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Jade is a strong-willed woman who will do anything to reach her goals.
Eve, a slightly shady but hard-working consultant. It was strange that she didn't remember interrogating me… or even the events surrounding it. But then her abilities in battle were precise, calculated, and in the end, we survived because of her.
Vivian Heart, a tenacious girl with a seeming heart of gold. Justice was her priority, and she still has a long way to go in terms of fighting and decision-making, but… she is a genuinely kind individual.
Then there’s Lana Pasco, the little sister of the one they call a goddess, Abigail Pasco. They have a cult following that even has the chance to rival the Radiants if they don’t keep tabs on them. I fought Lana… I’m just lucky none of their followers retaliated against me, I guess.
But something was captivating about Abigail. For a brief moment, after she suggested "dancing for her…" as ludicrous as the idea was, it came into my mind briefly. There’s a reason why… people follow her, I guess.
And then…there was the human and demon, Mellissa Ann Cafree. She was dangerous and someone I better avoid if I wanted a longer life. But then she had another side to her that Jade brought out. I… have no idea what to make of her. All those kisses and touches were like sensory overload for me. Mellissa… is a lot to take in.
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[ROUTE POLE CHOICE # 2]
Talk to Jade about the investigation. (Jade) LOCKED UNTIL 3 ROUTES ARE COMPLETE.
Go look at phones. (Vivian Heart)
Look into the investigation more. (Eve Seed)
Search the Baron Group for clues. (Lana Pasco)
Question the Baron Group Leader (Abigail Pasco)
Pick up supplies. (Mellissa Ann Cafree)
Supporters receive 2 + Votes. (3 Votes)
Supporters:
@Emilovesdoubles
@Yati
@tounokuraikenja
@Tiffernickle
@Suou
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Vivian Heart Votes: 2 6.9%
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Eve Seed Votes: 3 10.3%
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Lana Pasco Votes: 1 3.4%
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Abigail Pasco Votes: 6 20.7%
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Mellissa Ann Cafree Votes: 17 58.6%
The votes haven't changed in around 2 weeks so I'm locking the voting here. Mellissa Ann Cafree is the winner.
Can't wait to read more of this and discover more about the characters and setting.
Thank you for telling me how you're enjoying the story and feedback as a writer. You can ask my editor, I struggle a lot when writing this story but the challenge is fun an exciting. I'm very pleased that you enjoy the world building. I try to keep it so as you learn more about the characters, you explore the lore and world alongside Feodora.
I am really glad you believe this story is helping me grow as a writer. That's all I want to do and this comment made me so happy!
Thank you for lurking and reading! It means the world to me! Hope to see you when the next route begins!
Where's the option for Feodora to snap and become the evil overlord that enslaves the world? You know the one where she has a vast harem for her and her seven generals to enjoy before plotting a way to invade other realities?
Might be in one of these routes where the villain or heroes get her angry enough to show the necromancy and possession side of her.
Can't say which one though.
Aww... I was hoping for Abigail...
Congratulations on finishing the first route. The drawings look like they are part of the plot too... As if time just got reset and Feo is forced in a loop until she gets it right
Ohh, I'm sure the drawings are important!
Who knows what will happen. But it looks like Mellissa is winning by a long shot. Don't worry, the longer we wait the sweetest the story will be.
I'm just going to state this, because I'm speculating to the possibilities. What would happen if all the routes are finished even the one with Jade? Looking at these blackened images I suppose that Feo will surely be unable to possess those memories anymore.
Those are some excellent theories! If the same thing happens as we go throught the story, we have to question what the meaning behind it is. We won’t understand until we see how Feodora interacts in route 2. Can't wait!
Those grey scale pictures
So ominous looking!
So creepy!!!
So fast!!!!!!
@Yairy I am speed!