That is the end of volume three!
Finally...it was a rather long volume than my first and second volume.
I've reflected on advice given at the survey on volume 2 and tried to improve the quality of my story, what do you think?
Questions:
(1 being the worst, 5 being the best)
1. How was the plot in volume 3? (1 to 5)
2. Who is your favourite character in volume 3?
3. Is the pace comfortable? or too fast/slow/unstable.
4. I tried changing my style of writing a little bit to incorporate more descriptive writing. How would you rate it? (1 to 5)
5. How is the world building in this volume? (1 to 5)
6. What other suggestions do you have?
Thank you very much for reading this far and for your responses!
Here are some bonuses:
Female Samuel:
Lena in a white dress:
Rosy:
Lastly, the story will be on a hiatus. Thank you for the support and understanding!
Bruh what is going on with the mc's love life all of sudden you can't just reply in emoji and leave without explaining nothin🧀
Samuel reveals his identity. Rena talks to Samuel and thanks him. Seeing Rena open up catches Samuel off guard.
I'm not sure what to explain without specifics into what you don't understand.
@STakeshi no I cant understand why is he falling in love suddenly, I haven't seen any signs of romance in this novel but it just suddenly sprouts and he gets flustered a bit for some reason or has it just been developing and I haven't noticed?
@Booney I get what you mean. When Rena thanked him unexpectedly, he was captivated by Rena's smile. In a way, you can say he fell in love with her smile, something like spontaneous love.
FYI, He's not "head over heels" for Rena. Not to that extent.
Quite difficult to put into words what I tried to convey. Thus, I placed an image for a better impact.
thank you so much for the chapter keep it up Don't give up on your dreamsAlright author rest Be strong you will go far
thx for the book
1. 4
2. Rena
3. the pace was id say a 4 some spots went a little fast but for most of the story is was just perfect
4. 4
5. 3 it was okay
6. occasionally do a chapter on just days for him to calm himself down if say he kills a bunch of people. or dates with Rena
also i really enjoyed the story so far and good luck with your schooling/education
1 - 3
2- samuel... sadly in my opinion u could give. More screen time to the side characters
3 - mostly good there was some parts that was too slow
4-4
5-3
6 - the story is good enough