development?
more importantly, where the hell did all of the gamer stuff go?
oh wait, I know. that one time skip.
this "story" is basically just about breaking a cat girl through guilt. none of the characters have any depth. not even the MC, who specifically was against rape, yet is okay with psychologically breaking her? nah.
genuinely terrible. only reason I hit next is with the hope that maybe there's still an interesting story somewhere, but my patience is already running thin.
This is the point where I drop the story. I didn't several times when I should have, I thought it may get better. But the author has done a very good job in making the MC unredeemable. He's got no good characteristics and is a total ass to everyone while acting self righteous about it. These half baked justifications about his past aren't enough to even partially excuse him.
The characters are one dimensional and not logically cohesive. The only characters in the story so far are an asshole MC, 2 god enemies, 3 family members that love him unconditionally, and his 2 pets. The author started off with a character's personality in Kimi and then ignored it completely to write about his kinks. Any adult wouldn't get pushed around like this because of a child, and a hovering parent isn't going to let their 9 year old roam around the country freely because they have one guard. Nothing is consistent at all.
The plot so far has been mostly dungeons and him whining. This is terrible.
"Finally, some good f*cking food." He chuckled.
Tftc
Sh*t mc. Does things without thinking. Illogical Plot armour is what is keeping him alive. The author is making things in order to try and develop the character. This whole r*pe thing should not have happened in the first place. If he wanted to leave, he could just pressed kimi’s pressure point instead of giving her a pleasurable massage. Don’t tell me he didn’t know her quirk didn’t have have a drawback because what’s the use of giving the mc observation skill if he doesn’t know how to use it. Also stop giving time skips if you aren’t going to progress the story at all. There are many other problems too. The story was going fine even if you considered the illogical situation of a 10 year child going on a trip and despite the author showing how his parents are overprotective they can’t do anything about his demands. I mean, children always throw a tantrum to do things, it doesn’t mean you give in to them. They should have atleast made him till 16-17. And about the whole thing about his flying and with all might. What were the guards there for if they can’t stop from leaving and are just observing as he disappears and just reporting. Just imagine that instead of all might, a villain was the one who noticed the mc. He would be dead