“It’s been a while,” said the lady at her desk, greeting me as I entered without taking her eyes off her paperwork.
“Yeah, it has. How have you been lately?” I replied, easing onto one of the sofas in front of the desk.
“Oh, you know the usual, engulfed in reports and dealing with new issues,“ she fiddled with her pen. “Especially since someone likes to goof off and play pretend instead of doing her part.”
That elicited a giggle out of me. “She never changes does she?”
“Nope, but that’s one of the things I love the most about her,” she grinned. “Anyways. How are you? As well as Kna’Ve and the girls?”
“The same old, same old. Happy to be here. Any time away from those fools with sticks stuck up their tail fins is a good time. The girls were rearing for something to do after being stuck in the capital for so long.”
“Ah, so they’re coming too? That's excellent,” She replied as she moved from her desk, splaying herself out on the other sofa.
“Yeah, they’ll be here in a couple of hours. I believe Mayari is supposed to be coming for training as well? But is it okay for you to be so relaxed during work? Aren’t you worried about tarnishing your image?” I teased.
“It’s fine, it's fine,” she waved. “Nobody is brave enough to barge in my office unacknowledged anyways. That being said, you seem to know why I called you here seeing as you decided to bring everyone with you.”
“I assumed it’s about the resonances?” I asked with a finger on my lip.
“Right. They’ve been getting stronger since the birth of the second princess of Antithe two hundred years ago. But, it seems like it’s about time now.” she said with a distant look in her eyes.
“Oh, the second princess of Antithe? I haven't seen her since she was just a little larva. She was absolutely adorable. Wow, it's really been two hundred years already? Maybe I should go visit there after this…”
“Yeah, she is pretty cute. I haven’t been in a while myself, and a vacation doesn’t sound bad at all... Anyways, I’ve sent a group of youngsters to scope out the upper layers. It’s been a while, they should be back by now,” she continued, eyes refocused and sharpened. “But of course, those noble stickups rushed ahead with no clearance once they got word of the resonances strengthening. I can’t help but think something is up.”
“Hah. So you need me to go to thoroughly investigate the resonances, check on the noobies, and see what those idiots have been up to. Is that all?” I asked with a sigh.
“Yep, that pretty much wraps it up,” she nodded.
“Is this a formal request?” I enquired with anticipation creeping into my voice.
“You would charge your own mother for a favor?” She asked, feigning astonishment.
“Of course, I would. I’m a sucker for the shinies.” I shrugged.
“Tch. Fine. I, Uni Dashuri, as Head Guildmaster formally request the aid of Archduchess Murua Amare in the investigation of the resonances as well as the missing adventurers. Happy now?”
“Sure~. I, Murua Amare, accept the request. I’ll be heading out immediately to gather some of the items I need for the trip. We can hash out the details for payment later over some tea. As well as actually catching up, I missed you Mama.” I said, rising from the sofa.
“I missed you too, nugget. Be safe out there, okay?” She replied, getting up and wrapping me in a hug.
I reciprocated the hug with a grin on my face.
“Always.”
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Alright, I’ve had it up to here with these random spurts of pain that somehow magically knocks me out everytime. The whole fading to black shebang lost its novelty after the first time and seems a bit cliche now.
Let me not go down that rabbit hole…whoa!
In the time that I was unconscious, it seems that I had…grown?
Originally in this world, I started off as something I assumed was a seed buried underground. I stayed that way until I had a revelation of sorts.
After that, I sprouted into a pretty little flower with eyes. I found myself in a frozen lake, which I later deducted to be presumably the deepest depths of Hell. After some more self-reflection, I had yet another epiphany…which leads me to right now.
To put it simply, after apologizing to my late mother, I transformed from a flower into a tree. Yep, from seed to flower to tree, within what feels like a couple of days at most. How that's possible is completely unknown to me. I’ll just chalk it up to fantasy world magic shmagic. Is this what people meant when they said they’re built different? If that's the case, I’m feeling very different.
My new…body… was something, to put it lightly. Looking at my reflection on the frozen water, I took in my new appearance.
The trunk was similar to that of a palm tree. Embedded within the trunk were nine crimson eyes.
The eyes were scattered around the circumference of the trunk in seemingly no pattern or thought. I quickly found that they could actually travel around the base of my trunk at my will.
Moving on up, I saw that the comparison to a palm tree stopped at the stalk. From there numerous branches jutted out. If I was asked what tree they reminded me of, I’d have to say a willow tree.
The leaves also were a similar lance-like shape to that of a willow, but I seemed to be a conundrum of all types of trees, as the similarities to a willow tree ended there.
In addition, my new self was adorned with the same flowers I had been myself just sometime before. However, unlike the three that I had before, these were without eyes and were a solid purple. There were also significantly more than three of the angel’s trumpet-like flowers present.
The last distinguishing feature that I could find was the addition of fruit. They looked just like apples. Really appetizing apples. Which is odd to think about, the fact that they’re a part of me, wouldn’t that be like cannibalism? In addition, I have no mouth, or desire to eat, yet I still found myself drooling in my mind for one of them.
Even more interesting was the feeling coursing through me. Something told me I wasn’t finished, far from it.
Apples you say? Hopefully some random scrub doesn’t come along and decide to eat one. Though that would definitely seed some later events i’m sure.
Oooh, spooky foreshadowing..booo!
Sooo... Can they facepalm? I'm a bit stumped.
Also
someone likes to goofy off
Goof.
APEARrently they can’t. What a shame.
apples huh, well I certainly don't want to make assumptions but with all the biblical theming going around right now I can think of one fruit that is typically depicted as apples...
also Miss Archduchess Murua Amare... probably no one important. haha
By all means, assume away! We love assumptions around here. And yeah definitely nobody important….hahaha.
Interesting huh
Glad you think so!
Adam, dim, blooming soul, flower in hell growing into a tree after asking for forgiveness for (one of) his sin, 9 (curious number) eyes, trumpet like flowers. And Apple... Nah, don't tell me about anything and doesn't have any symbolism or meaning
PLEASE illustrate these complex descriptions. I would love to see how it looks after seeing the cover image!
Really? Well okay! I wasn't sure if anyone was all that interested in seeing them. I'll add it to my list of things to do!
@Lulla that and having an illustration makes visualizing the complex scenes a bit easier. Dont if you dont want to, but still it would be cool if you did.
@UppishTheReaper I'm all for it! I won't promise it immediately but eventually I get around to it!
Personally, I'm not a fan of "unannounced" point of view changes. Especially in this instance since it's a first-person point of view from a character we haven't been introduced to yet and they are in settings and talking about things that haven't been introduced yet. When that happens I feel like I missed something, or I'm trying to figure out if this is a dream sequence of the MC or what... Even if the section just started off with something like "Elsewhere..." it could be a little less confusing. :-\
Firstly, thank you for the feedback. Also, sorry for the confusion! It didn't really cross my mind that that could be taken as a dream sequence...or something to that degree. I totally see how it could be though! I was against the (??? POV) route, but something like "Elsewhere..." or "Meanwhile..." could totally clear that up. I'll definitely consider adding that when I get the chance.
greeting me as I entered without taking her eyes off her paperwork. -> me without taking her eyes off her paperwork as I entered.
with new issues," she fiddled with her pen. -> issues." She
As well as Kna'Ve and the girls?" -> How are Kna'Ve
That's excellent," She replied as she moved -> she replied
it's fine," she waved. "Nobody is brave -> fine." She waved her hand around a bit.
They've been getting stronger since the birth of the second princess of Antithe two hundred years ago. But, it seems like it's about time now." she said with a distant look in her eyes. -> ago, but it seems like it's about time now," she
It's been a while, they should be back by now," she continued, -> while and they
pretty much wraps it up," she nodded. -> much sums it up." She
mother for a favor?" She asked, feigning astonishment. -> she
"Of course, I would. -> remove comma
payment later over some tea. As well as actually catching up, I missed you Mama." I said, rising from the sofa. -> tea, as well as actually catchy up. I missed you Mama,"
safe out there, okay?" She replied, getting up and -> she
which I later deducted to be presumably the deepest -> deduced to presumably be the
appearance.
The trunk was similar-> remove space before the
pattern or thought. I quickly found that they -> remove extra space after period
Which is odd to think about, the fact that they're a part of me, wouldn't that be like cannibalism? -> about. Considering the fact that they're part of me, wouldn't that be auto-cannibalism?
feeling coursing through me. Something told me I wasn't -> me; something
"Anyways. How are you? As well as Kna'Ve and the girls?"
"Hey Auntie Tiamat, it has been a while!"
"They've been getting stronger since the birth of the second princess of Antithe two hundred years ago. But, it seems like it's about time now." she said with a distant look in her eyes."
"Hmmm, I spy with my little eye a likely future wifey for MC~"
"I, Murua Amare, accept the request."
"Not Auntie Tiamat?! I feel betrayed!"
"Alright, I've had it up to here with these random spurts of pain that somehow magically knocks me out everytime."
"How high is up to here? Your roots, stem, leaves, petals? Do you wish to leaf it all behind, but feel your barking up the wrong tree?"
"Yep, from seed to flower to tree, within what feels like a couple of days at most."
"Right…'days'. Who wants to tell them it's been hundreds of years? Rip Van Winkle over here has been napping for way longer than they think."
Apples and eyes and stuff-is MC the reincarnation/soul of the tree of knowledge? Now they need a cute angel with a glowstick to act as a girlfriend/bodyguard
Thanks for the corrections/ suggestions!
"Anyways. How are you? As well as Kna'Ve and the girls?"
"Hey Auntie Tiamat, it has been a while!"
Uh-oh.
"They've been getting stronger since the birth of the second princess of Antithe two hundred years ago. But, it seems like it's about time now." she said with a distant look in her eyes."
"Hmmm, I spy with my little eye a likely future wifey for MC~"
Ehehe
"I, Murua Amare, accept the request."
"Not Auntie Tiamat?! I feel betrayed!"
I know I know. I'm sorry. It's still her in essence. I just changed her name to fit with the naming scheme. Don't sue me, please!
"Yep, from seed to flower to tree, within what feels like a couple of days at most."
"Right…'days'. Who wants to tell them it's been hundreds of years? Rip Van Winkle over here has been napping for way longer than they think."
Ignorance is bliss.
@Lulla "I know I know. I'm sorry. It's still her in essence. I just changed her name to fit with the naming scheme. Don't sue me, please!"
Slug-chan-"I'll forgive you this time...you did let me become the cute voice in Alt-Maua's head, so I guess it's ok...And we can always say Murua's nickname/stage name is Tiamat"
“Right. They’ve been getting stronger since the birth of the second princess of Antithe two hundred years ago.
I have a feeling he falls unconcious for much more time than he realises... probably years at a time, and then waking up after a lot of growth.
Hmm...I wonder. Unconscious time skips are the best time skips afterall. And growing into a tree from a flower can't be a quick process.
So, they have no mouth? I hope for them that they don't like screaming, wouldn't want to be stuck in that kind of hell.
Yep. No mouth, but they're more the quiet type so it's not that bad. Other than the still being in hell part.
@Lulla The soil in hell hasn't been depleted by competition, so it's probably pretty good.
@DschingisKhan True. Plus dead bodies make for great fertilizer.