Menu
Read
Series Ranking
Series Finder
Random Series
Latest Series
Genre
Create
Forum
Scribble HubCreateForum
/ Profile / Plume
Plume
Member
Joined
Jul 22, 2020
Followers
16
Following
6
Comments
174

Follow
Plume
Member
Follow
Joined: Jul 22, 2020
Followers: 16
Following: 6
Comments: 174

I'm Fox-cubbus uwu

TranslateAmerican · Jun 7, 2022

What happened to the abyss within?

Plume · Jun 7, 2022

the thing that was stressing me, was there is a lot of stuff I want to fix because I was a very inexperienced author when I started writing it (still am) and I felt too much pressure about taking the time to fix the problems I have with it and not posting anything new in the meantime.

I'm probably either going to finish writing it before posting it or at least have a decent enough backlog that I don't feel too much pressure over it.

Plume · Jun 7, 2022

Maybe when I'm a much more experienced author I'll be able to post stuff without a backlog and not worry about it but for now I am not ^^

It was starting to feel much more like a job and less like something I wanted to do because I liked it, sorry about that.

Plume · Jun 7, 2022

rest assured, I still have it on a google doc and I'm still working on it.

TranslateAmerican · Jun 8, 2022

Ok, thanks for letting us know! I’m just glad that I got a reason for it instead of you just randomly disappearing one day. Good luck with the writing!

OfficiallyZoe · May 14, 2022

Thanks for the follow clear.png

Plume · May 22, 2022

Yw ! I really like y9ur stories! I also discovered recently that I even knew you before, from reading 6our stuff on tgstorytime

OfficiallyZoe · Mar 30, 2022

Thank you so much for the review, it was lovely!

Plume · Mar 30, 2022

it was very much deserved! Thank YOU for sharing your wonderful story <3

Meowknight · Dec 27, 2021

I think you're going to be one of those people who get famous on here

Plume · Dec 27, 2021

why is that? :P

Meowknight · Dec 27, 2021

I don't know how to explain it I guess I just got that feeling clear.png

vadis · Nov 3, 2021

Thank you for reading Maven! For more free stuffs from Everna Saga, visit linktr.ee/everna.

TearCRF · Sep 8, 2021

Thanks again for the feedback. As a new author, I'm always looking for ways to improve in my writing, so getting your opinion is appreciated. I had two questions for you. First, were there any other issues that you could point out with my story, characters, setting, writing, etc? Second, could you read the remaining chapters that are posted and provide feedback for those as well? Feel free to decline, but I'd love to hear your thoughts on most recent chapters. Thanks again for the feedback.

8 comments
Plume · Sep 9, 2021

You could've also tried introducing the first few fairies by giving a PoV of how they got sent after the storm before meeting the main character.

I think the problem here is you tried to do too much of both and ended up getting something that succeeded in neither.

Plume · Sep 9, 2021

Lastly, try not to give people too many different names/terms to remember at once, I saw myself having to backtrack a few times in your story because I had forgotten who was who (and eventually abandoned doing that and stop caring about these characters entirely until they were more relevant to the plot).

Plume · Sep 9, 2021

I was currently at chapter 15 and I'll give a try to the rest.

Although I don't want to make you hate your story though or take away your pleasure of writing, I know I'm very difficult so don't let my critique go too much over your head! There were points I really liked (notably the settings, all the lore behind the fairies and the magic stuff was really cool).

Plume · Sep 9, 2021

if you wanna talk about it more on discord, feel free to send me an invite at Mood#7777 <3

    Reading List
    Recent Activity
    Personal Information
    Last Active: Jun 27, 2022 12:47 AM
    Birthday: Nov 18, 1993
    Gender: Female
    Location: Second Circle of Hell
    Homepage: --
    About

    I'm Fox-cubbus uwu

    Author Information
    Series: 0
    Total Words: 0
    Total Pageviews: 0
    Reviews Received: 0
    Readers: 0
    Followers: 16
    Default Title
    \
    Reported Message in Quotes
    Test
    Error Message
    The following error occurred:
    Report Comment
    guy said:
    Reported Message in Quotes
    Action Required
    You must be logged in to perform this action.