Enormous AU DxD, Big Crossover with Mechanical God Emperor AU, Cultivation Elements (like WMW), Cross-Overs, Self-insert, World Building, Kingdom Building, Wars, Polyamory, Slow-Romane at Start, Multiple Universes, not every chapter is fight or war, no pokemon catching, no MC centric novel... This is not a novel where there exists a single character which is MC, this isn't a novel where MC gets all female characters, and MC isn't any kind of playboy/alpha male or a natural seducer
In this novel, there would be a focus on side characters, kingdom-building elements, other people besides MC, and their fates and lives, (as I try to take some elements from Western Fantasy and combine them with elements of the Eastern Fantasy). Additionally, in my world, which is created from multiple Universe, MC isn't a single Transmigrator, there are countless reincarnators, transmigrators, or people similar to that... (1st I wanted my MC to be special not for something that was not even his devise but rather his Power / Personality / History. 2nd reason is I have always found it unrealistic that in enormous worlds, across all time and space, only MC was reincarnated.)
Read this and think before you start reading something that you know you won't like and then review and comment how you don't like something that has been tagged already... Such comments and reviews will be instantly deleted. I am automatically deleting all of such comments and reviews as it is in the description and tags so you have been warned. The reason is... that is not reviewing or commenting but just whining and hating cause some people don't have something they want to have to compensate for the lack of some things in their own life. (It is wonderful what can a bit of psycho-analysis do).
So if you are interested in some random depressed otaku becoming omniversal entity cathing pokemon harem within 5 chapters go and read something else.
Here is nothing you want. So go and bother someone else or even better write something by yourself and then you will have to deal with these things as well.
Right.... look, this ain't for me. But comparing chapter 1 to this... word vomit? does your story a huge disservice. Because just skimming over chapter 1, its clear chapter 1 is much more polished than the disclaimer.
If my first impression was chapter 1 rather than the disclaimer, I'd have a much more favorable impression and give your story a shot even though I know it's probably not in my wheelhouse. When I see the disclaimer, I see misspelled words, long paragraphs that could probably be broken up, etc.
Just my opinion, take it as you will. I appreciate the heads up and the purpose of the disclaimer, just aesthetically it leaves a lot to be desired. Especially as a first impression that chapter 1 immediately remedies. Hope this helps!
-Contradiction
If there was no word vomit, the author won’t get as many of those ‘certain reviews’ as I have been compulsively doing exactly that lol. Just the whine here alone makes me want to…oh I’m already doing it. My bad 😂
2nd reason is I have always found it unrealistic that in enormous worlds, across all time and space, only MC was reincarnated
valid point
I haven't read, but I can tell this isn't for me. Don't get me wrong, your ideas seem splendid! But it just isn't for me. I dislike stories where there's more than one reincarnator, sure you can find it realistic and I somewhat agree but let's be honest. In a realistic scenario, multiple reincarnates in a single world will result in pure and utter chaos as the plot that should've happened becomes so twisted it can't even be followed anymore.
This in MY OPINION, making myself clear there, is a huge turn-off. In an original story, then sure this can be done and it will be okay since the reincarnates will simply do their own thing and affect the world as they go.
But in fanfics? We're here to see the MC make changes to the story we know and see how that affects the plot, not a bunch of other people that realistically, unless you somehow make them incredibly intricate and likeable to the readers, we won't give a sh*t about them and they'll be plain annoyances in the grand scheme of things as they'll make their own changes to the plot.
You see my point now? In an original story I would applaud you but in my humble opinion, using the idea of multiple reincarnates in one world is plain blasphemy in a fanfiction, even if it's an AU since when you search for a fanfic you expect the plot to at least keep some semblance of what it's meant to be but I don't see that happening here.
Well enough with my rant, I'm going in circles now. This is merely my opinion and if I ever grow bored I may give this a shot but otherwise, have a good day fellow author.
Your damn right i also wanted to say the same thing its simply unrealistic to do that
Its just my fingers will really hurt from typing on the keyboard and had no patience for explaining all of that
Actually i really like the way the author think but in fanfaction it will just complicate things unnecessarily
I've just recently taken "cultivation" off my blocked tags just to see if there are any stories on the fringe like this that don't go completely off the rails and just throw the word in just incase it pulls some of that audience.
I can't stand cultivation worlds for three main reasons, the constant overuse of swords, the constant nerfing of the protagonist because of their shitty prestige system and the non-translated names. Primarily its the middle one and what I mean by that is how the novel essentially goes on 2000 chapters by exclusively neutering the mc every time he gets strong by introducing him to a "new realm" or something which just sets him back to level 1 so he can work his way up again.
"Prestiging" or "realms" can be alright if they're done correctly and it's more cumulative rather than just resetting the story all the time, something I'd recommend if you're having alot of reviews from people who aren't the target audience is to tell them what you do specifically rather than general genres since they've got such vague meanings.
For example authors very very rarely tell the reader what kind of "build" the mc is going to have despite it being arguably equally as important as their entire personality or world which can lead to alot of people (myself on a regular basis) going into novels, getting invested and them being disappointed when it turns out to be something they dislike (the swordsman/knight trope for me).
This novel is just not for me it has a lot of pov and mc sometimes o feel side character are also an a mc too its also overly complicated and has a lot of drama and unnecessarily things of course its also has it Pros but its just not for me
🖕kinda wish I could make that bigger. oh well, good luck with your story 😁
if your harem doesn't have wincest, is it even a harem?
is the mc a member in the polyyamory,?
What is WMW and MGE?
Warlock of the Magus World and Mechanical God Emperor
Lol i still don't see the point of you writing all the sh*t up there. You seem like an insecure guy really. No work is perfect and all do get criticism for something. You just come off as an assh0le which you really are. 🖕🖕
Thx I try to be...
And I see the point of disclaimer... on the webnovel, people almost revolted that they were not warned about these things mentioned above and dropped the novel... so I just put up the disclaimer up there and tags of what to await there and not then listen to ramblings of idiots who don't know how to read properly
@Trafford That's Webnovel, anyone insane enough to wade through the literal sh*t on that site for a couple good novels don't deserve opinions.
But yeah, you came off a bit aggressive in the disclaimer lol. At least sh*t won't catch me by surprise later on
@Ethedon Webnovel is literarily shitplace sometimes... everybody is there only for pokémon catching and harems large as f*ck... anything else is disposable...
@Ethedon Though I knew that if people weren't warned about the multiversal aspect many wouldn't even read if they were beforehand... on webnovel there is a great tendency to start good stories and drop them... especially cross-overs.
@Trafford That's what tags are for fam
Not tagging the major shits like yaoi,harem,fem/male mc, multiverse,etc sh*t from the start, is the writer's mistake.
Even for the undecided sh*t like if this will be harem or not, or is this going to be a jumpchains a warning should be given either in synopsis or in the tag.
@Trafford Fair enough, to be honest though, just ignore them. People will still read your novel if they like it, bad reviews or not.
@Trafford Plus the paywalls