Issei Hyoudou POV:
After coming out of Matsuda’s room, I headed towards the fountain in the park where Yuuma-chan killed me, I kept thinking about the past week, everything seems to be a dream but yet it feels all real.
I was attacked by a guy in trench cat and a fedora who called me a ‘stray’, I didn’t know what that was but the sky was a weird colour like it was in Yuuma-chan time and he had black crow wings like her.
He attacked me with a blue spear of light but before I react a bolt of lightning destroyed the spear and I saw Akeno-senpai and the pretty boy Kiba with a sword too.
I didn’t understand what was happening, they told that guy that I am a member of Gremory household, which I didn’t understand, isn’t Gremory the surname of Rias-senpai, how can I be a member of her household.
The guy left after some fighting but before he left he mentioned his name as Dohnaseek.
After that I followed them back school to the Occult Research Club where they said I would receive my explanation.
There I saw Rias senpai sitting behind a desk on a room lit only with candles, which does go with the theme of the club.
Anyway what information I received was a shocking one, that apparently what happened last week was all true and I am no longer human, I was reincarnated as devil to save my life.
Also the reason Yuuma-chan targeted me is cause apparently I have something called a sacred gear but I couldn’t even call it, so I have doubts whether I have it or not.
Everything was too difficult to take in, also I heard something strange that apparently what happened to me today was already known beforehand, so they went to help me but when I asked I was told it’s nothing.
And finally I was told I would meet the rest of the members tomorrow so I should go home now and come tomorrow after school.
So I left with a lot of questions in my mind.
Rias Gremory POV:
Sometime later after Akeno and Kiba left, they arrived with Issei and Akeno said,” Ara ara it looks like the information was correct”.
I couldn’t believe what I was seeing but had to accept it, so I gave Issei the details of his current circumstances, at first he refused to believe it and rightfully so but in the end I showed him proof of Yuuma’s photo and he accepted it.
He then asked about how we knew about today’s situation but I decided it was not my secret to tell even if he did say to let my peer members know, it’s better if he says it himself so I dodged the question and told him to come tomorrow to meet the rest of my peerage, he looked like he was going to complain but decided to leave.
I sighed after he left and contemplated what to do.
Koneko then came back after some time and said, “He went to the park near the school sat on a bench, sighed a few times thinking about something , then went straight home, nothing suspicious”.
“Ara ara turns out he wasn’t lying and his future prediction actually helped us, so what would you do Buchou?”, asked Akeno with a smile.
Rias frowned and went deep into thought.
Akira Suzuki POV:
After I left the ORC I decided to head to the park near the school to get some fresh air.
I bought a drink from a nearby vending machine and sat on park bench and sighed.
That was close, I was terrified when they got into positions to fight and it took all my will power to remain calm.
To be honest I am glad to be back in one piece. I sighed again.
Well I have done what I can, now it depends of what happens and my luck, I can only hope, I want me and my parents to be safe.
Also I hope issei’s safe.
Anyway I got up after finishing the drink and went home.
Gotta rest well tonight tomorrow is the main event, it’s make or break, either they believe me or don’t believe me but as long as it’s only that it’s not too bad, worst case scenario, they might see me as a threat and attempt to eliminate me. I shuddered, no think positive thoughts, I know the future and what I said will happen, let’s hope for the best.
I wanted to be sure that the story will go better later but I was wrong (your Mc disappointed me , he told them everything like that without making a deal with them?😑
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I was just thinking something similar. Being a normal human, Rias can hypnotize him, find out everything he knows, change his memories and that's the end of this story here.
@Chouzenfox Sigh...And what's the merit of that here? First of all Rias has yet to believe his story here, so she needs proof before she does something and besides more importantly he is willing to tell her everything and ask almost nothing in return, if she can get the information without doing anything why the hell will she do that?
@Newbie101 Because how does she know that he is telling her everything? Would she really believe that this random human who can predict/know the future told her everything that happened? That he is not lying or hiding certain details in order to benefit himself later? Another possibility is that he could just forget to say something. I doubt he remembers every second/scene of the anime. . If the mind reading technique is strong enough to get all the details, it would be more reliable than him remembering on his own.
Much easier and safer to kidnap him and hypnotize, read his mind, or what ever magic to him to make sure she gets all the info. Even if she didn't want to "dirty" her hands she could just tell her older brother about the mc. There is no contract or anything in place to stop her from doing that.
@KidBuu699
If you read ahead [more than 2 chapters], you will find out why it is impossible for Rias to hypnotize him.
There is something special with him that stops such low level magic.....
@Harem-Fan Bro at this point in time does the mc know that? The mc is just a regular human who doesn't even think he has a sacred gear.
Even if he doesn't think Rias has the ability or will to do anything to him to force the knowledge out, whats stopping her brother from finding out and trying? Either her slipping the information to him or him just "hearing" about it. With how much of a sis-con her brother was, it would surprise me if her club room is bugged.
@KidBuu699
If this bothers you then stop reading it..[we are on chapter 23 and you are still debating chapter 6]....its DxD, like does half of what they do make sense??....I mean it has a "boob grabbing kids show" for goodness sake....try not to loose sleep over it...its already written, its done, the author is not changing it, It is set in stone...move on, drink some camomile tea...The story is great for the majority, sorry it offends you. Seriously it is not a big deal it is not real life.
@Harem-Fan
Bro why are you making a big deal about this? Its a fan fic on the internet. I made a point about him not covering his ass by making a deal. You are acting like I told the author that this whole thing is terrible. I'm guessing you're friends with him or something to get this uptight about it.
P.s Dropped it a couple of chapters ahead of this. Good luck bro.
@KidBuu699 I know you said you dropped it but I still wanted to make this comment about your opinion. See the thing is, even if she does that, I mean read his mind how is that even a bad thing to him? I mean he said it himself, all he wanted was others not knowing that he knows the future, nothing else. If she and her brother found out every secret from him , they wouldn't surely share it with an enemy because it will be their loss as it will only help them. So even if that happens the MC would have also achieved his goal, as his main goal was to make them aware of their future. So I don't see the problem in doing this.
@Harem-Fan That only works if he stops it with his sacred gear, so no it is possible to hypnotize him.
@Newbie101
Just I thought I would point out why I dropped the story and I'm just being honest here not trying to insult it or anything.
I didn't drop it because of him not making a good decision. Life is full of people not making good decisions.
In my opinion there are two types of fan fiction stories.
The first is a different path/plot from the original story. I'm going to use One Piece as an example. So in this path it would be a character going on different islands or story line from the main cast. So the reader has a new experience in the world that they already know.
The second is new or different character following the same plot. So it would be like the mc reincarnated as a crew member or joined the crew. Same overall story, just different ways the events could play out.
You are going with the second option so here comes the big question. . . . What makes your story interesting? What makes the story worth reading? What makes it stand out from the other DxD fan fiction? The best ways to do this is either the main character or powers that makes the reader want to read.
Being honest I wasn't a fan of the new character. Wasn't a fan of his personality or path. He just felt like a character that was going with the flow so not standing out or doing what he wants. . . So I read up until he got his powers and wasn't really that interested but thats more personal bias than anything.
To finish this off don't take me dropping the story as anything personal. The "hooks" just wasn't my cup of tea.
Good luck with this story and any others you write.
-Buu
Edit: Side note about it being a harem story. Usually with harems the girls themselves are more important than the mc. However, you are doing a fan fic so we already know the girls. Perhaps the hook is that the mc actually dates the girls, since Issei failed pretty much every time in the anime, but with the mc's personality so far I don't really see him as trying to date/win over any of the girls.
@KidBuu699 It's ok, you don't have to give any explanation as to why you dropped this story. I am writing this story based on my taste and so it's obvious there will be people who won't like it cause they have different tastes. Everyone is different so no problems on that. And I just gave you that explanation because of that point you made and it has nothing to do with asking explanation to why you left. You are free to do whatever you want everyone is.
And also why would I think it's personal? Lol . We are both strangers in the internet so of course it will not be personal.
So don't worry about it and have a great day.
@Newbie101 You never know with people on these sites. Some authors like the criticism and having mistakes(spelling, grammer, etc.) pointed out because they are trying to improve themselves. Others are just writing as a for fun and don't really care. Never know who you will get so I usually start with "not trying to insult or to be d*ck."
Also good attitude to have. Way too many take things personal on the internet.
Still best of luck.
@KidBuu699 Thank you.
I think you people forget that this is a harem/ecchi world and on top of that, Rias is just not the 'smart' kind of character nor is just too cold of a person even to outsiders. If she can do things the peaceful way she will, hell, she's even lazy until future events call for her to truly try so this is expected.
@Newbie101 Once they get the knowledge you don’t think the mou will get rid of him? That so stupid simce hes the leader of the faction. If the mc gets his mind read and the encounter wiped from his memories and tries the same thing again but they reject him because it already happened he might go to the fallen faction or heaven. Pretty sure they are not taking that chance of his giving this info to the other factions. The only options they have are to kill him or turn him into a devil. Because he’s just some rando they dint know or trust. Him being there giving this info is the most ret*rded sh*t ever especially when he has no idea he can’t be mind controlled