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INSUFFICIENT AUTHORITY DETECTED
INITIALIZE PLAYER TERMINATION PROCESS
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THANK YOU FOR PARTICIPATING
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How can this be? He made sure to do as his father told him to,
“No, this Can't be,” He thought,
“I don't want to Die. I can't Die,”
“I still have many great things to do, many beautiful girls to conquer,”
He tried to scream, but no voice came out of his mouth.
He could only float there in the dark void waiting for his inevitable doom.
“Why?”
His father has assured him that the blood pill would allow him to have sufficient points,
His body started to fade away as he could no longer feel his legs.
“No. Please, No,” he thought,
“I was supposed to be a protagonist who tramples all his enemies under his feet, like in a fantasy novel,”
“why?”
Then in his last moments, he had a crazy idea,
“Could it be him?” he did feel a slight murderous intent coming from him and that bitch.
“No, that's impossible. No one can interfere with the test. Father assured me of that.”
And with that, full of questions and full of regrets, Guy's soul was completely disintegrated.
His soulless body collapsed on the black marble floor in the jade hall.
TERMINATION COMPLETE
The shimmering blue screen displayed it's last message in the empty void.
Seems a waste of chapter. Must have been one of the shortest chapter I have read. Even contains no important detail aside from someone dying. I mean I have to admit it was satisfying knowing his actions before and what he plans on doing. Still, a waste I think just for him.
Also, just 'killing intent' could do that? Surprised no one has discovered it yet. Considering family feud, drama, and politics. For example if his step brother is the same age as him, he would probably die due to the sheer great wish of Luke for him to die.
I was supposed to by a protagonist who tumbles all his enemies under his feet, like in a fantasy novel
... to be a.... *
It is likely since it is killing intent at a very precarious point in time (namely when you have a headsplitting headache while stressing about potentially dying), most people at that point are probably concerned about themselves.
Furthermore even if it is semi-common occurrence to die from that how would others know, it results in the same thing as not having pure enough bloodline and stuff
What the hell is this chapter
@Akaichi Sorry for the mistakes, I'm not a native speaker
The author last time MC used a bug for authority, and bought abilities that depend on authority, isn't it dangerous to do that? why not get skills and class that require high authority for purchase, but do not require authority to use (I suppose, as soon as this bug is found, the system will recalculate authority and assign 2-3 authority levels)
And this time, I hope the MC will get a class that does not raise questions, because last time he chose not combat skills and not a combat class ... (and the class itself was questionable, in addition, it demanded an unattainable level of authority, which looked like trap for bug user)
combat skills would require matching attributes, while noncombat ones only dippends on authority and level. The protagonist is not that gifted, so he has to maximise the return of his spent points.
very powerfull protagonists are not intersting by them selfs, while those who can use their limits to their advantages are.
He is now in a modern urban settings, so combat skills make no sense for him.
@Akaichi I liked the skill set in the first version of the book, but I didn't like the choice of class (there are definitely enough combat classes that do not require talent from the user)
well, the MC chooses a non-combat class, why use these genres of Action, LitRPG, Martial Arts if the MC is practically pointless to increase the level, authority, study martial arts, to raise the characteristics means you don't need to complete quests either ... in the end, why are all these settings?
"Slave Harem" this tag already says that the girls come complete with a slave seal, the MC does not even need to look after them to get them into the harem ...
MC is a young master who knows the future, uses bugs of the system, has slaves and a family that will protect him ...
in general, with such settings, the story will not be interesting.
And why can't the system find a user who constantly uses unlimited authority?
Personally, I don't like how MC treats slaves (he doesn't care what a slave feels or wants a slave) with Lily - it's not so bad, because she's a girl in love, but with twins ... (twins are just ordinary girls with there was no choice and the MC forces them to sleep with them on the very first night, thereby scaring them so much that they cannot fall asleep ... as a result, the MC had to influence their emotions in order to remove the feeling of fear - which is similar to mind control ) I understand that, by definition, a slave has no human rights ... but does the MC need a wife or a doll that simply obeys?
@himm Not sure what the first version of the story was like but just because the MC isn't a martial specialist doesn't mean he won't have subordinates or competitors who are.
As for slavery, it is still early days so I reserve judgement for later but as I can see it's not that the MC likes the system of subjugation but that for now, he is powerless to reform it. He must embrace the trappings of society in order to rise up and reshape it. But all that being said slavery is gross and repugnant so I hope change comes fast. Its usually used in webnovels as a way out of writing a nuanced MC who inspires loyalty/trust in his/her subordinates and instead forces loyalty in order to advance the plot. Let us see where the author goes with it.
As for the twins that must be the first draft as I haven't seen any mention of it thus far. I really hope the author doesn't go down the rape/forced s*x route as it's a massive turnoff especially when the MC is cunning and intelligent. I'd rather watch him use schemes, strategy, and shadowy machinations to advance himself and earn loyalty than abuse his status and force others to bend to his whim.
Damn!! almost got me....
Well that was a fun journey. All I need now is an epilogue
R.I.P Guy i thinked than he was the first mob of the story but not he was too insignificant
Rip Guy, you were a bastard and will not be missed.
Nice
Mother fu*ker!! You almost had me there!
Tftc