I absolutely love this book, yes, the story could've been executed in a better way, but it still deserves the love it gets.

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after reading this for some more time. I can proudly say that this starts as sh*t and only gets better. The writing that is.

But still, as for someone who isn't a proffesional writer this is good.

Also just like the author said, I also feel sorry for the main character.

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That description alone got me laughing and wheezing so damn hard I could barely breath properly.

The story is ok (I f**king love it tho). The magic is confusing, so be prepared for that. Tons of swearing and cursing so it ain't for some people (like the description said). So far I found it a very good read. There are some things that make no sense, example: the end of Arc 2 Chapter 12 (Read the Author's comments). Overall it's good for someone writing for the first time.

I feel bad for the MC. I wanna rip that f**kface of a father to shreds.

Note: I'm a horrible reviewer, so I just put whatever was on my mind into this. Might update it when there's more chapters.

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It's not bad but I didn't find it a highlight either.

I have many points to complain but no points to praise, but I still didn't want to give the idea that this work is not worth it.

But I still feel obligated to speak as such here I am, be aware that there may be spoilers ahead.

- The author puts comments in the middle of the story, this is more of a personal problem than a defect, but for me this breaks the immersion in reading.

- There is an attempt at tragic drama but there was no development in the characters involved to make you develop an attachment to them.

- The protagonist causes a massacre of children because they knew her name and wanted to protect her identity, then, for soon after that, she massacred a village as a message to the ruler who knew her identity to be careful with her neck, that is, the massacre of children did not serve as a nothing, she didn't intend to hide that she was alive or anything, at most, it prevented her adventurer identity from being revoked, but that so far there hasn't even been an identity verification scene, they only allowed passage after seeing the document. (She can as well use magic to enter hidden but whatever)

- Apparently the heroine who has to kill the enemy will be an artificial character, she discovered the protagonist's reason for hatred, is treated like trash by her supposed allies for a short period of time, then gods appear saying that she has the duty to kill the protagonist and before she says she accepts or not they wax the oracle and give her power.

- The gods waited for the protagonist to become a demon lord to try to create a countermeasure, if they were wanting to avoid disaster they should have stopped the idiot who created the demon lord instead of watching while eating popcorn.

Anyway, these are my frustrations when reading the work, but I don't intend to drop it or anything, I'm not saying it's bad, but it's not perfect either, the author said that it's the first time he writes a work, so maybe who knows in the future it does some kind of more robust reboot.

-- Edit, The author commented some points that I quoted here, then I cutted what I accepted as he explained.

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