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Hello
I'm going to be completely honest, the rewrite isn't going well. I just don't know what I want from the rewrite anymore. What does everyone think if I just continue the story from where it is but remove some of the characters and change some names? The main problem would be the sudden change between names but if its popular enough I might go back and change the names in the old chapters.
so what does everyone think?
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hmm, I reckon give it a try and if you enjoy it maybe rewrite the entire thing with the new characters and names after
In my opinion, your story is something like the creation of the beginning of time, I personally like your story because it gives indications that it will show the evolution of everything while the protagonist follows, personally I loved how the story was going, just taking out a little more of the jokes since this story seems like it would be better with a more serious tone, but that's personal.
I just want to see the passage of time and how the Goddess will change over it
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For me i think just continuing this story is better
I am good ether way rewrite form the ground up or continue with what you got and eventually have a idea to write a new story
At this point I think it would be better to just start over.
Depends on what direction you wanna do.
A world of almost nothing that the gods develop I.E. her
She joins into an already developed world and makes a religion to get stronger or something
I can't really think of more oof, but do remove the crazy yandere I hated her as a character. Just thrown in for plot.
Just. Abandon this one and add a link to the new version.