The pain was even fucking worse than getting Nox’s blood injected into me.
As the heart floated over, the thick ominous dark fog surrounded my body and started to force its way inside me through everywhere it could, it was painful, imagine if nails decided to come stabbing everywhere in the body and then eventually entering it through everywhere it could, ears, mouth, nose, you name it. (Yes, even there…)
That’s enough about the fog, lets move on to the main course, the heart.
As it approached me, I was already in pain and tears, so the least I could do is just get ready to scream because I knew it’s going to hurt like a goddamn bloody fucking bitch itself.
When it finally floated towards my chest, more precisely where the heart is, I braced myself.
As it finally started to enter, it melted a hole through my clothes, and when it finally touched my skin, it was like acid was splashed onto where it touched (I believe I don’t need to explain the chemistry for this), I felt how my heart just fucking exploded and the new Devil’s heart appeared in its place.
I coughed up blood and then coughed up a lot more. After coughing blood for a couple of good minutes, I passed out from suffocation.
‘Wait, am I in the same place when I was dead and got the vampire blood?’ I asked no one in particular.
‘Yes, in short this your mind.’ A familiar voice responded. It was Nox.
‘Mother!’ I shouted and ran towards her.
‘You should stop, someone else is here.’ She told me and I stopped.
That was when a voice so soothing, I could almost forget the pain that I went through just now. It spoke in a calm, composed manner almost as if it was royalty.
‘You are the first one to accept me into your body, state what is it that you want.’ Someone spoke.
‘Introduce yourself, then I will tell you.’ I stated grumpily, because I couldn’t hug mother.
‘I am Lythias, the only Devil primordial left. Now state me what you want.’ The voice introduced herself as Lythias.
‘I know what you should ask.’ Nox immediately started to whisper.
‘I know what I want.’ I told her.
‘Then state it, my child.’
‘I want your knowledge and power, every last bit of it.’ I told her.
‘Knowledge is easy I can bestow it upon you, but to bestow my power upon you, you will need to get stronger. In order to obtain the ability to contain it within your body.’ She agreed quite easily.
‘Well, that was surprisingly easy.’
‘Wait a damn minute.’ I told Lythias.
‘What, my child.’ She asked me.
‘By saying that I’m not strong enough, does that mean you will also be staying inside my head like Nox over there?’ I asked her whilst pointing at mother.
‘Yes, I will.’ She spoke.
‘Oh great, another freeloader…’ I mumbled.
‘I’m not a freeloader, I’m your mother now, if you would remember!’ Nox shouted.
‘Anyways, it seems like I can get back to my body, so just wait a bit.’ I told her. As I finally woke up, I felt a searing pain on my back, I immediately looked at my wings, I saw that they have these dark purple lines that were pulsating with every beat of my new heart. I looked at my wings again after the pain calmed down.
Looks like I look even scarier now, at least I will scare everyone easier.
‘Hey Lythia, Nox, what is that?’ I asked both of them.
‘I know that it’s a curse of some sorts, don’t know what kind though.’ Nox spoke first.
‘It’s a simple curse that only affects your presence, making it appear scarier than usual.’ Lythia answered.
‘Wow, you know a lot Lythia.’ I said astonished.
‘What about if I fold my wings then, what happens then?’ I asked.
‘By theories that I know, there should be no repercussions from that.’ She explained to little dumb me.
‘Anyways, I need to do something about my clothes since there is a massive hole thanks to a certain someone.’ I spoke, implying that it was Lythia’s fault.
‘W-w-wait! This isn’t my fault! I only made a spell that would protect my heart and would merge with anyone compatible, honestly I don’t care what you will do with my power.’ She said, feelling a bit uneasy about the actions that she didn’t control.
‘A-anyways, fancy meeting you Nox.’ Lythia to Nox.
‘Yeah, never thought that I would meet you here Lyth.’ Nox replied back.
‘Wait, you two know each other?’ I asked them.
‘Yeah, Lythia here is like a sister to me.’ Nox said.
‘And Nox is my cute little sister.’ Lythia spoke as she hugged Nox.
‘Stop, stop, stop! You’re suffocating me!’ Nox shouted at her whilst blushing a little bit.
‘Ah, sorry I missed my cute little sister.’ Lythia told her.
‘Anyways, Lily, Lythia here would be your aunt now.’ Nox told me.
‘Wait, my Little sister has a child now?!’ Lythia was practically screaming.
‘And there goes that composed, almost royalty-like image of you…’
‘Lythia don’t scream inside my head, you can chat reminiscing the past whilst I try to think about my survival, also are there any good weapons here?’ I asked Lythia.
‘I believe from what I felt there should be at least one magic sword or something along the lines.’ She told me.
I went to look for it, after looking around for a minute or two I found it.
‘Yeah… Don’t tell me I’m going to get another curse by touching this thing.’ I said, whilst looking at the sword.
It was dark, more precisely black at the handle and then gradually changing into dark purple on the blade, it was looking really nice in the dimly lit cave room here.
‘Ah, it must be the sword I felt, because that’s it.’ Lythia affirmed me that this was my target.
As I took it, I felt a searing pain inside my left hand now.
‘Yo, what the fuck now?!’ I shouted at Lythia for being careless.
‘Don’t worry, this sword is able to take your mana without being outclassed and it doesn’t break, the only thing that is bad, is only that it’s taking your lifeforce away, more accurately your lifespan, but since you are a vampire and now a devil at the same time, meaning your lifespan is infinite so the only thing it can take away from you is your mana, and the pain you felt was the curse embedding itself inside your arm for storage of the sword, if you will it, the sword shall either appear or disappear from inside the storage.’ Lythia explained.
As I looked at my left arm, I saw a black rose rise from my palm and spread towards my shoulder, it stopped after reaching my shoulder.
‘If this is a curse, could you at least tell me more about it?’ I asked her.
‘It was not harmful for you so I didn’t bother.’ She told me.
‘Then tell me beforehand next time, because this is my second curse in one day.’ I told her.
‘Okay, I will warn you the next time then.’
and then eventually entering it through everywhere it could, ears, mouth, nose, you name it. (Yes, even there…)
sounds like the plot of some slime hentai.
Yes.
She is the child of 2 sisters..
SWEET HOME ALABAMA~
YURII IS THE BEEST~
just in case that you didn't read right
as far as I can rember my work, she is the daughter of Nox and Lythia is her aunt
anyway, take this work as you like it
@green_ink yea the aunt thing reveal came a chapter too late.
Nox is the mother since she made her a vampy so i thought lythia is also the mother since she made her a primordial demon. So yay alabama yuri. You cant change my mind anymore it is done already.
So...Yes or No on flex taping your English? I've spotted a few- okay, A LOT of mistakes.
YES
I'm still trying to hold it together somehow.
Like, I genuinely read this chapter furiously before uploading to see if there are any mistakes, I spotted a couple and changed them into, let me guess, an even worse sentence than it already was.
The worst fact is, that my English is PRETTY OKAY? at least when dealing with my teacher, who definitely has experience.
It's so hard...
@green_ink I'll start in about an hour. I was busy earlier...and you replied at 2 am and I was asleep
@green_ink MY. f*ckING. GOD. ALMOST THE ENTIRE CHAPTER HAS MISTAKES. Are you sure you read this...?
Also, do the characters have accents or something? If so then some of the lines would make a bit more sense...not by a noticable amount though...
This is worse than all the previous chapters. Okay, okay, I'll stop complaining now and start with the corrections.
I was fine when I was reading this since I didn't really mind or pay attention to the horrendous amount of typos and mistakes, but...I WANNA RIP MY HAIR OUT NOW THAT I NOTICED THEM- AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
@Ambly even though I tried putting extra attention for this chapter I still f*cked up.
I even f*cked up double than on previous chapters, as you said.
But I still thank you for going out of your way to point out those mistakes.
@green_ink
The pain was even more f*cking worse than getting Nox's blood injected into me.
The pain was even f*cking worse than getting Nox's blood injected into me.
As it finally started to enter, it melted a hole through my clothes and when it finally touched my skin, it was as if acid was splashed onto that place (I believe I don't need to explain chemistry), I felt how my heart just f*cking exploded and the new Devil's heart appeared instead.
As it started to enter, it melted a hole through my clothes, and when it finally touched my skin, it was like acid was splashed onto where it touched (I believe that I don't need to explain the chemistry for this). I felt how my heart just f*cking exploded and the Devil's new heart appeared in its place.
By "that place" you mean her boob? Lol.
Yes, it is "its" lazy to explain so google it.
I coughed blood and then coughed a lot more. After coughing blood for a couple of good minutes, I passed out from suffocation.
I coughed up blood, then coughed up a lot more. After coughing blood for a good couple of minutes, I passed out from suffocation.
That was when a voice so soothing, I could almost forget the pain that I went through just now, spoke in a calm, composed manner almost as if it was royalty.
That was when a voice so soothing, I could almost forget the pain that I went through just now. It spoke in a calm, composed manner almost as if it was royalty.
'Well, first introduce yourself, and then I will tell you.' I stated, grumpily because I couldn't hug mother.
'Well, Introduce yourself first, then I will tell you.' I stated grumpily, because I couldn't hug mother.
'I am Lythias, the only one Devil primordial left, now state me what you want.' The voice introduced herself as Lythias.
'I am Lythias, the only Devil primordial left. Now, state what you desire.' The voice introduced herself as Lythias.
'Then state, my child.'
'Then state it, my child.'
'Knowledge is easy I can bestow it upon you, but to bestow power upon you, you will need to get stronger, in order to obtain the ability to contain it within your body.' She agreed easily.
'Knowledge is easy as I can bestow it upon you, but to bestow my power upon you, you will need to get stronger. In order to obtain the ability to contain it within your body.' She agreed quite easily.
'What my child.' She asked me.
'What, my child?' She asked me.
'By saying that I'm not strong enough, does that mean that you will be staying inside my head also just like Nox over there?' I asked her whilst pointing at mother.
'By saying that I'm not strong enough, does that mean you will also be staying inside my head like Nox over there?' I asked her whilst pointing at mother.
looked at my wings, I saw that they got these dark purple lines that were pulsating with every heartbeat of my new heart, after the pain calmed down I looked at my wings.
I saw that they have these dark purple lines that were pulsating with every beat of my new heart. I looked at my wings again after the pain calmed down.
'Hey Lythia, Nox what is that?' I asked both of them.
'Hey Lythia, Nox, what is that?' I asked both of them.
'By theories that I know, there should be no repercussions from that.' She explained to the little dumb me.
'By theories that I know, there should be no repercussions from that.' She explained to little dumb me.
'Anyways I need to do something about my clothes since there is a massive hole thanks to someone special.' I spoke implying that it was Lythia's fault.
'Anyways, I need to do something about my clothes since there is a massive hole thanks to a certain someone.' I spoke, implying that it was Lythia's fault.
'W-w-wait this isn't my fault! I only made a spell that would protect my heart and would merge with anyone compatible, honestly I don't care what you will do with my power.' She said that felling a bit uneasy about the actions that she didn't control.
W-w-wait! This isn't my fault!
She said, feeling a bit uneasy about the actions that she didn't control.
"Felling"
'A-anyways fancy meeting you Nox.' Lythia spoke to Nox.
'A-anyways, fancy meeting you Nox.' Lythia said to Nox.
'Yeah, never thought that I would meet you here Lyth.' Nox called back.
'Yeah, never thought that I would meet you here Lyth.' Nox replied back.
'And here goes that composed almost royalty-like image of you…'
'...And there goes that composed, almost royalty-like image of you...'
'Yeah… Don't tell me I'm going to get another curse by touching this thing.' I said, whilst looking at one sword.
'Yeah... Don't tell me I'm going to get another curse by touching this thing.' I said, whilst looking at the sword.
P.S: Is there only one sword there or are there more?
As I looked at my left arm, I saw a black rose rise from my palm and spread towards my shoulder, after reaching my shoulder it stopped.
As I looked at my left arm, I saw a black rose rise from my palm and spread towards like shoulder, it stopped after reaching my shoulder.
'If it was a curse, could you at least tell me about it?' I asked her.
Note: is she asking about the curse that she got from the sword or another one that is "off-screen"? If it is the one from the sword then,
'If this is a curse, could you at least tell me more about it?' I asked her.
'It was not harmful for you so I didn't even bother.' She told me.
'It was not harmful for you so I didn't bother.' She told me.
'Then next time tell me beforehand, because this is my second curse the same day.' I told her.
'Then tell me beforehand next time, because this is my second curse today/in one day.' I told her.
/ means you're free to choose either one.
'Okay, I will warn the next time then.'
'Okay, I will warn you the next time then.'
Sorry this took so damn long. Something came up while I was mid-way through and I had to stop.
Okay, now for the rant...
I'm joking. I ain't mad.
@green_ink
@green_ink It's all good, so your welcome. Oh, uh, about the "twice" thing...it's almost 4 times more f*cked up.
Now I'm wondering, Is that why there's an "I'm sorry" at the start?
@Ambly Yeah, I figured that this was going to be bad, but not this bad.
You can kind of say that I predicted the future with that statement.
@green_ink Hahaha...yeah.
@Ambly I just finished editing and proofreading tomorrows chapter, I hope you are ready for another mountain of mistakes to point out.
Just a note, I did my best to somehow correct my English there but I'm not sure if it turned out well, as for this chapter I will edit it tomorrow because it's time for me to sleep but I'm gonna go watch anime instead.
@green_ink ok... *Gulp*